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 Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:03 pm
This is where you can give tips on how to write better. Anyone can post here.
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:30 pm
For God's sake, no freaking auto hitting! Give people a chance.
No freaking auto dodging either, if you are at point blank range with gun held to your held.....well let's just say you are no Vash the Stampede. But you can try to dodge at mid and long range. Just be fair about it. Perhaps maybe some bullet hit?
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:20 pm
Thank you for that lovely piece of advice, but you do realize that this is the Stories subforum and not the Roleplaying subforum, right?
I got a tip: Use a dictionary and thesaurus when writing. Also, learn to take criticism. It is essential when writing.
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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 6:17 pm
try to make a picture in the reader's mind, i know i like reading things when i can see what is going on through the character's eyes. 3nodding
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RenegadeJester Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:58 pm
I dislike reading but I like writing. And I like how Sean said something for Rp's. Not the right place but definetly true. And I like the Vash the Stampede reference. It's like the only anime I don't shun.
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