|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 7:49 pm
My story is in my journal. Will somebody PLEASE tell me what you think of both entries?
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 12:27 pm
It's not really a story; it's more of a play. If you want it to be a story, don't show who is talking by saying things such as
Novus: >insert what novus says here<
Instead, you would say
"This is what Novus is saying," said Novus.
I would include more details and description. Why are they in space, what are they doing, what is the history of the event happening, etc.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 11:28 am
As stated above, it's not really a story as such but it's a good concept, well the last God was vague enough to interest me. The other one just left everything to the imagination.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 9:54 pm
well... the thing is... it's not actually... suppossed to be a book. It's really a script for a movie I plan to make in the future.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
