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Dynexya
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 8:43 pm


Username: Kenpachi_Kurosaki
Character's Name: Narishi Kishugia
Character's Age: 18/200
Gender: Male
Sexuality: straight
Race: Arrancar
Espada in charge of you:
Rank: Hueco Mundo Leader
Fraccions:

Likes:
1. Being active
2. Making orders

Dislikes:
1. Being lazy
2. Insubordination
3. Shinigami's

Personality: This arrancar makes jokes even when fighting, but whenever you insult something personal to him, he goes beserk and rampages. He is very active and about all the time and tries to get along with the others. His loyalty is outstanding to his superiors. He is seen most of the time with a small grin on his face.

Appearance:
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Mask Fragments: Dragon like features embodies his whole body.

Hollow Hole and Number Location: Hole in his stomach and he has no number.

Zanpakuto

Zanpakuto Name: Kokushikio Kaizer (Mover of the elements)

Zanpakuto Appearance:

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b]Zanpakuto Element: Multi-based

Zanpakuto Type: Offensive and Defensive

Zanpakuto Release Incantation: "Bend" Kokushikio

Resureccion Appearance:

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Resureccion Ability: He has to ability to bend the elements that are around him. He can only use that ability when around that certain element. Like he can use fire only when near something burning is near him. The wind, earth, water elements are always available. He can only use 2 elements per battle due to inexperience, and each can be used for a limited time when activated.

Attack #1: Earth Crash- Narishi can use the earth to grow or descend to either attack or defend him self. Usually able to do things like stand and make a pedestal high in the air to create a distance between his opponent and their allies.

Attack #2: Wind Boost- Narishi can deflect most projectiles by calling the forces of the wind and sky elements to make a gust of wind to push them away.

Attack #3:[/b ] Aqua - Narishi's resurrection form has excellent control of water. He uses it to lash at opponents or to either lock his opponents in a prison of water that can't be broken from the outside.

Attack #4: Flame Corrosion- This is one of his resurrection's most powerful attack due to the fact that fire is hard to come by and he can use it to grow in the oxygen. He uses this to mostly restrain his opponents or rather he takes and uses it for multiple attacks.

Segunda Resurrection:

Segunda Resureccion Appearance:

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Segunda Resureccion Ability:

Attack #1,2, and 3 They are all more powerful forms of his previous form. He can do more attacks since this form has a better control of how to use the elements correctly. He in this form can use up to all of the elements in battle simultaneous.

Character History: Narishi was always able to see spirits and one day he was able to fend off a hollow from killing his family. He didn't know how he did it, but when he was on the verge of finding it out, he was killed by a car out of nowhere. He was living outside the soul society and found to have immense spiritual powers by one of the members of the court guard squad. He enrolled in the acadamy and excelled perfectly graduating in the elite class. Then he was killed by a hollow and was resurrected as an arrancar. He was founded by a group of arrancar and stayed with them training everyday. He was fighting one day, and when he was being beaten he lost all control and blacks out. He awakens to see al of his enemies wiped out and the onlookers said that he went crazy and another figure was the one who killed the army of enemies. Though when it was done., he was the only one seen in the onslaught. Narishi always felt a presence wanting to come out. He finds Aizen who one day saw the other side of Narishi and Aizen was forced to seal the presence inside of him into his zanpakuto, making it his resurrection. Unless he was able to break the seal he wasn't able to reach full potential, but was still powerful without it.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:43 am


I know you have already been accepted but your have made a mistake with you awfully odd first release.

You put;
Resureccion Ability: He has to ability to bend the elements that are around him. He can only use that ability when around that certain element. Like he can use fire only when near something burning is near him. The wind, earth, and earth element is always available. He can only use 2 elements per battle due to inexperience, and each can be used for a limited time when activated.

The bit in bold you put wind earth and earth.
Just thought I'd let you know as I wish to know what the third element you wish to be able to.... bend. Is.
>.> You sound like that avatar program. xP

And I take it you can only use your shikai attacks when the element is near?
Cuase other wise your character has no weakness' what so ever.
>.> I think being able to control all the elements is abit strong for an ability but w.e. it was accepted so.

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Dynexya
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 4:07 am


yeah i rushed it on accident cause I had to go at that time, but Ill fix it. His weakness is that he can only use what's available to him , but he can only use 2 of the elements at a time in battle cause it greatly exhausts him. I'll fix that shortly thanks. I accidently put the single earth in there so it was to say wind and earth elements. And dang it does sound like that avatar show. I didn't notice that XD. He can use fire water earth and wind. If you like I'll turn it down to 3 elements then if it makes my character better?
PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:30 am


If I am honest I don't see how they are Weakness' but like I said your character has already been accepted by someone else.
I would think that turning it down to three would be better.

BUT as I have said like 8 million times now, Its already been accepted.
So If you want to make any changes its completely up to you.

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Dynexya
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:30 am


Ok thanks.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 11:08 am


3 attacks would have been good, Perhaps the 4th could the the last ditch effort attack. If all else fails...

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:02 pm


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Hmm why would you have a last ditch move when all your attacks cover every element?
And Also you say that you can only use an element your near.
So thats a downfall?
Only You state in your thing that you can use water, earth and wind whenever you want. :/ Not really a downfall or a weakness.
This character just sounds like one big gm.

Also I have seen him post quite alot. Never seen him do more than one paragraph. >> That's the down fall with the sample test.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 3:07 am


He say maybe, but I'm limiting my person to 3 of the elements. I am changing them the earth wouldn't be included in it. I think that's that one I need to drop cause earth is basically everywhere, so limited to water, wind and fire.

But It also states that I can only use 1 at a time which is basically a weakness to my knowledge and I'll even put that it takes 10 post to switch between them in my first resurrection and 5 tin my 2nd resurrection.

I am using techniques kinda like Toshiro when I'm using water, but that whole (Using all the water in the atmosphere thing) Isn't what I'm going for cause I believe that I didn't say that He's mastered all techniques yet. And I'm not saying that It is the ultimate elemental zanpakuto here.

I am just trying to maybe provide a challenge as a leader. If I have to change things, you guys are the pro's, just tell me and I'll do it, but it's already been approved anyway so. Not trying to gm in any way.

Oh and the sample RP was with me and my friend Ankoku, which when I'm actually in a battle I actually told Villain that i added the part where I edited the last 2 paragraphs where it went from me and him ending the fight at 2 paragraphs to me killing him, which I can get very creative especially as a arrancar which I can do maybe 2 or 3 good paragraphs per post. "If just casual conversation, I don't like to post much, but detail, yes. I haven't really had much of a chance to fight in the guild and needed to get adjusted to the way you guys Rp.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 3:18 am


Okay, I don't see using one at a time as a weakness.
Its a weakness that is created because you have so much choice.
And Again not one in my eyes.
But The Not being able to switch in a single post is good and I respect
you for offering a weakness like that.
Also, saying something like he hasn't mastered it yet is bull plop.
Your the same as every other rper in the world.
Putting a weakness like that just gets overridden, not on purpose heck
I'd do it too. But you forget about that as you are fighting.
Finally We don't exactly Rp any differently to your sample.
Only, I would like to see more detailed posts from you in the future.
I mean you can post that much about something (Refering to the post you just made) Why can't you in rp all the time. :3
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