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A comfortable literate roleplay based on the series Bleach. Non-Stat based. 

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:44 am


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Name: Voldo Vercci
Aliases/ Nicknames: V
Age: 500
Height: 5'11''
Weight: 150lbs
Personality: Voldo is very cold in nature. He doesnt like the disrespectful actions of the youth. He can be synical and harsh towards others. When in battle he will pick at a persons mind untill they crack.
Theme Song(s): Shell- witch hunter robin.
Physical Description: Weighs 150lbs. Is athleticly built. He is about 5'11''. He wears black clothes and a mask to hide his face. His hair is semi long and a dark shade of brown/black . The mask he wears is a guy fox mask to hide his real face. Under the mask he has brilliant emerald green eyes which shine in the light. He hase abnormaly pale skin because he doesn't go out in the light much.

Doll Name: Dellusia
Doll Appearance: Dellusia is large in size, about 6'7''. It has one eye and huge shoulders. It has large arms and large claws... but no legs. Instead it floats in the air.

Picture of Doll:
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Sealed:(*Not accomplished*) In its seal form it take the shape of a pair of claw gauntlets, one of which has an eye. These gauntlets are useful for closerange combat which Voldo is used to. But they can also be used in ranged combat with the use of certain skills that Voldo has created. these gauntlet claws will allow him to alter his own spirit energy to either hide himself or to boost his own power. these claws can also copy skills that other people use. These skills are only half as powerful as the original atack that they copy.

Skills

Illusionary atack- This skill allows Voldo to use spirit energy to boost his speed to the point where he is moving fast enough that it looks like there is more than one Voldo.

Skill copy- The gauntlet with the eye will blink copying any skill it sees and giving it to Voldo. Voldo will then be able to use this skill.


Released:(*not accomplished*) In this form Dellusia will reveal itself. in this from is shoulders can act as a shield proteced by spirit energy. It can also steal spirit energy through the hole in its body. In this form Dellusia can alter the fabricts of reality somewhat. By using spirit energy is can create realistic illusions and make them become real. These illusions although illusions can atack and do damage. He can only make five illusions at a time.

Fused:(*Not accomplished*) when fused together. Voldo gains a third eye which gives him all of Dellusia's abilities. In this form Voldo's Spirit energy is increased ten fold. He also can copy skills used against him. He can only make ten illusions at a time.

Fused Skills

Illusion control- gaining the power to creat living illusions Voldo can now create mass amounts of illionsions at will. He can only make at the most ten illusions.

Skill copy- Voldo can in this form copy virtualy any skill he sees.

Skills: Through his years of life he has spent his time traveling and training in virtualy every martial arts there is.
Bio:Voldo Was born in a small villiage near the sea. Due to his blood lineage people shunned him and cast him out. Near the time he was fifteen he finaly found out what he was. Scared of the truth he ran away. by the time he was twenty he finaly hit the point where the knowledge could not be ignored. He spent the remianing thirty years traveling. Not aging a single day after the day he turned twenty. He wore a maski to hide his secret and traveling all over the world by foot learning as much as he could. One day he found himself in a monestary where they trained in martial arts as a way of repentance. He asked if he could join in the monestary for a short time to repenbt on his sins. Sins of which he though he was born with. He thought the very fact he was alive was a sin. During his time there he became the "most powerful" fighter in the monestary. Due to his anger and needs of repentance they kicked him out. He spent the remainder of his days punishing those who sinned and studying in every fighting style there was along the way to his path to repent his very existance.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:53 pm


Hmm. A couple things. Your written description and picture don't match. Could you get a different picture please? Also, your abilities are a bit over powered. Could you state some restrictions? Like for your copy ability, a time limit along with only using one at a time. The size of your illusions should have some sort of limit too. Illusionary attack also seems way too overpowered for a sealed/released ability. Stuff like that. Also, remember that you do not start with your doll.

Do you see what I mean?

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 11:37 am


I dont mean to argue but how does the written description not match the picture.

it clearly states that

1.) he wears black clothes.

2.) he wears a guy fox mask.

3.)he has semi long dark brown/black hair.

If these dont match the description then I dont know what does.


other than the decription i have changed everything els. Please let me know if there is more.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 12:34 pm


2) he wears a guy fox mask

I guess I don't understand the meaning of the word fox, since that makes me think this. Google seems to agree with you though, so I'll drop it.

Let me read through again.

Edit: Ok, you still need to change it so that you don't have your doll yet, and I'd still like you to cut back of your abilities a bit. Mostly illusionary attack.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 11:32 am


i have changed what you asked. if there is anything more i should do let me know.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 2:01 pm



There are some discontinuities in your numbers. In your Sealed Form's description, you list you can make up to five illusions where your ability's description says up to ten.

And you do not start off with your Doll. Put
*Not Achieved* at the beginning of you Doll's description as well as the descriptions of all three states.





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PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:13 am


i have fixed the number problems. and have made it so that i dont have a doll.

if there is any more i can do let me know. wink
PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:39 pm



You're set to go. You can go and have fun around the Living World now, though you might want to take it slow as the Bount Kadaver is on leave for a few weeks.

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