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 Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:19 pm
I CAN'T DECIDE!!!!!!!!!!!
I want to make my first book and I have two ideas for 2 different Series....
I'll show you the prologue for both...
Black Roses (book one of the series)(vampires)
"Mommy! Is it possible to be a princess?" I remember a woman with soft blond hair and crystal green eyes respond, "Well sweetie, that depends on what kind of princess you are." The little girl in my memory seemed confused and pondered about what the mother just said to her. "Let me put it in a different way. You could be the princess of a garden, a country or even the world! Now Risa, what would you like to be princess of?"
I remember my past too well. Risa was dead to me. I've chosen a new name, a name that suits me well, Phoenix. In the end i turned into a princess, or should I say queen.
I am now known as Phoenix, Queen of the Night.
A vampire.
Users (first book of series) (Clans)
I sat in my friends kitchen while she sharpened her butcher knife. Two of my other friends held me down and cut the circulation of my leg. They say it's easier to cut off that way. For some reason my mind was asking a big question, How did this happen?
Before I could even think, my friend whispered to me, "Are you ready?" I quietly nodded my head, bracing myself for the impact. One of my other friends lifted up the knife and separated my leg from my self. I watched my leg vomit silver blood allover the place while I screamed bloody murder.
I fainted on the cold wooden floor, hearing everyone fixing my leg. I dreamed how this happened, and how it started...
Please vote on which I should do.
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:50 pm
Wait I meant to click clan. I didnt read it before but I definetly pick clan now. Its more interesting.
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 4:12 pm
I like Clan better too. It's more dramatic and has more to it then the Queen one. Plus I think the sample you wrote for clan was written better then the first one.
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