Cute story ^_^
What was your inspiration for this?

A few things though:
Some small grammer/spelling error.
You can work on sentence structure just a bit to make the flow better.

What I can suggest to you to make it better:
Pull this story up every year or couple of months and re-write it.
Usually over time, a writer becomes better with experience and you will notice certain flaws in older writings. It will make a better storyteller.