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My first attempts at stop motion. :D

InCaseOf_Fire_BreakGlass

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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 12:23 pm

Yeah so, this was my first attempt at this kinda thing, but I think it went well. Don't be too soft, I want real critics.

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okay feel free to comment my video, and leave a comment here if you want.

Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:53 pm

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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 5:33 pm

I like the sop motion, alot. Violen, haha. But really cool for a first attempt? biggrin

Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 5:40 pm

I like your creativity in making a few seconds have a neat little story.

However, the blurry is kinda a big deal, because when it changes halfway through to clear, and it kinda ruins the effect.

Also, try to keep the camera in one place so the scene's not moving all over the place.

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InCaseOf_Fire_BreakGlass

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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:50 pm

thanks for the comments!

Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:38 am

Not bad stuff at all but you really should work on getting rid of the camera shake.
The first vid is too blurry but I assume that is because of how close it is to the camera?
The second two are much better focus-wise.
My favourite is the little creature trying on the masks. I like how his arms trail behind him.