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i'm all about randomness in poetry, cuz i think it should be a jotting down, of sorts, of how you feel, what you see in life. so this is great! i want that kinda luv. i want someone to feel those things for me. don't change anything about this. it's strong as is...only...u might wanna fix the "silence" to "silent" in this line: "Would you stay silence,". other than that....this is a raw emotion, a quandry of the heart and mind....so i say it should stay without rythm or rhyme or structure.....of which it already has it's own. great job!!! 4laugh

I like this! It's powerful. :3
But I think it would help it if you said "If I reached to kiss you," rather than "If I made to kiss you." "Made" isn't a very strong word, and it doesn't make sense in that phrase.

There should be a question mark at the end of line 8. The sentence became so long I think you forgot to put that in at the end. xD Same goes for line 12 and line 23. Also at the end, it sounds weird because throughout the poem you ask questions, yet the end isn't a question. I suggest changing it so it IS a question. ("Would you" instead of "You would.")

I think near the end it doesn't flow as well. Maybe change "But what if tomorrow I shall die?" to "But what if tomorrow I am gone?" or "But what if tomorrow I disappear with the wind?" Something along those lines. xD Just simply saying "die" doesn't sound as good.
Same goes with "Crying out your eyes?" I suggest changing that to "Crying your eyes dry?" Crying out one's eyes is an overused phrase, so it sounds better to change it up for a poem.

Also, using "scurry" to describe "worry" sounds weird. Maybe change it to "drift" or "float."