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 Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 3:53 am
Here u can post your love related poetry or stories...please keep the T.O.S in mind...PG13 rated or below...^^
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Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:02 pm
I wrote this before my ex and i were dating:
Understatement
When I first looked into his eyes
I knew something was there
I felt something
Something in my chest wanting to explode...
I had never felt it before
It felt like a.....
It was something I can't put into words!
I feel it everytime I see him.
I don't just want something from him
I want him to know how I feel
I would never use him
I just need him to feel what I feel.
He puts a light in my dark mind,
My mind that is filled with a dark light.
But when I looked into his beautiful eyes,
A blinding flash, brighter than the sun exploded behind my own.
Is there a name for this wonderful feeling I am experiancing?
Aren't there any words to express it?
No...
No there isn't.
Not even "love" can, For love
Is an understatement.
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Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 2:41 pm
I wrote this on may 11th 2007...
Tonight
Confusion lies in my heart at this moment, a cresting wave of overflowing emotions waiting to engulf me and swallow me whole, with tears my heart cracks and bleeds and I wonder once again why I feel the need to love.....to be held....to care....to give freely what others fear to release.....is a heart so fragile a thing....I believe not.... for mine has been broken again and again... though it is cracked and bruised it beats the tune of life just the same.....and I still feel need pulling me toward something I fear but am loath to live without.....am I so week as to need this pain this badly.... to need this emotion... to be it's pawn.. yet I desire it so greatly,so greatly my heart is close to bursting thinking of being in his arms.....thinking forbidden thoughts.... I stand close to the edge of love... on the precipice of a great cavern to which I cannot turn away from...to fall so quickly is unlike me I am always cautious with my heart....
yet my reaction is undeniable in it's clarity....and I dare not lie to myself....I am bewitched by him.....my heart and soul seem to be no longer mine.....but his always his.....love at first write.....sight was lost in translation not even required to fall.....wherein lies my confusion.....I am broken at this moment.....broken and alone..... afraid of where my heart has lead me and afraid of where it guides me still.....are we friends or more.....I know what my heart says but who can say.....any possibility can lead to reality and I am so confused.....awaiting enlightenment is where I seem to be.....trying to guard my heart whilst it yearns for my utter destruction.....a loving destruction...but destruction still the same....since I know not what tomorrow will bring, I will love him for tonight.....and one day may I love him always..........................
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Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 6:27 pm
Mello, that was... that was just beautiful! Absolutely fantastic.
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Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 8:10 pm
x_Adriel_x Mello, that was... that was just beautiful! Absolutely fantastic. Thank you. :3
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Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 11:44 pm
wahmbulance this post is in reference to the next one posted in an ORNATE style wahmbulance
this poem means alot to me..
as you may know, there are many different kinds of love..
there is love for your friends and family too..
this poem i wrote after my grandmother died of cancer.
I loved her very much, more so than anybody else i can think of.
I still get teary eyed when my mom reads it, because she always has to say, "you know Davy, growing up you were the only one of your brothers that would yell,'grandma's here!' and run up and give her a hug when she came over..". Damn, i'm getting teary eyed now.. lol
so though i'm not sure if this qualifies, nor do i care.. I want you to know that this peom was written with alot of heart and love..
its still sketchy.. and i would like to re-arrange some lines in it.. but i felt better to leave it in its most original form.
I would also like to ask no one steal the material. I would be crushed beyond comprehension if it was...
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Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 11:46 pm
~In Loving Memory~
Light cascades through the branches barren of emerald leaves.
He who would say it wasn’t beautiful misperceives.
As though it were water, the air had rhythmic ebbs.
The dry, brown grass waved in the shadow’s webs.
A scenic Texas day this seems to be,
Like any other, until the truth you see.
All around people embrace with hugs and kisses.
Laughter was the only sound While in the midst of reminisces.
But soon their hearts feel as barren as the branches,
as they begin to cross the endless fields of the ranches.
Although the sun continues shining with radiance,
all happiness transmutes into silence.
Warm the day has been but now the air cools,
and in everybody’s eyes tears begin to pool.
We all grieve with out the lead of her smile.
But to cry in the presence of others was never my style.
She passed away in a peaceful manner,
as mentioned in the obituary banner.
With ashes held in our gentle, open hands,
the winds sympathetically disperse them across the lands.
Her soul is now as free as a butterfly,
riding the winds throughout the entire sky.
“I love you grandma, I’ll see you before long”
I said while trying to be strong.
“I cry for you to this day”
Before I sleep is what I’ll always say.
In loving memory of grandma Waldron,
with your embrace, After death, to you I’ll run.
~David J. Turner Jr.
I will forever love you Grandma.
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:03 am
it goes to show that when you love someone, in ANY way, you don't realize just how much you really cared for them untill you lose them.
in my case, it was a family love, and she died..
but its very much the same principle when your with a lover and you split or something. you always think back and wonder how much more you could have showed your love to them, how much more you could have showed them you really did care. it shows the anguish one feels when they lose a person they loved. Love is love.. in any form, and once you can safely claim that you love someone, the loss is frighteningly painful.
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:09 am
All of these are great. I really wish I was into poetry more, but it just doesn't suit me. Not a good writer and my mentality has so many blocks...
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 5:25 am
"Some people THINK before they speak...[[: Not really my thing.
I could try, I guess?
Nah, nevermind. [[: Maybe next time. ^^
...Too bad I'm not some people." Gracias to::
GaiaGaleForce
FRANKIEE xO
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:07 pm
WOW all of those are realy great....... i do have any redface sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 2:21 pm
Broken
my broken heart is stilled by her voice...
held captive by her I love you's...
shattered by her forevers...
and scattered by her nevers
it is torn apart by her not good enoughs...
ripped out by her I love another...
and ripped asunder by please remember
but it is filled with hope from her maybe's, possibly's and baby please..
so what can I do
with a heart thats oh so blue
so heavy and hurting
and so filled with yearning
haven't I paid the price
with years so lonely
counted ten times thrice
can I not have someone to hold me
who will lift me up
and not once scold me
but alas I wish for all I've lost
loosing her
was just to high a cost
she was my dream come true
my angel, my world, my muse
and I know not what to do
I must be doomed to be confused
because even broken
my heart calls her name
I fear my life will be ever full of pain
cause once broken a heart will never be the same
written about my ex gf just a few days ago
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Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:32 am
(Victor)You're The Reason
You're the reason that I wake up
though still sleepy in the morning
The reason I dress attractively
so as not to look plain or boring
Going to school I imagine your smile
and your eyes looking at me adoring
I imagine the words you will say
that will send my heart soaring
You're the reason that I'm tardy
going to class everyday
Hoping i will catch a glimpse of you
if I go out of my way
I look forward to your touch
you hold me like no other guy may
For when you pull me close
I never want to pull away
You're the reason that I can't sleep
I think about you late into the night
Wishing your bady lay next to me
who knows, one day you might
When I sleep I dream of you
holding me close and tight
Which makes waking from sleep
something I sometimes fight
You're the reason that I breathe
the reason i believe in love
I know that you were sent to me
from the heavens above
Many guys offered their embrace
but only into your arms I dove
So if I am to have my first kiss
if it be you I approve
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