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iRawk_Solid's RPC: Kagai (arrancar)

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iRawk_Solid

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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 5:18 pm


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Name: Kagai
Aliases/ Nicknames: NA
Age: appears to be in late teens/early twenties, but actual age is unknown
Seat: used to be number two, but was long ago terminated from position
Height: 6'1"
Weight: approximately 160 lbs.
Personality: quick thinking, tricky, sly, insane, homicidle, and likes toying with his enemies and allies
Theme Song(s): Duality - Slipknot, ******** the System - System of a Down
Physical Description: Skinny, yet noticable muslcular body. Raggedy black hair. Yellow-red eyes and black where it is supposed to be white. Pupils have slits. Jacket is torn and there are three scratches through his number two tattoo. No actual shirt on underneath his jacket and his pant legs have multiple tears in them. His clothes show they have been completely worn out. He wears a hooded cloak over himself so he is unrecognizable.

Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description: Corruptione: Looks like your usual katana, but the blade color itself is completely black, along with the hilt.

Resurrección (Returning Blade)
"Cry Havoc, Corruptione!"
His body is covered in a skeletal system of a dragon, the head and mouth acting as a helmet.

-Release Attacks
His ceros become flame-like and black as night. Balas also become flame-like and black. Can create blades made from cero energy using his hands His speed is greatly increased along with quicker reflexes.



Hougudo
(knows none)



Skills:
Has skills in both long-range and short-range attacks. Good with close combat, even if his skills seem unorthodox. Best at using his fists, but has a good swordsmanship skill.


Bio:
Kagai's acutal origin is unknown, but some say he was created as a manefestation of the evils of power, hate, and corruption, which would help in explaining his insanity. His true origin is kept secret, but he does agree to some rumors asked of him. Kagai was a former number two espada during times before Aizen. He had been defeated by a shinigami that had cut three scars onto his tattoo, and badly injuring Kagai all over his body. Kagai managed to escape back into Hueco Mundo, slowly healing and trying to regain his power. Even over the centuries, he has only been able to get up to around a Vice Captain's level, but he feels that he will soon gain more power. He now plots against Hueco Mundo and the Sereitei, secretly trying to gather followers. He realized that the more he had under his influence, the easier it was for his power to return. Now, he wanders inbetween the human realm and Hueco Mundo's sands.

PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 6:50 pm



You need more.
Your personality should be expanded a little bit.
Your description is lacking greatly. What does his apparel look like? On the same note, you might want to get a better scan of the picture.
You need to explain more on your Resurrection. Do you get any specific abilities that are different from everyone else? What is it that makes you better than everyone else?
I don't believe you are allowed to know Hougudo, you just remove that section.
Your bio could be extended a bit as well. What made you insane?





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iRawk_Solid

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 4:41 pm


Sorry, I probably can't get a better scan of it at the moment. I've been busy. Once I do, though, I'll try to replace that one.
Unfortunately, there isn't much to his bio. He's moreover an unknown person these days, unlike when he used to be an espada... I'll see if I can think of some other things for his bio and stuff. I kinda made this profile in a hurry.
PostPosted: Fri May 22, 2009 4:20 pm


|-_Vaizard Yomiko Shihouin_-|
|-_A Former Captain currently in exile. What's new?._-|
"When you deal with a man, deal with his most valuable possession, his life. There's play and there's the deep flow. I like to take things to the deep flow of play, because everything is a game, serious and nonserious at the same time. So play life like it's a game..."
-Huey P. Newton


Just like Shinigami, Arrancar are allowed to have Hougudo's ...
Specifically 1, 7, and 17 when they are first starting out.
The list is Here
^^;;
Just to clear that up.
So add that in there.

I agree. Add some more to the personality as well.
It doesn't need to be two or three paragraphs long, but try to elaborate a little bit more.



They said I couldn't play football I was too small.
They say I couldn't play basketball I wasn't tall.
They say I could'n't play baseball at all.
And now everyday of my life I ball.


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iRawk_Solid

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 12:33 pm


Yomi, Yomi, Yomi... Obviously you can't tell I like old school arrancars. ;P
I can probably mention sometime later in the RP that he hates the idea of Hougudo.
Anyway... I added a little more to his personality... So... Ya...
I know it's been over month, but, ya... Kinda got busy...
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