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 Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 7:38 pm
 Rp by The Real Lemon Citrus
Graphics found and edited on Photobucket.com
Dolls found on DreamofDoll.com
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Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 7:56 pm
Story As she slept... the horror grew...
Claribel was the daughter of a wealthy noble. When she falls victim to a horrible accident she is pulled into a coma. No one is now allowed to visit her because anyone who touches her is pulled into her dream.
Claribel was a fairly popular girl though. She had so many friends and admirers. Many people have visited her, and many, if not all, have disappeared after touching her. Once the victim is in her dream though, they forget all their memories of Claribel. But their misplaced memories are replaced with an undying adoration towards the girl. They are loyal to Claribel although they don't know why.
Claribel's dream is truely a dream though. Sounds too cheesy, right? Her dream is completely white, and completely looks pure. All the tree's leaves have silver leave and the waters are clear. The sky is always eerily clear, that is, unless Claribel is unhappy. When that does happen, then the leaves and flowers die and the waters become murky and dark.
Food appears like magic in the fridge and beds are made when the owners aren't looking. It seems like they never get dirty although there is a bath there to accommodate them if they want a bath anyways. The people all live in a place that's like a doll house with almost infinite rooms.
There's a catch though. Everyone is turned into dolls that looks just how Claribel saw them as, not how they looked like from the outside. When the people go into the dream they turn into dolls. They have very soft skin that almost feels like human skin. They can feel, touch, smell, taste but they are just dolls. Hard to break dolls. Even if they fell out the roof, they can merely be scratched. Forever trapped in a youthful body. Wonderful, right?
The type of government of the dolls is fairly simple really. There is a King and a Queen and a Jack. In fact, their type of 'government' is fairly the same as the rules in a deck of cards.
Hard to imagine dolls bleeding, right? Well, they can. The only times that a doll has died though was by the hands of another doll. The joker. They are constantly looking for this joker because it was said that this killer is looking to kill Claribel. When the dolls die, they lose all previous memories that they had in the dream Claribel had made and appear at the lake side after they die as if nothing had happened but, they are sent to the bottom of the ranks. Therefore, if the king dies, the queen, oddly enough, becomes king.
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Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 8:17 pm
Guidelines [L i t e r a c y]
I'm fairly lenient on literacy but what bothers me the most is when a person writes only three sentences in a post. I'm not saying you should go write a book per post. At least six sentences per post. I understand writers block but, I'm sure that you can write more than just six sentences. :]
[R e a d i n g]
Please try to read everyone's post, even if you think it might not concern you, It's a good thing to know who's where and such without needing to ask. This also avoids the problems of people being ignored, which I know, is a major pet peeve for several people, such as myself.
[G o d]
Is someone I am not. I still hold a lot of power in this rp which includes the power to delete certain posts. If I see anything of the explicit nature, I will have no problem with deleteing that post and reporting that user.
[F o r m a t t i n g]
Honestly, I love the extravagantly gorgeous posts. Formatting is something that is not exactly a must but I do encourage it. Please though, don't put up a picture with little text. That's the one thing that annoys me about certain people's formatting.
[S e n d i n g P r o f i l e s]
On the Profile Thread section, there are a load of characters. But spots are limited so start reserving fast! Also, Pm the filled out forms to me with the title of the rp. Oh right, one more thing! Be VERY careful and recheck your profile before sending to me. I have several kinks here and there that I didn't catch while making the rp so please forgive me!
[J o k e r]
The joker will be assigned by me so that it's a mystery for you guys! Unfortunately it won't be a mystery for me, but whatever. I'm omniscient~!
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 5:47 pm
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