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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:51 am
Loving Deathby: Mari Shade Most valued editor and creator of title: Onyx Despair Before I do anything further I would just like to say this is my favorite story to write and my friends' favorite story (of mine) to read. Most of the people who have read this (including my fabulous favorite editor) hate me at the moment because I still have not finished this book and don't always find the time to write more chapters or whatever you want to call them. Also, I'd like to give the heads up that if you are NOT into demons, the Underworld, the Grim Reaper, and dark twisted romances then I suggest you not read this story. Anyway, enjoy!
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:51 am
This is my page for important character descriptions and weird meanings that I have not really described in the story yet. I might be forgetting something at the moment and as I go through the story I might add to this page so every once and awhile check back here and if there is anything you do not understand in my story feel free to pm me about it. XP LORD DEATH/ THE GRIM REAPER Lord Death is the leader of the Underworld. Despite what legends and myths say. He is not the only Reaper, although, Lord Death was the original. He is as old as the first humans who walked the earth and when the humans' numbers started rising he realized his job would be much easier if he had help, which is how the Palace of the Dead was created. Not only that, but Lord Death has a few different forms, his two most often used are the regular skeleton form and his human form(( I like to see his human form as a pale, black haired vampire looking guy, or someone like 'Blackheart' from "Ghost Rider" but you can see him as whatever you want)). So, after many centuries of Reaper demons coming and going he decided to personally teach a Reaper, one that could even take his place if he thought necessary; an apprentice. And that's how he met Abyss. THE LIKIVIN The Likivin are the Leaders of the Underworld. Lord Death is at the top and the rest kind of just help keep everything as they should be and help make important decisions. There are 9 members of the Likivin and has been that way since as long as anyone can remember. The Likivin are known to be cold and every smart demon fears them. They all have tremendous power and are wise beyond their years. The 9 demons who make up this council are Lord Death, Cor (werewolf), Mari (vampire), Onyx (vampire), Zesta and Destra (twin element demons), Liethana (control demon), Mezzen (hate demon), and Kriztien (guardian demon). ABYSS Abyss is the main character in my story((the picture of her is on the title page)). She is about 5000 years old. When she was very young(around 500 to 1000 years old) she was a very weak demon. She had no title and hardly anyone knew her name. Around that time Lord Death was looking for an apprentice to help him and the other Reaper Demons with the rising death tole in the human world or 'World of the Living'. Abyss happened to be in the right place at the right time and caught the attention of Lord Death. She became his apprentice and rose in status in the demon world. During there time together they became closer and formed a 'Bond'. Now she is as powerful as the members of the Likivin, (the Leaders of the Underworld) and only her master, Lord Death has the power to tell her what she can and cannot do. MARI AND ONYX Mari and Onyx....... Mari and Onyx...... Lol, sorry but I have to laugh at these two. They are Abyss's closest friends besides Lord Death and let me tell you, they are so full of energy that they seem to be bouncing off the walls all the time. Abyss loves them, but can also get deeply annoyed with them (if I had the fanfic. I made I could show you how annoying they can get but my friend *cough, cough* Onyx, *cough, cough* still has it and won't give it back yet so I guess you'll just have to wait.). My editor has yet to tell me what kind of weapon she wants and what the name of it is so I can't really write it down but Mari's weapon is a black and red katana named Ruin. BTW, most of you have, but if you haven't noticed my nicname is Mari and my favorite editor's nicname is Onyx. No I did not make these characters based off of us. Some characteristics are the same but most are not so no, I am not "so full of energy that I seem to be bouncing off the walls all the time". Sorry to disappoint you. WEAPONS AND BLACK MAGIC Now, the weapons it the Underworld are mostly medieval style weapons...... plus scythes. There are no guns or cannons or bombs and such, they are unneeded and the demons see them as a waste of time to make. Anyway, the thing with the weapons is the demons don't just go to the store and buy them, no, they are born with them. No not like, the weapon is in the demon's hand as they are born. The demon's one and ONLY weapon forms in a a special case just for that weapon and is held in a weapon holding area, on the case has the weapons name. And instead of 'mama' or 'papa' being the first words that come out of a child's mouth, their weapons name is. Every weapon has it's own name and own personality and that weapon's voice can only be heard by the demon who owns it. So the weapon keepers can't just ask what demon it belongs to and ship it to them, they have to wait until the parents of the new demon come looking for a weapon with 'so-and-so' name. And another thing, if the demon is a boy the weapon will be a girl, if the demon is a girl the weapon with be a boy. Then I guess you could say the weapon finds it's master and they ride off into the sunset or whatever. And as a last bit of information, when the demon dies, it's weapons disappears.
Now for the fun stuff, Black Magic. This is probably one reason why the demons find making guns and things a waste of time. Every creature that lives or was born in the underworld has the use of black magic but you don't just wake up on day and know all the secrets of how to use it. Demons have to practice and learn about it and study and practice some more. Usually the older a demon is, the more powerful their black magic is, but if they never learned how to use it or never practice then they pretty much suck at it and rely only on their weapon. I can't explain everything about it because it would take to long and you probably wouldn't read it anyway. But the basic stuff is that you don't need 'spells' or what not, it's mostly just self control and inner strength. So yea, you will see a lot of Black Magic use in my story.
If you have any questions about weapons or Black Magic just send me a pm and I will do my very best to explain whatever you do not understand. KEST Lol, OMFG IT'S KEST! Lol, besides Onyx, nobody should know why I am freaking out about Kest unless you read the story then came and figured out what everything was. Anyway, so yea. I think at least 75- 80% of you will love Kest or think of him as your favorite character. He is very fun and very sarcastic. He is a joy to write and you never know when he'll pop up and make another comment. Oh, I'm getting ahead of myself. If you bothered to look at the title page you will notice that Abyss is holding a scythe; that is Kest. Kest is Abyss's one and only weapon and he has one hell of a personality. I hope you enjoy his witty comments as much as I have enjoyed writing them. FATE Sad to say but you won't be hearing too much from Fate. I love her but I really only use her when it is Lord Death's perspective. If I ever post on of my fanfic's when I write in the form of Lord Death then you will get the full personality of her, until then, I will just say that she is much more serious than Kest and is most of the time 'all business' but she is known to have a little fun once and awhile. And if you haven't guessed already, Fate is Lord Death's scythe.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:52 am
Chapter 1 It was impossible, the idea that I, the Great Abyss would ever have to wear a prison uniform. No one even dared think about it it was so wrong. And now, to everyone's horror, that impossible idea has become an unbelievable fact. I had done something that defied the Underworld, I had done something that defied my master, and there was no way I could deny it. It seemed like the entire Underworld had come to watch me be lead by the 16 guards surrounding me; up the steps to the Trial that was to privately decide my fate. I showed no emotion to the demons who reached out to me or fell to the ground hyperventilating. I knew this was horrible to them. I was suppose to be this grand demon who started with nothing and now had power over some of the Likivin members, I was suppose to be a living hero, the justice for the smaller demons. Not today. I shook my head to clear my thoughts, remembering that my hair was tied up in a tight pony tail for the first time in my life. That and the uniform I was wearing. I had never worn grey before, it didn't suit my red hair, and even worse is that the uniform almost looked like what the human prostitutes wore. A short, tight, skirt, a sleeveless tank-top that showed my stomach, and knee high boots. I sighed, this was beyond humiliating. I suddenly remembered where I was as the guards and I started to climb the steps that lead to the trial room. A female demon screamed and tried to run after us but the guards that were keeping the civilians away from me stopped her before she could get very far. "She didn't do it! I know it's not true! It's a lie! Tell them Lady Abyss! Tell them that it's a joke!" she screamed. I stopped and turned to face her and she smiled with hope filled eyes. I smiled sadly at her and shook my head. "I cannot lie about something that everyone saw was true." I said then continued up the stairs. I didn't hear her anymore because even though she wanted to believe that what I did was a lie she knew it was true. Not only was she and the entire Underworld there when I broke one of the most sacred laws, but He was there too and nobody could deny his word. That is what scared me, He was in that room, He was going to lock me up or kill me, and He would probably never look at me the same way he once had. To clear my mind from those awful thoughts a gave a quick glance at the guards to my left and right to see if I knew any of them. One of them made me want to fall to the ground gagging. It was Kilden, my brother. We stopped at the door when a guard went in to announce my arrival, during those few seconds I turned to Kilden. "Kilden, my brother, I ask that you find someway to forgive me. I am sorry for what I have put you through." I said not really caring who else heard. He turned to me with a mixture of sorrow and hate in his eyes, "Abyss, I will forgive you, but it will not be today, and it will not be for a long time. Do me and everyone else here a favor and never apologize again, you're not good at it." I smiled and when the door opened we both faced forward. "Lady Abyss, the Likivin will see you now." ((Lol, if you think this first chapter is sappy it is. I wrote it that way because I felt like it so deal. Don't worry though. There is probably only 3 sappy chapters in this book.))
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:53 am
Chapter 2
The guards pulled me into the dimly lit room. It was round and had a plain chair and table set up in the middle of the room. Past the table, against the wall I was staring at, was a very regal looking desk; similar to the ones human judges used actually. It was rounded like the room and behind it, staring directly at me, were the nine most important creatures of the Underworld, the Likivin. I walked up to the desk in the middle of the room and stood next to the chair as the names of the Likivin were called out: Mari, Onyx, Cor, Zesta, Destra, Liethana, Mezzen, Kriztien, and Him. Due to the graces of some grand overseer of the universe, I could not see His face, or the eyes that were staring at me with probably hatred. Instead of trying to take Him on in a staring contest I let my eyes wander among the other Likivin not letting even the slightest emotion show in my face. When the room echoed with the bolts on the door snapping into place His' hooked face turned to look at Liethana, signaling that she could start. Liethana turned to me with a light-hearted smile, even her eyes looked calm and trusting. To someone who didn't know her as well as I did, she might have even looked friendly, but I knew the games she played. As I stared back into her eyes I noticed the pupils widening and closing as if trying to find the spot they liked best; this was the tell-tale that she was trying to get into your head, her pupils were actually trying to find what "channel" your mind was on. "Sit down now Abyss." Liethana said in a voice like silk. I heard her voice echo in my head, making me feel warm, almost like I wanted to sit down, like I needed to... "I think I'd rather stand." I said calmly, smiling back at her. Liethana's whole body became ridged and she struggled not to open her mouth in shock. She shook her head and tried again. "Abyss, you need to sit down." she said her calm voice shaking a little. Again I heard it bouncing around in my skull, My legs felt weak, like if I didn't sit down right then I would fall to the ground. "No I don't." I said holding my smile. Liethana almost fell out of her chair, and this time she let her mouth drop open; this had probably never happened to her in her entire life. Mezzen shot a glance at her and Liethana quickly shut her mouth and hid her doll-like face behind her short, silver hair. Cor ran his claws through his fur behind his ears. "Abyss! Do you know why you are here?" His deep, booming voice seemed to shake the room; I liked Cor, he was the type of creature that liked getting things done, but he was a werewolf, and werewolves were known to have terrible patience. "I do. I am here because everyone says I murdered a royal." I said in a fake, bright-chipper voice. Mezzen scowled and Cor sighed, "well, did you?" his deep voice calmer now. I tilted my head to the side and looked at Cor with a "come on, really?" expression. "If I didn't I wouldn't be in this situation would I?" Cor leaned back in his chair and let out a huge breath of air. "I guess not." he mumbled, not seeming to know what to say next. Zesta's head hit the table as she tried to control her annoyance, I could hear her sigh into the table, "This is going nowhere." she mumbled into the table. Destra looked over at her sister worriedly, "she's right. She confessed didn't she? Can't we call it a day, I'm worried about my sister..." she said touching Zesta's shoulder gently. My hand went up and sat on my chest where my heart should have been and I made a face of horror. "Oh, skies forbid Zesta get a headache!" I said taking a dramatic step backward. Mari and Onyx snickered and tried to cover it up by drinking the glasses of blood in front of them. Mezzen glared at them then turned to face me just as I winked at Mari and Onyx. His eyes changed from grey to orange and I knew his self control had snapped, I smiled at him. "Uh oh. It looks like Mizzi's mad at me." I knew that calling him by the nicname the royal I killed used for him was taking it too far but I couldn't help myself. Mezzen's calm face twisted into one of rage. He jumped over the table and lunged for me.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:54 am
Chapter 3 As Mezzen charged at me I stared at him coldly. When he was three feet away from me I stuck my right hand out and flicked the air, sending pressurized Black Magic waves from my finger tips, causing Mezzen to fly backward. He didn't even hit the ground before the guards chained my hands behind me and formed a magic-eating cage around me. I stared boredly at Mezzen as he hit the floor, stood back up, and lunged for me again. "What a waste of energy." I said with a sigh as the chains around my wrists and the cage started to melt and form a pool of metal at my feet. Cor jumped over the desk and tackled Mezzen to the ground trying to get him to calm down. Mezzen got one of his hands free though and threw a ball of dark energy at me. As I stepped to the side to avoid it, the dark energy shipped my shoulder forming a perfect line of blood. My eyes grew dark as I stared down at the pathetic forms of Mezzen and Cor wrestling. Cor saw the look in my eyes and if a werewolf could turn pale, he did. I clapped my hands together then drew them away from each other forming strands of electricity, Mezzen wanted to play, so we were going to play. I crunched the strands together forming something that looked like a yarn ball; I held it in both hands like I was going to throw it and- "Abyss!" No. No, no, no, no! He was not going to do this to me! "Abyss, drop your hands, sit down, and do not move or speak unless I tell you otherwise."I did what I was told, I couldn't go against His word. It wasn't like I had a choice in the matter anyway; because of the bond we had, He was the only one who could make me do something against my will. He was the only one who had power over me... When I seated myself and stopped moving the guards formed a circle around me; due to their performance during that little fight Mezzen and I had I really found their presence useless. I saw Kilden in front of me, his face full of disgrace and pain. Well fine, he could feel what he wanted about me, it wasn't going to matter in a few moments anyway. That little show I just put on probably added more years to my sentence anyway. I let my eyes return to Cor and Mezzen, who were still wrestling on the ground, and held them there. When Mezzen noticed me looking at him he screamed, "You'll never see anything besides the walls of your cell! I'll make sure you suffer for what you did, for killing Dinelle! I swear it!" Cor pushed Mezzen in the face to shut him up and I stayed quiet, I was tired of hearing Mezzen's rants, besides, thanks to that order I couldn't say anything anyway. Cor pulled Mezzen to his feet and dragged him out one of the side doors. "Can we please make a verdict?" Zesta asked into the table, I don't think she lifted her head back up since she let it fall onto the table. "Yea, let's get this over with, I promised Edward that this wouldn't take too long," Onyx said boredly; Mari took a sip of blood and nodded in agreement. "Alright Kriztien, you may do the honors," He said looking over at her. Kriztien nodded and began, "As one of the nine Likivin, I, Kirztien, pronounce you guilty. You will serve 2000 years of isolation in cell 631. Abyss, your punishment will start when you enter your assigned cell and the door shuts behind you. You do not have authorization to go anywhere but your assigned cell once you leave this room, that is all." Kriztien said brushing her orange hair out of her eyes and standing to leave. I was glad that I was ordered to stay still because if I wasn't I probably would have fell to the ground screaming. 2000 years wasn't bad, I was actually expecting somewhere around 5000 to 10000. The thing that made me want to throw up was the isolation thing. For a demon like me, isolation was worse than death. Demons like me don't eat food or drink blood or even get life energy from living things, we feed off of the misery of others; I don't know exactly how to explain it but if a creature feels sad, depressed, in pain, or anything like that we can 'taste' it in the air and suck it in, like how humans breath in air. In isolation, there isn't anyone to feel miserable, so there's no way to feed. Isolation is a one way trip insanity and sometimes, brutal death. "Abyss, you may move and speak but you will go only to your cell and you will not use black magic on your way there." He said also standing to leave. I stood up without speaking and headed for the door. Kilden grabbed my arm in attempt to keep control over me and escort me to my cell. I spun around and glared at him. Without a word I flipped him over my shoulder. I walked past him without another glance and opened the door after it unlocked it's self. As I stepped outside I calmed myself down and put on a gentle expression to the crowd of demons that were still outside waiting to see what happened. Many looked up at me with hope in there eyes as I dissented the stairs but as I walked past them without a word or a reassuring smile their hope diminished and all the faces in the crowd carried expressions of pain or disappointment. I felt His presence behind me and so did everyone else. They looked back at Him then silently started to depart from the side of the road. To my disappointment, He kept following me a few yards behind and even tried to get into my thoughts a few times. When I got to my cell I found four goblins guarding the entrance. I rolled my eyes as one of the goblins handed me a mask which was just a glorified word for "black-sack-worn-over-your-head". I have been through (meaning helped out with) many trials and still don't see the point of the mask. I put the mask on as I walked into the cell and shoved all my hair up into it. I went to the wall opposite from the door and kneelled down with my back against it. I lifted my arms to the side at shoulder level. Two chains came down out of the darkness and clasped around my wrists, holding them there. I looked up at the door, the mask made it hazy but I could still make out shapes and such, which, at the moment, was not a good thing. In the doorway was a form I knew all too well, it was Him. How pathetic I must have looked to him. He walked over to me then slowly bent down into a crouch so his face was level with mine. I thought that the dim room would make it too hard to see his face through the mask, but I was sadly mistaken. He was in his normal form, his skeletal form and the white bone color stood out far too well against his black hood. It was making me want to scream. "Get out!" I thought, "get out and leave me the hell alone!" He just sighed and brought his bony hand up to where my mouth was behind my mask as if that alone could silence my thoughts. "Abyss. You will not move from this spot, you will not try to escape. If anyone besides me comes in here for any reason you will use black magic to keep them away from you and get them back out of the cell, do you understand?" I closed my eyes in an attempt to hold myself together and nodded my head, rubbing my lips up and down his hand. "Lord Death, we're ready to lock the door," a goblin said from the entrance. I froze and my body went rigid as that name echoed in my head. Death. That was it, that was the name I worked so hard to block from my mind. His name, my master's name. Death sighed and stood up, he turned from me and walked toward the door. The last words I heard from him as he left my cell were in my head, he ordered me to stay sane and not to die; perfect. As I watched his form walk down the hall the goblins blew out all the candles in my cell and started shutting the door. When I could no longer make out Death's figure I stared at the floor at the last remaining light coming from the doorway I would see in the next 2000 years. The light finally disappeared and locked and the weight of what I had just lost came crashing down on me. I started tormenting myself by replaying what Death said in my mind for several minutes wishing for him to come back then cursing myself for acting so weak. I started to shake with anger and loss and realized I was drowning in my own self pity. Finally, I couldn't take it anymore; I screamed.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:55 am
Chapter 4 I screamed long and hard, fueling it with all my hatred and sadness; everything that I've been keeping bottled up since I killed Dinelle. As I ran out of air and couldn't scream anymore, I cried. It was only the second time in all my years of existence that my eyes shed tears, I hated my tears, they looked like blood. I pulled against the chains that held me to the wall, letting my head hang down so I was looking at the floor, and screamed into the concrete even more forceful than the first time. After my lungs gave out again I just hung there, letting the tears come freely. As I cried, I remembered; remembering was torture, but seeing that I had 2000 more years in here I didn't have much choice. I remembered the the first time I met him, my one goal in life at the time was to be just like him. To be so emotionally detached, to be feared by everyone; it was my greatest dream. Not long after that, Death chose me to become his apprentice. Lucky me. The 1000 years after that I not only grew stronger physically but emotionally too. I grew in status and soon enough, everyone knew my name. Around 800 years into being Death's apprentice he asked me to form a bond with him; a bond that meant he wanted me and me alone. When he asked that of me my first response was disbelief, I mean, the cold, emotionless Death practically just said he loved me. That kind of thing only happened in the human's fairy tales. A split second passed before I realized he was being truthful. I smiled sarcastically and said sure, why not. I stayed composed on the outside but inside I was doing somersaults; I wanted to cry but held it in with the little me inside my head. I excused myself from his presence and walked home barely holding myself together. After I entered my home and shut the door I walked to my room and fell onto my bed crying; it was the most amazing moment. I had the sudden urge to look up and Lord behold, there Death was in the corner looking more like a creeper than the God I knew he was. As I thought it, Death laughed, I didn't know it then but I would soon become tired of him peering into thoughts. That was the night I gave myself to Death. I brought myself back to the present and felt like throwing up, with the situation I was in, the most wonderful memories brought the most pain. A few moments later I started to doze and knew I would eventually fall asleep. I hated sleeping, the idea of being caught somewhere between thinking about anything and nothing just annoyed me. I eventually lost consciousness with the thought of cursing whoever invented the need to sleep. ((Lol, second sappy chapter!))
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:56 am
Chapter 5 When I woke up I tried to remember what I was dreaming about with no success, I've never been able to remember my dreams, sometimes I doubt I even have them. I held my breath as I reminded myself where I was so I didn't scream. If that wasn't bad enough then forgetting the fact that I should have been keeping track of time was. To calm myself down I took in an unnecessary breath of air. I always thought that was funny, some demons look a lot like humans, on the inside and out; I was one of them. But just because we had all those organs didn't mean we needed to use them. To put it in simpler words, I have lungs, but could stop breathing anytime I wanted and would not die or even feel weak from 'lack of oxygen'. As soon as the air entered my lungs I couldn't help but smile, "It appears that lungs do have their uses." I whispered as I tasted my own misery in the air. I focused on it for a moment then sighed. Judging on the taste, I've been in the cell for about 14 hours. It was 7:30 or so when I was locked into the cell so it should be around 21:30. I felt a rock by my leg and picked it up with a shadow hand (magic). I placed it in the farthest corner of the room, which happened to be to my left. "A pebble a day keeps insanity away," I mumbled to myself. As I took in another breath of air a thought hit me, I cursed myself for being so oblivious to it before. Misery is misery, right? I am suppose to be able to survive off of any kind of misery, so why not my own? I smiled, these 2000 years were looking a little brighter. I closed my eyes and stayed perfectly still as my body absorbed all the pain and despair in the small room. I felt my body become stronger along with my normal mind set. As I ate, everything that had been bothering me before was shoved to the back of my mind and locked away; I wasn't going to shed anymore tears about the past. As the sadness in the air decreased, I cursed. As I thought of ways to bring the misery levels back up I clenched and opened my fists. I gasped as my second brilliant thought of the day hit me. Pain, pain is a form of misery. Physical pain could make anyone sad and depressed, even me. I let my entire body relax as I closed my eyes. I felt the shadows in the cell and forced them all to become apart of each other, forming an object shaped like a dagger. I lied the blade on my skin, then put more and more pressure on it as I slide it across my thigh. When I realized I wasn't in enough pain to feed off of I carelessly slashed the dagger across my leg in one swift movement. As blood poured from the gash I instantly regretted doing that, which was kind of what I was aiming for in the first place. I felt it, the air getting steadily heavier, as the air shot in and out of my body. I again pointed the dagger at my leg, but then turned it up a little so it was aiming at my hip. Before my brain could register how much this was going to hurt I drew the dagger deep into my skin, shattering the bone and tearing all the muscle and tissue in that area. When I finally heard the dagger tip hit the wall behind me I tore it out as fast I as I could, bringing even more pain. I screamed and smashed my head into the wall behind me in an attempt to calm myself down, I needed to refocus on why I was doing this in the first place. With clenched fists I measured the size of the cell and all the hurt in it, it was enough to satisfy me for now. I let my body absorb the pain and gradually relax. As my thought process became clearer I began thinking about what I was going to have to do to myself for the next 2000 years to stay healthy; oh, the joy. "Wow, Kilden was right I guess. I am suicidal." I said with a laugh. I thought about my brothers, Kilden and Zentu, until I felt the affects of blood loss. I always thought that it was pathetic that demons could feel weak and lose consciousness over blood loss, but couldn't die from it. I shook my head with disgust as my eyes became heavy and my body went limp as I drifted into another unremembered dream. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ((Ok, I haven't written this part in the original book so I should start on it now right? Yes. Am I going to? No. It's a very boring part and I still am unsure if I want to include it at all. All it is is other days and times in the cell and ya-dee-ya-dee-ya. So, just like my original, I'm going to skip it and worry about it later, don't worry, you'll be glad I did. Oh! Wait! I'll write one of the days real quick. It's actually more like a fanfic but whatever...)) Day 43 Abyss-I had just started to fall asleep when I heard a hard tapping on the door. For a few moments it just sounded like random beats but eventually I started to hear a pattern; Morse code. I listened carefully and started making out words and sentences: Hi.......Abyss!.......We.... Here.........to.....break...you.......out. I thought over it for a moment then tapped back: Who.....Are...You?........Why...You....Want....Me........out? There was a long pause then the tapping started again. I knew who it was before they even finished. "Mari! Onyx! You idiots!" I yelled loud enough so they could hear my through the walls. "We.....Love...You!" they tapped back. I sighed and pinched my eyes shut; only they could do something this brainless. "Where the hell are the guards?!" I screamed. Mari ((and Onyx))-I looked over at Onyx with a smile then behind us at the six goblins sprawled out across the floor. We both laughed then Onyx started tapping: Gone. "Oh! Ask her what the passcode is! She has to know at least where to find it." I said bouncing up and down from my seated position. Onyx tapped it hurriedly then we waited for a response. "Death has it!" we heard faintly. "Ohhhh...." I said unenthusiastically, "Well, she knew where to find it." Onyx said with a shrug. I stood up and gently took Ruin, my black and red katana, from his holster on the side of my hip. "Time for plan 'B'!" I said excitedly. Onyx stood up clapping her hands and took out her weapon as well. I quickly tapped: We....Have.....Different....Methods.....To....Try, and swung Ruin around in my hand for a moment. As I started to think about how to pry the door open I felt a faint chill behind me that made Onyx and I put our weapons away. "What are you two doing?" Onyx and I turned around to see Lord Death staring down at us. We kept our expressions controlled and innocent as we both lifted our right hand and pointed down one of the hallways. "Leaving. We are leaving." We said together. We turned and walked down the hallway without another glance back. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I slammed one of the larger rocks against the wall to one side of me, breaking it into several smaller pieces. With the shadows, I grabbed one of them and tossed it in to corner where all the other pebbles were. The pebble I just put there marked the third day of the third hundred year. I groaned at that thought, of all the things I was worried about when I first came in here, boredom never crossed my mind. I had tried shadow puppet dances, making music, telling scary stories to the pebbles, and reliving memories; none of them kept me entertained for more than 30 minutes. I stretched my broken and torn apart body, despite the fact that every little movement felt like a chainsaw was cutting into me, I was proud of myself. Every wound that I had ever inflicted was still open, leaving behind no ugly scars; I hated scars. I looked over at the stack of pebbles again and sighed, "Just another 1700 years to go." I mumbled. As I started to cut into an already gruesome looking wound on my right arm a sudden cling, like a tiny bell made me stop what I was doing and look toward the door.
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:30 am
Chapter 6 I stayed perfectly still as I stared toward the door and wondered if the tiny bell sound was just my mind finally admitting that I was losing it; but after another five minutes the chime sounded again. "No...." I gasped as I shook my head. "No." It wasn't possible, there was no way. There was no way, that someone could be unlocking the door. That was the thing, nobody knew the passcode, nobody, except Death. When I heard the third chime, signaling it had been 15 minutes since the passcode had been given, I started shaking. Why would Death want me out? I was positive it had not been much more than 300 years, what was the reason for opening that door? I heard the fourth chime and sighed. I wasn't going to get an answer for another ten minutes; the isolation cell doors were very unique. Once the passcode was given, the door was made to open the 13 locks over a period of 30 minutes; normally, it should have taken no more than five. So the 30 minutes was kind of like a sick joke made to torment the prisoner, telling them that the door was going to open, but not for awhile. I have to say, it was very effective, the sound of the fifth bell made me bang my head against the wall. To control my inpatients, I started making the pebbles I had collected dance in circles. Somehow I managed to keep myself entertained the whole five minutes and when the final chime sounded I pushed them all back into the corner. The large door slowly swung open and even through my mask, the sudden light that came spilling into my cell was blinding. A shadow formed in the door and I recognized the excited voice of a goblin calling out my name, that is, until he actually saw me. The goblin in the door was sucked in a deep breath and cursed repeatedly until the other two came to see what the problem was. By the way they sounded, I could tell I must have been a sight. My blood covered the walls of the cell in streaks and you couldn't even see the natural color of the floor anymore. But that kind of thing they were use to, so the only thing I could think of that made them freak so bad was that my body looked much worse then I thought, and as I looked down at my outline, I could tell that I looked like I'd been through a blender, I'm not going to worry you with all the details, but let's just say, I looked like the only things holding me together were a few patches of flesh and tissue. When the one in front finally got his wits about him, he took a step forward but then was suddenly halted by a iron gate that reached from the ceiling to the floor and divided me from them. I smiled, how I loved my black magic. I lifted my head and stared at the goblin as he stupidly stared back at me while his slow brain tried to process what had just happened. When he finally figured out that I wasn't letting him in, he began banging his scrawny hands against the bars while screaming at me. I lowered my head, "nobody gets in. Nobody but himself; that's what Lord Death told me. He said to keep everyone out." I said with no more volume than a whisper, but I knew the goblins heard me, their kind heard to well for their own good. "Indeed I did." At the sound of that voice my body went numb. I forced my mouth to form words, "Get out, Death. Stop toying with me and get the hell out." I growled as his formed appeared in the doorway. My gate shattered with the snap of his fingers and I pressed myself against the wall as he advanced toward me. He crouched in the same manner he did when he first locked me in. Death snapped his fingers twice and both chains fell away from my wrists. I was pressed so hard that when the chains let me go, I dropped forward, into Death's arms. My eyes went wide and I instantly tried to push myself away from him only to have him grab my wrists and hold me there. "I thought I told you not to go insane." he mumbled over me. "I didn't." I said defensively. He sighed, "then why are you pulling away from me?" I rolled my eyes, he was trying to play a game that I didn't want to deal with right now. "Why are you here?" I asked through clenched teeth so I could hide the shaking in my voice. His grip loosened around my wrists, "I'm releasing you. I'm tired of thinking about you sitting alone in the darkness. Besides, Mari and Onyx won't leave me alone about it to save their lives." he said with a soft chuckle. I gasped, "No, you can't! What about the other Likivin? They-" "are taken care of and couldn't do anything about it anyway. Remember who you're talking to Abyss." he said darkly but with a touch of sarcasm. I sighed and gave up, I hadn't talked to anyone in awhile and doing so now just wore me out; if Death had flesh over his bones, he would have smiled. He leaned me away from himself and stood up, his hands covered in my blood. "Abyss, I hereby release you from this cell and any previous orders given to you. Oh, but before you do anything, I want you to let the goblins take you to the Spraka." Death turned away from me and head out the door as the three goblins rushed over to me. Two of them swung my arms over each of their shoulders and started leading me out while the third walked behind, just in case. I tried getting my feet to cooperate and walk with them, but after several failed attempts I gave up and let my feet hang behind me, letting them take all my weight. The goblin behind me was kind enough to pull off my mask and take out the string that was holding my hair up in a ponytail. My hair spilled over my shoulders and down my back, it was probably the only thing, besides my face, that was not covered in dried blood. I wanted to lift my head to see what had changed but at the moment, the only thing I was focused on was tightening my muscles so my body didn't fall apart, so I just let it be and decided to worry about it later. When the goblins finally stopped, large, golden, double doors stood in front of us. The goblin walking behind me stepped forward and waved his hand over the lower key latch; instantly, the 46 locks on the 12 foot doors unlatched and the old doors swung open with a protesting creak. Behind the doors would have stunned anybody whom hadn't seen it before into a coma. It was a grand, palace sized, crystal garden that was made complete with a beautiful waterfall and lake that came from the back wall into the center. Even I, who has been here at least 10 times, had to take a moment to just stare. Most people who lived in the Underworld liked to call the place, "Hell's Heaven" because they believed that the garden was what Heaven looked like. To add to it's already mystical and mysterious appearance, most people hadn't even ever seen it, only a few creatures have ever been unfortunate to come here. The real name of the garden was Spraka, which, in an old ancient language, meant "Healing Pool". As you can guess, the thorns, glass petals, and the lake were meant to heal drastic injuries, so you can see why I say unfortunate. The only reason you would ever be taken here is if you were considered unfix able. If your body was so deeply damaged that most, if not all, was unrecognizable. Let me remind you, I have been taken here at least 10 times. The goblins dragged me into the garden and walked along the sand path to the edge of the lake. The goblin behind came around and helped set me into the lake, feet first, with my clothes still on. I breathed out calmly as the water started to work it's magic. The goblins lingered for a moment to make sure I was comfortable, then left, shutting the golden doors behind them. All the gashes, bruises and broken bones started to sting as they mended themselves and closed up, leaving behind, wouldn't you know it, no scares. I dipped my head underwater then came up again and looked out on the water. It was starting to turn a gentle pink around me because of all the blood. ((Ok, this is suppose to lead into a flash back right here but, just like my original, I don't feel like writing it at the moment. Rest assured, I will get around to it soon. I'm just too inpatient right now. I should get to it before the 7th chapter though so, yea... you won't have to wait too long. XP )) After a few relaxing minutes all my wounds had closed up and I felt no pain. I stood up carefully and got out of the lake with slow steps. I had been off my feet for 300 years, getting them to work correctly was a little difficult. I walked and spun and jumped to remember how to move then squeezed the water out of my dripping clothes. I set my shoulders and pulled open the large doors, "Now to face Kest."
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