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Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:40 pm
okay, uh yeah..... Go ahead and write what ever you want here. I don't care if you say my story needs waffles in it! Just write
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:22 am
A lot of grammatical errors and needed some improvement usage of vocabulary, but overall it's kawaii! ^_^ *holds up a card with a 100 on it and Geekuden holds up another card that says "+10"* Hehehe, it's a real good story, I know it'll be! ^_^ *thumbs up* Keep it up, Ymazis Ninexel!!
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:40 am
Yay for storehs! Boo for dyslexia @.@ XD Anywho, thanks for correcting for me, Kuusoo-chan
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:45 am
^_^ I'mah have to edit everything for ya! XD
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:01 pm
Nice story! I love it. And Angie if I create a story,can you please correct all my grammatical errors? mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:43 pm
Mmhmm, I'mah edit every story that gets posted, lol ^__^ It's my job.
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