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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 10:43 pm
Player Name: Sado Shimizu Character Name: Sado Shimizu Position: Division 4 Captain Character Age: 187 / 21 Date of Birth: 3/22 Height: 185.42 cm Weight: 190 lbs Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Blonde Parentage: Eiji Shimizu (Father) Asami Shimizu (Mother) Siblings/Children: Shouta Shimizu (Brother, Deceased) Sexuality: Heterosexual Descriptive Markings: Burn mark that runs from the left side of his face to the base of his neck. Personality: Sado is a nice guy who gives respect to everyone, regardless of their rank. He is known for being kind hearted and caring towards others. However, he is not one to mess with, he is an excellent fighter, but he prefers to stay on the sidelines and help those who need it. Hates being reminded of his past. Character Strengths: Can deal with the sight of blood, team player, master in Tae Kwon Do Character Weaknesses: Easily distracted, feels rushed all the time; he is unable to fight at long distances. Likes: Reading, helping others in need, dogs, nighttime. Dislikes: Not being helpful, cats, hates it when people don’t take him seriously. Favorite Food: Korean Ribs
Zanpaktou Name: Hikari (Radiance) Sealed Form: A katana that has a mahogany sheath, the handle is white and the blade is stainless steel. Spirit Form: Hikari is a large, white, ancient Chinese Dragon. She is also known as the Bringer of Good Health. She is very kind hearted, much like how Sado is today. She revealed herself to Sado when he was in the hollow attack many years ago. Shi-Kai: “Hogo suru, Hikari!” (Protect, Hikari) His sword takes the form of a white staff embedded with blue sapphires at the top and bottom of the shaft; the staff is as long as his body. (1) Iyashi no o^roar (Healing Aurora): Sado uses his staff to heal targets at a very rapid rate from a distance. The healing is 2X faster than the greatest of healing techniques so Sado is able to get soldiers back into the field quickly. (2) Enerugi^sutoraiku (Energy Strike): Sado’s reiatsu is absorbed into his staff and is concentrated into energy. Whenever he hits someone or something with his staff short bursts of energy is released dealing more damage to his enemies (3) Shougekiha (Shock Wave): Sado’s staff absorbs a large amount of reiatsu and he drills it into the ground producing a shockwave that causes the ground to collapse, or simply knock down his opponents.
Ban-Kai: “Housha no sora ni, subeteno ikari wo hikidasu!” (“Radiate in the skies, unleash all of your fury!”) Sado’s staff zanpakuto merges with his body, turning him into a Half Dragon. (1) Tama seimei no (Sphere of life): A large, green sphere forms around Sado, pushing out those with an evil aurora and keeping those with good hearts inside. Those inside the sphere are healed in a matter of seconds. (does not cure death) The barrier has a radius of 80 feet in all directions, including underground. The barrier is impenetrable, and can only be held for approximately 5 minutes. (2) Doragonsukin (Dragon Skin): His skin is as hard as a dragons, it is very hard to cut through. Slashing techniques will work, just not as well. (This is not an ability, more like a passive trait.) (3) Ryuu no mai (Dance of the Dragon): Sado’s reiatsu explodes and his speed increases tremendously. He charges his opponent and does a combination attack with his claw like gauntlets and with his dragon like boots, these attacks occur at an extraordinary rate. This attack can last only 15 seconds, but it does lots of damage. Combined with his Tae Kwon Do skills, he becomes one hard force to stop.
Kidou Bakkudo: Master of all Bakudo Hado: Up to 58. Path Specialty: Bakudo, healing techniques Abilities: Mastered Shunpo, healing techniques are stronger due to his mastery in all healing techniques.
Biography: Sado and his family all died in a tragic car accident. When he came to soul society, he was able to reunite with them. They all lived in Soul Society for a long while. Sado and his brother would play out in the forest just outside of Rukongai. One day a hollow attack occurred in the forest. Shouta, Sado’s brother, was trapped by a hollow. Instead of going to help his brother, he left him in efforts to save his own life. Shouta had been killed in that attack. Sado could not forgive himself for just leaving his younger brother for dead. He vowed that he would protect everyone in Soul Society, even if it meant he would die himself. He ran away from home and attended the Shinigami Academy. He graduated as 2nd of the top 5 of his class. He was recruited to Division 4 because of his extraordinary healing abilities that came along with his Shi-Kai. Soon after he joined division 4, he discovered his Ban-Kai in an attack in Karakura town. He later succeeded the former captain as she retired.
Theme Song: Passion - Se7en
Role Play example: Sado walked through the gates, hands folded across his chest. ~Geez, this place is like a ghost town…~ Sado thought to himself as he walked about the barracks of Squad 4. Sado knew that squad 4 wasn’t among the more popular of the Gotei 13. He knows that when people think of the Protection squads, they think of shinigami who go and slay hollow, not of the ones who stand on the sidelines healing those wounded in battle. Sado didn’t mind though, he knew that squad 4 was just as important as all of the other squads. He walked over to his office and sat in his desk, and pulled out his favorite book, and started to read, then suddenly *BOOM* Sado jumped up, “What the…?” Sado shunpoed out of his office to the top of the barracks along with his other subordinates. They searched for the source of the explosion. Sado pulled down his goggles, and continued to search; he sees the smoke rising from the Research Bureau. “Go, now! To the research Bureau! Check for any wounded and report back here!” Then they were gone. ~Just when you think the peace will last for awhile, something like this pops up. ~
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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 3:15 am
Hmm, I have a couple of queries.
1. Your Shikai heals at 5 times the rate of the best healing Kido? I am pretty sure that means you just have to look at them and they are healed. Try making it double? Or even three times I just think five is abit to much.
2. I think Having a bankai with Four Attacks on it is abit too much. I think you should cut it down to three.
3. Tama Sermei No; Do you know how large 1000Feet is?
4. Doragonfo^Mu; Why don't you take the merging form and make it what happens when you release Bankai? That way you will only have 3 Bankai attakcs, and then you could just tweak the other attacks around it. (Just an idea)
5. Doragonsukin; Why don't you make that a sub effect of Doragon^Mu?
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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 7:38 am
No problem, ill let you know when i fix it
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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 1:01 pm
Ok i fixed it, tell me what you think now
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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 1:35 pm
I like that but the third one change the claws to claw like gloves/gauntlets.
That makes it stick to the Shinigami stlye Zanpaktou.
And your Accepted. Welcome Captain.
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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 2:15 pm
Yay! Thank you very much kind sir! 4laugh
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