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The Threshold Of Greatness

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Aluren


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 2:47 pm


This is a little something I wrote back in 2004, back then I was really in love with a special girl, who would have known that a couple years later she would happen to betray me in an amazingly cruel fashion :S

Since I'm Hispanic, I rarely write poetry in english, so bare with me If there are some mistakes in here D:

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We stand in the threshold of greatness, of joy, of all, with lovely love; in a hall full of entryways, with chances of everything and more. And although it could end badly, the frantic bliss of today, the sweet and the sour, they greatness of each hour, the hours, the change, the transformation, our great expectations… will be worth it.

I may know no happier moment than each passing one with you or your thought, with its depth and awe, with the longing, the love, the calm, the silent storm, the ecstasy of your nearness, the agony of your mystery… And for opening these doors for me I love you and the world you roam, as the man who loves a lonely field where a tulip has sprouted and grown.

Some doors lead to heaven, some look out to the sea. Yet, the only thing worth knowing is that they all lead to doors to somewhere, no matter what somewhere may be. We may disappear into different rooms, perhaps tranquilly or in frenzy, but the eternal smell of your proximity will have changed me forever into a being that has known of happiness and youth. Let’s love, let’s live, let’s love it all.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 2:59 pm


Wow!
That is beautiful.

I adore how you capture the raw emotion that you held at the time. You acknowledge the future, but also embrace the present. It's stunning.

I would love to hear some of your other works.
Keep up the amazing work.

Sira_Black
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freedom4ring2009

PostPosted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:43 pm


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♪ las lágrimas de escape de amor mí como yo leí esto...i think thats how you say it...well nevertheless: tears of love escape me as i read this...lol...im taking spanish so bear with the above languuage...it was worth a try! ♫





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