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Andru Noyola
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 6:18 pm


Season of Dead Trees


Can you feel the misty rain?
___I come to find I forget my pain
I'm all alone and I do not know
___I've forgotten my worries
___-and my sorrow

Can you feel the mystic breeze?
___I come to find I forget the disease
I'm all alone and I do not see
___The innocence that was taken from me

Can you feel the muddy ground?
___I feel not a thing - I hear not a sound
I feel so cold, yet I feel so free
___The light in the darkness getting closer to me...

Can you feel death's whisper near?
___As it holds me close, I shed a tear
I feel so free - so I'm letting go
___There will be no more worries...
___There will be no sorrow. . . . .


___


This poem is now a full song, as I've written over 6 minutes of music, including two guitar solos. Tell me what you think, and feel free to give me your interpretation =)
PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:26 pm


:{D
I like this.
I know this doesn't relate to the topic, but I noticed in every post of mine the very first thing I typed is :{D.
o_o"
Anyway, I like this. ^^

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Andru Noyola
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 9:39 am


:{D

Haha, thanks a lot, and no I didn't notice that rofl
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