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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:41 am
i am taking a novel writing class and need some helpful hints on my story ideas. and once i start writing it (i cant start till noveber) i will post and you can tell me what you think. so at the moment I have three story ideas and i need to decide which one I want to write. problem is i love all of them. so if you could help it would be nice.
story idea #1 a girl named Karsmen lives on a foating island called Tera' uhn. like the rest of her race she has be taught how to fight. at the moment she is the strongest female and can beat most of the boys. she ends ups falling off tera' uhn and lands in modern day life. she is taken in by Jessica who is a falling medical student. they have a clash of culture but become friends. while this is happening Karsmen's mother Azera jumps down with a boy named Ren, and begin searching for her. although Ren dosn't know it yet. he is in love with Karsmen (he dosn't know what to call his feelings) they begin trying to find Karsmen and Ren find himself along the way. the evil Alizar came down from tera' uhn some time ago. (he wasn't good enough up there so he came down to make an empire) and has become a successful bussiness man. when Karsmen fall he desides to use her to expain his empire. when she refuses he desides that she must be eliminated. it is up to Jessica to keep Karsmen safe. when Azera left Tera' uhn she left the half dragon/half human delmos in charge (Azera is part of the ruling houses) will he be able to keep the ruling houses in order before Azera cames back. will Ren and Azera be able to find Karsmen, and will Jessica find it in herself to save Karsmen. or will they all fall. idea #2 Katie is a normal girl. until she meets Ken. he means the world to her, but he is a vampire that is trying to kill her. Kayta(is a girl) is a ferurn (another type of vampire) who is hunting ken.after Kayta kills Ken katie then learns that there has been a war going on between the vampries and the Ferurns for ages. she learns that unlike vampires Kayta is alive and need to eat normal food as well as blood. she people repoduce like humans and can turn into anly animal they bite. she also learns that the war is heavly tiped in favor of the Vampries. and for some reason they seemed to be after her. katie also learns that she is a seer. she see the world difforent then even the vampires. all seerers have two other abillitys other then their sight (the abillity to solve any problem, read coded text, see invisablethigs, ect). hers are furture sight and can walk though walls. together with kayta she fights to keep her life and find out the truth about the war between vampire and the ferurn.
idea #3 Kadja is a Darken, a race of people with animal like ears and tails. the take care of the earth. longago when humans where begining to expand they tare up the earth. this started a war between human and the Darkens.( who have taken it apon them selves to protect the earth) in modern day the war is forrgottten by most humans. but the darkens still harber a deep hatered to humans. Kadja(who is the youngest prince) is off in is favorite spot when he finds a human sleeping next to a tree. Darkens have a gift of knowing their true love once they see them. so one look and he fell in love with her. at first he tries to forget her but after a year he desides that he can't and starts to think of a way to meet her.( by the way members of the royal familycan read eachothers minds)reita is an normal girl who just graduated from high school. she has never had a boy friend but is looking for one. although she enjoy nature she would rather stay in doors and watch tv.but after she learns about him she too falls in love. she keeps him a secrtet from the human and he keeps he a secret from the darkens. they begin a difficult relationship as they try to get past their difforentces and keep the love a secret.
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:26 pm
If I see one more vampire story... it's not you, it's me. I'm just sick of reading them.
I'd personally go with #1. #3 reminds me of Romeo and Juliet a bit, and I'm actually curious how #1 would go.
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 2:46 pm
They all sound neat, but I'm actually interested on how 1 goes on. ^_^ They all are good ideas!
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:58 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 2:08 am
I agree, 1 sounds best... though somehow I feel I've said this to this question before.
deja-vu to the max yo~
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Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 1:59 pm
I get deja vu a lot, Kabu.
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 11:26 am
well it sounds like i should build on #1
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:59 pm
Make sure to post the story then!
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 6:10 am
it's going to be along story but i well post
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:09 pm
You can break it up and multi-post... it's easier to read then.
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:25 am
ok i'll try to post each chapter. just so every one knows becouse i only have a month to write this I will not edit it much. i am very sorry for this but untill noveber is over there will be no editeding. i will come back and edit afterwards but not before
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 2:50 pm
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Hane no Kori Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 4:21 pm
I like number one the best too. Sounds a lot more interesting than either of the other two, as well as more original.
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 3:41 pm
Hey, really off topic, but did anyone notice that there's no name/avatar for our topic starter?
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 6:17 am
well i ended up with number one. i think it will turn out good.
as for the no name/avatar thing i am not really sure what you talking about it may be your computer though
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