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Kimsas needs to change Captain
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 Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:11 pm
This is the first comic idea I've taken this far, a mixture of college, lethargy, and lack of decisiveness preventing me from doing more. Comments will be posted in the I will be making webcomics^^ thread or will be moved. Thank you and hope you all enjoy^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:25 pm
this section is reserved for story info soon as I stop being lazy. Also, it seems I was lazy while writing the script for the second Weave(Weaves are chapters, Strands are the individual strips, and if I ever get as far as I hope, books are Tapestries mrgreen Yeah, right...), so I've got a lot of work to do before it's postable.
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Kimsas needs to change Captain
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Kimsas needs to change Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:26 pm
Weave One: The Teddy Bear Prince
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:27 pm
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Kimsas needs to change Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:34 pm
(Second strip) Maggie kneels down to hug Felicia, the light revealing her to be a kindly looking woman. "Not now, child. We've got work to do..."(First picture, close-up of Maggie hugging a crying Felicia, still from the brother's angle. First row, Left, half) Maggie moves to brother, knife still in hand, going to cut something(second picture, overhead view. First row, right, half)(third picture, Felicia going for the teddy bear she dropped. Second row, left, third)(fourth picture, Felicia huddling against the wall. Second row, middle, third)(fifth picture, Maggie looming over Felicia, Felicia looking up. Second row, right, third)(Sixth picture, Maggie approaching Felicia with Lucas slung over her shoulder and a piece of bloody cloth in her hand. Caption saying "We need to attach his soul to something" third row, left, half)(seventh picture, close-up of Felicia looking confused and teddy bear. Caption, "And I think I know just the thing..." third row, right, half)(eighth picture, Felicia with thinking face. fourth row, left, third)(ninth picture, Felicia with "ah hah!" sort of face. Fourth row, middle, third)(Tenth picture, Felicia with gleeful face, nodding happily, fourth row, right, third)
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:38 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 9:09 am
o_o; those are all really hard to follow...... consider puting some spacing in there?
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:20 pm
There's spacing, but keep in mind, these are scripts. I can't write proper dialog in story format and keep it interesting yet><
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 4:14 pm
Yeah, kinda hard to follow but it sounds like u have a rly good idea forming! Cant wait to actually see it!
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