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Icedangel11

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:52 am


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Name: Joana ( Joe-on-ah )

Age: 16 turns

Gender: Female

Rank: Candidate

Sexuality: Straight

Appearance: Joana is a beautiful young girl, dark skin, full lips, and all around rather gorgeous. But this dosnt go to her head. She thinks that make-up and other such things are best saved for when trying to impress someone. She prefers to dress in loose clothes. She always wears her necklace, which was given to her by her mother. She also always wears something to cover her legs, which are covered in scars from her youth. She refuses to talk about them.

Personality: Joana is a pleasant person to be around. She's best described as 'soft'. She prefers to hum to herself while doing her chores and only speaks when spoken to. She has a lovely vioce, soft and comforting like a mothers. She's a hard worker, believing that if you want something to be done you should do it. Unfortunately her personality is pretty one sided, she doesnt have a temper, at all. When presented with someone who means her harm she only smiles and gives them gifts or compliments. She seems to have no trace of self preservation and will do anything thing to help someone in need, for this reason she has been called 'dumb' or 'fool hearted' but in truth she just trusts everyone.

Joana also seems to lack both extremes of the emotional spectrum, love and hate. While she likes everyone, she doesn't really know what loving someone means. She can 'love' children, but cannot love a man, or rather she does not know how to. The only thing she truly hates is pure silence, it makes her ears ring. If you've ever looked at her legs you'd notice her scars. If you ask her what happened.. well.. she wouldn't tell you. Maybe they are connected to why she's so nice..? Even with her past tramatising experiences she's all together way to trusting of people. She normaly has to have someone tell her when somebody is 'pulling her leg', but even then she doesn't seem to learn that people can't always be trusted.

History: She grew up in a large family, all adopted children. She is the oldest of her thirteen brothers and sisters, so therfore had to do all of the work. When she was still little, if she'd throw a tantrum or show any negitive emotions she'd be sliced along the leg, leaving several scars. Eventually she stopped having any and all bad emotions. She was searched to Telegar Weyr when she was younger, and grew very fond of dragons and thier kin. She used to be called things like 'stupid' and 'fool hearted' because when she was shoved to the ground she gave her attacker a hug. She was teased constantly, for the first week, then it seemed her peers got bored. She'd laugh along with all thier jokes at her expense. If you asked her about her past she would simply tell you 'I grew up taking care of my family, I miss them a lot.' She refuses to remember the horrific experiences that led to her scars, even if she wanted to remember it seems she can't.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 8:28 pm



This one also appears to have been copy and pasted from somewhere else.

A twelve to thirteen year old is still in their youth. Referring to someone that young as having gotten something in their youth is kind of confusing, seeing as she's still fairly young.

What heat, we're in Telgar Weyr with a ton of snow right now. Even if this was seasonal, it doesn't make sense.

I should hope she can't love a man, she's 12 flippin' Turns old. What kind of rig do you think we're running here?

She's the oldest child with thirteen siblings? At twelve? That's pretty irresponsible of some people. Not going to say it can't happen, but all the same, it's pretty unbelievable.

Once again with this Final Haven nonsense. Fix it.

There has been more to her life than trauma. Give me something more to work or think about with than the "in her youth" scenario.

She was searched when she was younger? Like what, four?

Rewrite this. Your continuity with her age is throwing me off a lot. I'll swing back around once it's fixed and take another look.

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Icedangel11

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 5:02 pm


Her actual age was supposed to be more around fifteen-sixteen turns. But I read something that said no candidates, so I made her younger. Kinda forgot to fix the rest of her story. Yes, she is a premade from just a bit ago, never used, I jus tput in the name of an old weyr I used to lurk before it died.
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