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Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:33 pm
Cut Pain to the head. A rush of blood. A scream is rattling in your ears. You feel the blood fall down your arm. As the knife digs deeper. Yet the pain is inviting, as is sleep.
The headache seems worse. Yet it doesn't bother you. Have you always lived with this pain? Or is it new? You say it makes you feel less empty. Is it true? Or is it another lie?
You say it shouldn't matter to me. That I shouldn't care. But we both know it's a lie. After that you left. And it was then I realized that I was talking to myself.
Animal Cruelty
we feel the pain we feel the sadness
we want to live we want the freedom
we love we hate we breathe we die
we are alive but it can end to soon you put us in a cage and test the new possible cure we cant tell you
we want out we cant tell you it hurts you just assume we are just ANIMALS
No End
He tried To pull me
Up but I fell Back under and I'm stuck
Here left to drown in this Place called life and they say their
Rules are fair cops rule the town,rapists Never put in the place they decerve because they
Don't trust what the victim says, they say she's liein Cause that man's never done any thing bad in his life,
And they say the scratches are from her cutin herself , So in the end he gets freedom and she gets scars and
I ask myself how did our world come to this killin people to Stay alive and not trustin what a woman says because you
Don't think that man can change? man what happened to the World you created?
Why
i dont think i can
keep living lik this im doin things i thought id
never do and i cant help it i want to let go and just watch the
blood run down my arm but somethings keeping my head above the haze and it
hurts to and think i just dont understand why why does this world end up like this why do we hurt so much
A Moment Of Peace
im drifting in and out of this world and in to the next and no one seems to notice and my head is in a haze and there is no need to find a blade my body is weightless and im happier than i've ever been i have no worries and all there is is peace no more pleasing others there is only me
A Ghost's Eyes
the senses dull, the mind numbs, the soul wanders endlessly among the living. not knowing we cant here them. trying to tell us who killed them, so that they may finally pass on to the next world. to find the ones they lost long ago. they finally see the error of their ways.and now they seem understand just how cruel the world can be. seeing how we destroy everything we come across, seeing how we abuse the best things in our life, and how we never really trust anyone. and yet we are all connected in one way or another. but if you have not yet figured this out you are looking at the world from the eyes of a ghost
Stars Falling
We Stood there And watched the Stars fall. the moon Explode, and the sun burst Into fireworks. All the animals flew In the sky. As the oceans dried Up and the deserts turn to forests. And all the people just stood and stared.
How'd it feel?
Maybe you should have thought before you decided to double cross me.
Tell me whats it feel like to be drugged? Oh yea that's right your fat lip can't answer can it?
And I'm just dieing to know what it feels like to be buried under all that dirt.
How did it feel when the knife went through your skin?
Or how about when I dug your eye out? I know I thought it was funny cause I'm sittin here with this big bloody grin on my face.
So tell me how does it feel to have your heart ripped out? Cause I'm just dieing to know...
so watcha think?
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Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:39 pm
It's kind of confusing to read all these poems at once, and you already have them posted in their own threads, so I suggest giving links to each individual poem. That would be really helpful, plus it won't scatter around feedback you receive. :3
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Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 11:25 pm
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