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Alika-chan

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 2:15 pm


Hmm, this is a story idea that I've been working with for awhile. If anyone's seen or been in my other fanfics you might recognise one of my original characters when she gets introduced. Tell me what you think and whether I shold continue it.
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It was another ending to a regular school day. The bells signaling the end of the school day had rung and the school aged children walked quickly from the building of education, happy to get away from it, for atleast a short period of time.
Three such people were walking down the sidewalk.
Yusuke Uremashi yawned loudly as he and his friend Kuwabara and his girl Keiko walked from the building, he simply intitled, 'Touture Structure of Hell'.
he narrowed his eyes in boredom as the three of them walked to Keiko's home also the location of the Yukimara Noodle house. If he behaved himself and demonstrated atleast an ounce of patience he could probably get a bowl of Ramen on the house.
He smirked to himself. Not that he would or that it even mattered. He could act like his old, perverted and brash self and still get fed. Though he'd up getting a few smacks to the face along with a meal....
"Oi! Uremashi! You're being awful quiet..."
Yusuke looked up and turned to his tall carrot-toped friend who just spoke.
"Yeah, I was thinking if there was any other ways for me to pound you face into the dirt. It's been quiet awhile and I don't want to get rusty at it."
Kuwabara glared and yelled some barely intelligable insults at him, which humored Yusuke more than insult him.
"You think you're so tough. I'll show you! Today is the day when I knock that aggorant grin off your face along with your teeth."
Yusuke's trademark cocky grin speread across his face as he stopped and turned around to face his friend/rival.
"Talk is cheap and your insults are even cheaper..so let's get your betdown, done and over with so I can still catch the early dinner special..."
A bag suddenly made contact with the back of his head and Yusuke rubbed the spot while looking at a glaring Keiko.
"If you're going to start fighting, I won't bother feeding you at all."she said.
And with that established she walked awy and left the two boys standing at a corner.
Yusuke sighed and walked to catch up with up.
"Oh come on Keiko I was just-"
He didn't get to finsih that as a pink and blue blur crashed into him, sending him flying into a unconviently placed trashed bin.

The perky blue haired, Grim Reeper, Botan, blinked and looked down at the crumped mess of a spirit Detective.
"Whoops! Sorry! I guess I have to work on my landing a bit more."she said with a little embrassed laugh.
Yusuke glared up at Botan on her oar as he peeled a banna peel from atop his head and stood up brushing the rest of the trash off him. A confused Keiko and a laughing Kuwabara came up to the other two.
"You obviously got some lame case for me to take care off if you're on that thing."Yusuke growled out slightly.
Botan nodded before lifting up slightly on her oar as a portal appeared behind her.
"Yes. And it's very ugent, or so Koenma says. He wants you two in his office right away."
Kuwabara's laughter died away at that news and he prepared to enter the portal. Yusuke looked back at Keiko who had an expression on her face he couldn't quite read.
"Going to have to take a rain check on that food for now. But know that I'll be back."
She nodded and watched as the three of them went into the portal and stayed till it closed.
"You better."

A few moment later found out two heros standing in front of the desk of the Prince of the Spirit World. He looked up at the two of them, his childlike hands folded ontop of the desk. He gave off an air of seriousness that wasn't customary to him. It was the reason that Yusuke and Kuwabara had been so quiet for so long. However, Yusuke's impatience and his brashness was bound to kick in sooner rather than later.
"So what's the urgent mission this time Toddler? You let another powerful artifact get stolen or is there another group of demons wanting to get their asses kicked?"
Koenma glowered at the raven haired boy and sighed before sitting up.
"Actually, this is case is going to be a bit different from the others I've sent you on."
"Yeah, go on."said Kuwabara, curiousity getting to him.
"I need you to locate and find someone-"
"Wait! I thought you said this was going to be different? It's already starting to sound like the whole Rescue Yukina thing."
Before Kuwabara could go on his rant about his love for Yukina, Koenma continued.
"You didn't let me finish. As i was saying, I need you locate and find someone. This is somewhat like the Yukina case in that it is highly important that you find this person quickly, however that is were the similarities end."
"You wanna stop with all the suspense crap?"
"You need to make sure you find this person before anything else finds her. And it's important that you do not expose to her to any happanings of the supernatural."
This had Yusuke raising a brow.
"You've caught my interest. Can I ask why I can't do that."
"Because if you do so, you may very well awaken a creature who has the power to destroy not only the Human World, but the Demon and Spirit World as well."
Everyone turned to the office door as a long haired red head entered in, walking almost casually.
"Geeze Kurama! Mind not sneaking up on us like that!"yelled a slight started Kuwabara.
Kurama, smiled apoligetically but some humor could stil be seen in his eyes.
"I'm sorry for starling you Kuwabara. Though, technically you couldn't say I was sneacking up you sense I annoced myself well before I walked fully in the room..."
As Kuwabara tried to process that in his brain Yusuke took the time to ask Kurama something.
"What the hel did you mean by awakening a creature that could destroy the worlds? I thought we were going to find some girl from what Toddler said so far..."
Koenma coughed and began talking again.
"I assure you that you will be, but this girl, is more than meets the eyes. Yusuke, you must heed my warning for what Kurama said may very well come to pass in the worst case."
"Alright, I'm just about tired with all the vagueness of the subject. I want a straight answer now or else I just might be temepted to sit back and watch the destruction of everything."
Koenma sighed.
"You know any legends?"
"I don't know the connection between this and the misson but yeah. i know a few.
"The tell me. Have you heard of a legend about a Dragon called ShenWu?"
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And that's where I'll end it for now.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 3:31 pm


I'm interested. xd

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Alika-chan

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 8:41 pm


Heh, thanks.^^ I'll try and post more up whenever I can.
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