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You can't have pokemon of the same species.Ex.your Magmar and Magmortar.

He's not even allowed to use a second level evolution because of the species clause.

'nuff said about the species thing....btw on magmar,those 3 spd EVs do it absolutely no good....if you use magmortar instead,you might want to give it a white herb cuz after one overheat,its useless......otherwise... mrgreen fire blast is kinda useless with machamp,especially with a sp.atk minus nature.....try thunder/ice punch to get rid of those pesky fly types,maybe?btw.somethin simple like a drifblim could resist machamp easy....widen its type coverage...i guess,with the moves listed before this sentence sweatdrop ......Shuckle and speed don't mix.oh wait is that Special Defense?never mind then.shuckle is good.with electivire,try an expert belt for super deadliness :3....
and i'm pretty sure heatran isn't allowed.if so,then i guess its ok.

seriously this teams has alot of holes in it (i am not trying to be mean). shukle is a very bad choice may have good def and sp def but really bad everything eles. This team has an extreme weekness to absoulutly anything water. All the move sets are bad bad bad magnortar has to many stab moves and what is with hyper beam not a good choice you should replace hyper beam and either flame thrower or overheat. some people can pull of surprise attaks like hyperbeam but no offense by the look of your team you wouldn't be able to. And for crying out loud give elctiver a stab move get ride of fire blast and ev it in hp if you have nothing eles to ev it in or better yet speed. your team also has an extreme weekness to ground and nothing to absorb it. I recomened changing shuckle to a uxie or cress as the both have levitate and both are great walls lots of pokemon like to come and set up on walls so i would give it a stats move like toxic so you can stall it out or for uxie yawn forcing them to switch to avoid sleep and if the do let it sleep you can switch to a counter for that pokemon. also you need a pokemon to wall water moves like an empoleon who has alot of resistances and will be able to stop a sucuine sweep.

Really you should base your team around one pokemon. for this team i would sugest heatran but start over with it and make it all sp atk and give it a choice scarf. to reflesh heatrans full sweeping capabilities you need a pokemon to draw out a fire attack for heatran to switch into to get the boost and then a pokemone to switch into the enevitable earthquake like uxie or cress. Really i hate to say this but go to smogon it is a website it has lods of good thought out move sets that could really help you join their forums and next time they are doing one of there tutor tournament thingys were you get a tutor assiagned to you and they teach you and help you become better ( i have never done it before but i think you should). there are a lot more things i could say like focus sash on i a non lead pokemon is a big no no and evs only work in 4s so 255 evs is a no no do 252 instead and put 4 in another stat.

i am not trying to be mean with this i am only doing what you asked helping with your team. And i am wondering why everyone eles who posted talked about the clauses instead of seeing the obvious (not trying to be mean again lol).

if you having any questions or need any advice just pm me. getting into competitive battling can be very hard i know but i takes a bit of practice lol. i do competive battling on mIRC which is a very cut throat lol. also you should go to serebii and go on their wifi chat and test out your teams there first or better yet download shoddy battle simulator to test out teams first.
i think that is about it for me i have probly already said to much =3

Why point out minor points when more major issuse are at hand

i pointed thoes facts out lol if he can' corodonate a team of 6 he won't be able to a team of 9 and it is not like he uses all nine pokemon in the battle he only chosses. it is best to get down a good strong team of six before going to nine.

before you were only pointing out clause a minor problem here.

I know that you pointed that all out but I was just saying that that's what he should be focusing on first.Of course I know that he can't use all nine in a battle but it's better to see what his options are.I plan out which pokemon I use and then make the team.The clause leaves him one pokemon short so therefore his team is incomplete which is why I stated the clause in the first place so thats why I wanted to see his whole team.We obviously have a different form of strategy of how we make our team so I'm not going to argue any further.