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 Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 4:55 pm
 чøυ'яε ηøтħιηg §ρεcιαℓ, чøυ'яε α §кεℓεтøη кεчOkay, so I'm going to use this thread to post my own poetry. Some of it will be old, some of it new, whatever.
Feel free to read over some of it, give feedback, correct any typo's, etc.
The post below this one will be a list of what I've posted, mainly for me to keep track.
Please don't post your own poetry in here. Do feel free to make your own thread, though.
:3 Status >in want of arts, please?
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 4:57 pm
чøυ'яε ηøтħιηg §ρεcιαℓ, чøυ'яε α §кεℓεтøη кεч POETRY I'VE POSTED
1. Back To Hope page 1
2. Going Out Tonight page 1
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:01 pm
Back To Hope
1 March, 2008
Maybe tonight will be the night
That blood doesn’t spill across the floor
And the darkness won’t kill my dreams
In the purity of the celestial flower
I pray for forgiveness
Rekindle the fire in my sickened spirit
Let this night be one of stars
That will illuminate a merciful path
And under the violet eclipse
I beg for a salvation of hearts
Bring light back into my shadows
And give me a pillar to lean against
Let the lips of destiny
Breathe sweetness back into my fate
Let this night redeem me of my sins
And bring me back to hope.
-Extravagant
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Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:30 pm
Oh! I like this one~ ^^
Though I wonder...the third line from the end, "Breath sweetness back into my fate", should that be "Breathe sweetness back into my fate"?
*puts away my pet peeves as there are none for this one* ^^;
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 4:32 pm
karasureign Oh! I like this one~ ^^ Though I wonder...the third line from the end, "Breath sweetness back into my fate", should that be " Breathe sweetness back into my fate"? *puts away my pet peeves as there are none for this one* ^^; чøυ'яε ηøтħιηg §ρεcιαℓ, чøυ'яε α §кεℓεтøη кεч
thanks for that! I can't type as well as I can write it out by hand xd
Status >in want of arts, please?
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:11 pm
Extravagantly Yours karasureign Oh! I like this one~ ^^ Though I wonder...the third line from the end, "Breath sweetness back into my fate", should that be " Breathe sweetness back into my fate"? *puts away my pet peeves as there are none for this one* ^^; чøυ'яε ηøтħιηg §ρεcιαℓ, чøυ'яε α §кεℓεтøη кεч
thanks for that! I can't type as well as I can write it out by hand xd
Status >in want of arts, please? ^^ No problem. I go back reading through the ones I've typed up and I see all the things where I skipped a letter or typed in a completely different word...hand written is so much nicer...at least I think so. ^^;;
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:10 pm
чøυ'яε ηøтħιηg §ρεcιαℓ, чøυ'яε α §кεℓεтøη кεч Same here
I always write everything by hand first Status >in want of arts, please?
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:13 pm
Going Out Tonight
9 September, 2008
Sweet overdose
We’re overdrawn
But we’re underdone
And it’s in our blood
We’re getting off
Baby take me for a ride
High-rolling on nothing
Build me up
And take me down
Forget the statistics
We’re going out tonight
But it’s all headed downhill
We’re driving off
And there’s a cliff ahead
Speed up baby
We’re going out tonight
Sweep me off my feet
And tell me my name
Make me feel invincible
It’s nothing but an overdose
The end of it all
But we’re going out tonight
-Extravagant
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 9:53 am
This one feels like the lyrics to a rock song. I like it.
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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:01 pm
чøυ'яε ηøтħιηg §ρεcιαℓ, чøυ'яε α §кεℓεтøη кεч It's kind of what I was going for, glad that's the way it turned out Status >in want of arts, please?
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:24 pm
Runa Whynd This one feels like the lyrics to a rock song. I like it. thats the impression i got too! as i was reading it, my mental voice kept trying to put it to a melody
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