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Monsters

MissAnnathropy

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Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 5:04 pm

Monsters
Fearsome creatures
with horrific smiles
devouring everything in their way
consuming the world with hatred and deceit
drowning in their own Shallowness
Monsters
Killing for fun
teeth bared in a crooked smile
Monsters
what Humans are becoming
Killing off species
wasting resources
can we change?
Or will we be stuck
in this dark pit
where everyone
bares their
crooked, Yellow teeth?
The question actually is will we change?
Will we go through all the challenges?
Will we make the World a better place?
Or will we abandon this place we call home?
Will we stop being the Monsters we are?
Only You can decide.

BY: Bubbles6673 (ShatteredMoon)

Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 6:18 pm

¤::::: I knew it was Jim's house. "...Well, then why'd you do it?" :::::¤

Well written, but there's nothing special about it.
It's a common idea about humans being monsters destroying Earth and if humans can change and become more environment-conscious.
However, you need to add a new concept to twist the initial idea.

¤::::: Because you asked me to. :::::¤