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 Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 6:06 pm
ok in this post the person above you ses a word and you make a poem out of it il give you an example lets say the word is time.
tumbling from the air
indulging is my fall
mesmerized without a care
eminent was the end to all
and thats the poem the next word is topic
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Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 7:06 pm
Ah, you mean an acrostic poem? Alright i'll give it a bash.
Twisting and snaking around us,
Over all manner of men,
People crave it yet cannot use it,
In drudgery and joy,
Constantly making fools of us all.
Although i cheated and used time as a theme xD
Ok the next word is pathogen mrgreen Nah nah, how about: Breath?
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 9:08 pm
ok i will do both pathogen and Breath
pathogen
pinned to the ground unable to move
angry and distrait trying to prove
that i can survive no matter the cost
hoping that in the process i wont git lost
open are my shackles i'm free at last
giting to my feet i stumble over the past
even though i'm injured i begin to walk
noing that after this il never be able to talk
it is a metaphor of haw you feel win you are sick and yes i no knowing is spelled k.n.o.w.i.n.g not noing but noing starts with a n so Ha
Breath
battered and bruised pain in every step
running trying to stay ahead of the beast
ending my life would be a shame
against this secret i keep in vane
thundering heart ready to burst
hoping il never again feel this thirst
ok just so you no he is the beast. he is running frum himself as in he is a vampire
the next word is love
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 5:18 pm
Heyyyy! This is awesome!
Lucious though the air is cold
Ousted grapes, I need you so
Valiant on the dew-spun vine
Effortless I pick you, I love wine!
heh.
Here's a great new word for the next one: Precious
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:32 pm
Precious ok il do that
panting hoping to catch my breath
running out of option's for every mile
ending this chase would mean my death
counting on the chance i can keep this up for a while
i run after it that car as you drive away
ordering you to stop "i cant run forever"
under this burden of you running away
so i shout come back my precious and stay forever
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