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 Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 1:31 am
There's nothing left for me to say, baby.
It's all dried up and blown away.
When you said that phrase that time, did you mean it?
Or was it just a lie un mensonge so that I wouldn't tell you to beat it?
Pale skin and hard cold bone--
I'm nothing more, nothing less.
Rien plus, rien moins.
I am what you make of me,
If you ever decide to welcome me home.
Vos yeux me rappellent la neige,
Si froid et si très pointu.
Un jour j'espère que vous m'aimez,
Comme j'ai fait beaucoup de ces nuits.
Poem (c) dragonlover711.deviantart.com / [_jaws_] on gaiaonline.com
You may not use.
Agorphia, I know you're gonna have a field day with this one, but please don't mention on how the French doesn't fit or something. It's not my mother language, so I don't have it perfect! xD I'm still learning!
Any comments OTHER than that? (Well, you can talk about the French, just don't tell me it doesn't work. I'LL decide.)
Translations:
-Un mensonge - a lie
-Rien plus, rien moins - Nothing more, nothing less
-Vos yeux me rappellent la neige,
Si froid et si très pointu.
Un jour j'espère que vous m'aimez,
Comme j'ai fait beaucoup de ces nuits. -
Your eyes remind me of the snow,
So cold and so very sharp.
One day I hope you'll love me,
As I have for many nights.
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 10:06 pm
actually i luv the french in it......i'd give it subtitles tho....unless that's supposed to be part of the mystery of the poem, but it could get a bit confusing. i only got part of it....studied french for 3 years....dun remember most of it. sweatdrop i still like this tho! it's different from what we'd normally see in most places!!! yays for you.....i think i need those subtitles now tho....eheh. mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:22 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 1:27 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 11:28 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:42 pm
¤::::: I knew it was Jim's house. "...Well, then why'd you do it?" :::::¤ French is so fun. xD It adds a nice touch to the poem.
I love the lines "I am what you make of me, / If you ever decide to welcome me home."
It really shows the connection between the two people by using "home." ¤::::: Because you asked me to. :::::¤
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