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 Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:26 pm
I made this because when I get bored I make poems so I open this topic to all to come and express themselves. There will be no making fun of other peoples poems or else!
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:40 pm
Sometimes
Sometimes I'm so stupid
Sometimes I want to die
Sometimes I feel like no one cares about me
Sometimes I want to rip my cold heart out
Sometimes fear controls my life
You always cared
You were always there
You never wanted to bring me pain
You always held my hand
Yet,
I went and stabed you in the back
I watched you bleed on the floor beging me for help
I felt nothing
I killed you and now I will never be able to tell you
I'm sorry...
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:41 pm
Love
Why is love so wierd
Why does it make us do stupid things
Why does it make me hurt
I love
I fall
I cry then get up again
Love is messed up
Love is hate
Love is caring
Why did this love turn into
Betrayl
Hate
Sorrow
Anger
I riped my heart out for love and I will never get it back
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:45 pm
Why
Why did this happen to me
Why does this hurt so much
Why can't I forget your face
I killed you
I stabed you
I watched you drown in your own blood
Why do I feel this way
Why can't I just forget you and move on
Why can't I live again
I took you and killed you
I took you and made you wish for death
I took you a spilled your blood on the rocks
Why will you not leave me
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:46 pm
For you
For you I died
For you I cried
For you I lost
For you I screamed
I loved you
I cared for you
I wanted to be with you forever
And
You stabed me
You let me bleed
You watched me drown in my own blood
You felt nothing and walked away
For you I cried
For you I died
For you I threw away my life
For you...
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:47 pm
Btw I'm not goth or emo, but most of these poems reflect how I've been feeling lately.
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 3:33 pm
Muffins
Muffins,
Oh Muffins,
So tasty,
And fluffins,
Muffins,
Oh Muffins,
so many!
I'm stuffins!
Muffins,
Oh Muffins,
to resist,
is so tuffins!
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 3:02 pm
Feedback for Iceears... *noms on feedback*
Lolz the only thing I could see that could use some improvment on, is the first words of every sentence. Maybe mix it up abit? Just to make it more interesting.
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Xx--XNekoSenpaiX--xX Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 3:35 pm
One from the land of Kings Long forgotten;
One from the hearth witch still holds the spark;
One from the Day world were two eyes are watching;
And one from the twilight to be one with the dark.
MY FAV PROPHASY FROM TEH BOOK...The Night World. I didn't make this up lmao i just felt like postin it. also...JOIN MI NIGHT WORLD RP
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 3:37 pm
Sounds cool.
What rp.... I want to join!!!!!!!!!!!
if I like it..... o.0
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:02 pm
yukiyuki5 MuffinsMuffins, Oh Muffins, So tasty, And fluffins, Muffins, Oh Muffins, so many! I'm stuffins! Muffins, Oh Muffins, to resist, is so tuffins!
lol
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:12 pm
YES FEDBACK!!!!!! Ok... Kreacher post in family fued!!!!!!!!!!!! Or whatever it's called....
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 6:37 pm
... Iceears are you feeling ok? the poems are good but you emotionaly are you ok?
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 6:41 pm
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm fine! Just sometimes school gets hard and I'm not very popular so sometimes I just feel a little sad.... Poems is the way I express myself.... Emotionally I'm fine!
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 6:47 pm
hows these three
Souls
Let the wind sweep your fears and worries away.
Let the soil take your thoughts
Let the trees steal your soul.
Let the rain wash away your blood that I've spilled
Let the birds feast on your heart that I've stopped
and
Let your sightless eyes rot.
Your mind is gone
Your soul set free
All because Your heart was stopped
By the Knife you gave
As a gift of love.
By, ME!!!
Death
Death is easy, simple, kind.
Will it be any easier if I leave the one I love behind?
Heavens not enough if I can’t remember him when I’m there
But if I do die will he remember me and my life?
I dumped my cares and problems on one person
He cared for me better then a brother
I stabbed him in the back
And watched him die before me
I stood there and cried
As he died
I loved him the whole while
But he didn’t even know I did
So once again those thoughts come back
But now I know my attack
Was all it took to crack My heart
And take my mind off its track
By, ME!!!
Sleep
Go to sleep Close you eyes,
and dream of broken butterflies,
that tore their wings againced a thorn,
you know the pain that they have borne.
Silver metal shines so bright
scatlet blood that feels so right,
Dream of that Blood trickling down,
And wake up just before you drown,
The moonlight shining off your tears,
as you bleed out your worst fears,
so tonight when you start to cry,
whisper this little lullaby.
"Hushaby baby, your almost dead,
you don't have a pulse and your pillow is red,
your family hates you
your friends let you bleed,
sleep tight with a knife,
'Cause that's all you'll need.
Rockaby Baby, Broken and scarred,
you didn't know life would be so hard,
time to end the pain you hid so well,
and down will come baby,
Back home to HELL."
Author unknown
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