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sniper_riza

PostPosted: Sun May 17, 2009 9:06 pm


Comments and critiques are loved. ^^;;
Most of these images are for my Furcadia RP character, some are gifts for friends.

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Gift art. ^^
PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:30 pm


i really like the figure a and b but on figure a the higher foot seems like its been turned to much
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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 6:48 pm


Very cute faces and I really like the eyes =)
I'd suggest though, for your line art, maybe trying some thin to thick lines? It's a good way to also suggest shadow without even having to do any additional coloring or line shading biggrin
It's a nifty trick :3
PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 7:57 pm


i remember furcadia.....
they havent changed much, and my favorite world shut down ~.~ so i quit ages ago


although i accidently changed the look of algeria somehow sweatdrop

that was really weird XD

but that was yrs ago lol


awesome pics btw heart

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 8:30 am


Umi-tomboy
i really like the figure a and b but on figure a the higher foot seems like its been turned to much
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From a martial artists perspective I'd say the foot is anotomically done right. When you're stepping into a side kick (yoko geri, sorry karate terminology) the foot you're balancing on really gets turned out like that if you deliver the kick with enough height, power and forward momentum.

Nit picking though... the right knee should be bent slightly to show the character is more grouned with solid balance (a kick actually hitting the target would more likely send your own character flying).

Secondly, though this might be personal preference, I'd keep the right arm up off the leg and in a more ready position so when the character steps down she's in a better position stepping down to attack or defend as necessary. And it would show a character more confident in their techniques. An arm down like that almost says, "I'm ready to fall down and catch myself now."

You're art style is very nice. Everything is well thought out. The body is anatomical and moves naturally. The wrinkles in the clothes are nicely placed to emphasise you're character's movements. Some properly placed speed lines and effects would bring the action scenes to life and make it easier to read the motion.

Keep working hard and polishing your style of art ^_^
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 3:41 pm


Thanks for all the suggestions guys. ^^ I really appreciate them.

sniper_riza


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PostPosted: Thu May 21, 2009 7:47 pm


Your fight fight posts are very movement/action-like. (Lots of facial emotions are good too)
The hair on the first one looks sort of strange, I mean covering one eye, but not the other; and I like your side profiles.
PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2009 1:25 am


Finished another one... and now my sketchbook died D:

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Through the Looking Glass.

Cliche' name, but it fits. xP

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:23 pm


hmmm nice indeed. smile
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