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Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:47 am
Name: I'kin ( Eye-Kin) Age: 17 turns Gender: Male Orientation: Kinda Bi? Rank: Weyrling Personality: I'kin, on the outside, appears rather emotionless. He refuses to let people into his 'circle'. He has learned, the hard way, that people don't generally like to accept the scarey looking boy into thier life. Even if they did he would rather be left alone to play the piano or simply stare at the sky. His mind is filled with questions, most of which he really doesn't care to answer. He is, in all truth, a romantic undernieth the cold outside. His love, Keeta, is one that he would accept into his arms i she were pregnant with his best friends child. His mind is slightly twisted, his dark brown eyes seeing life through a 'filter' of sorts. He does not see things as 'this is this and that is that' instead of 'this is here because that needs to have it there' meaning he believes everything is here for a reason. Humans are here because dragons need them, and humans made dragon to need them because Pern needed them. Some have called him crazy, other a genious in disguise. I'kin just sees himself as I'kin. He is simplly complex. He seems depressed and cold on the outside, but in truth he just doesn't like being emotional, and sees those being who are 'emotional' as a lower form of intelligence, and he'll tell you that as well. He's outside of the 'social circle' and really doesn't fit into an area.
Description: I'kin is a moderately tall boy, standing at six feet even. Black hair thats long in the front and short in the back hides half of his face. His eyes are a dark brown with naturally dark eyelashes. For the most part he is rather thin, he weighs only about 115 pounds, at the most. He dresses mostly in black, or dark clothes, though he does variate from this pattern once in a while, going for the occasional white outfit. His main features are his dark brown eyes which scream 'Tell me what your thinking', and his well toned body. He is moderately tanned, but not deeply so because of his adversion to bright lights. He is rather intimidating, the same eyes that say 'its ok, tell me' can also burn with an uncontrollable rage that frightens even the most macho of me. Tired of the annoying being in his old weyr, he left, following those riders who made Final Haven.
[picture coming soon]
History: Iokin was born outside of the weyr to a somewhat wealthy family, but as old fairy tales prove time and time again wealth doesn't make happiness. Despite having everything one could want I'kin was very unhappy. His parents hated him for his appearance and the way he acts. Instead of flirting with the girls and wrestling with the boys he preferred to stay inside and work on his music. He is a musical genius, but has never wanted to be a harper. So one day, out of despiration he went to a Weyr with a Brown rider named R'lin, who was visiting his daughter. He took the lessons with grace, frightening all those who dared to mock him. It wasnt long until he impressed Nalenthith, the ever romantic blue. Not long after he impressed Nalenthith he 'impressed' Keeta, another newly impressed weyrling. They fell in love fast, despite the objection of her brother.
Dragon Name: Nalenthith Color: Blue Age: 3 turns Description: The hide of this blue is a dark, navy like color. Smaller speckles of lighter shades of blue, silver, and white decorate all along the length of his body. A brighter, bigger combo of white and silver mark a pattern in between his eyes, marking a mottled, ball-shape and dwindling out to a point at the back of his skull. Oddly enough, it looks like a falling star. Nalenthith stands at a 26 feet long, though his wings make up for the smaller size. Personality: Nalenthith always has been a dreamer, that's for sure. He's always staring off into space, in his own thoughts. But when he's actually present and in frame of mind, this blue can be quite the romantic. He both sashays when he walks or flies, as if he itches to dance. He is very laid back, prefering to watch and learn, much like his rider. Color Code: 000066
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Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 8:15 pm
First off, if his dragon is three turns old, he's no longer a Weyrling, at least around here he's not.
Secondly, where is Final Haven? This is a canon Pern. That there wasn't even a Telgar edited in to it's place leads me to believe that you have copied and pasted this profile from elsewhere and that will not fly with me. We are unique - I expect your characters and profiles to be.
As there is no Keeta in the Weyr already, if you intend to keep him as a Weyrling, I recommend taking out the parts about her. I won't reserve character slots for a character not made. Though I doubt anyone's going to suddenly turn up and make a ton of green weyrlings, I like to imagine that it's a possibility.
You state that he is complex. Instead of telling me, show me.
His parents hated him because of the way he looked and acted? Elaborate. This doesn't really make any sense to me.
What lessons did he take with R'lin? You had no sort of specification. Also, be specific about which Weyr. We have a nice couple of them. Saying the weyr is very vague and not what I like at all. What hold is he from, anyway?
I'll be working on your other profiles. Stay tuned.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:01 am
Sorry, they are pretty much WIP right now. ^^; Keeta is a charectar of Ryu's, she said she'd be adding her.
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