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 Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:04 am
u/c
So my story has sooo many kinks that need to be worked out, andI don't even have a solid plot yet. Honestly, I just thought of this idea like maybe an hour or two ago, haha. It'll be neat see my story grow and change in the next month. ;D
Okay, so here we go.
A very quick and a very rough summary of my story.
Ever heard the saying "what goes around comes around"? Of course you have, what fool hasn't. Well, have you ever wondered how it all works? And why it takes only moments for Karma to bite some people in the a**, while with others it may take years? And what happens to those that take "Karma" into their own hands? And what happens to the people who commit suicide to escape their punishment? So many questions that need to be answered, but not too fear they will be answered in time. Now this is where things get interesting, there are two very well known beings in charge of distributing karma to those who have committed a crime. You know who they are, you either love 'em or hate, and you can't live with 'em and you can't live without 'em... And they go by the names of The Devil and Death, or at least that's what you know them as, but that'll change it time.
So yup, I just pulled that bit out of my a** for the most part, haha. XD I rather like it, and I'm really looking forward to writing this story. :3
Genre: Dark/Comedy/Fantasy
Rating: Mainly PG-13 but some parts are semi rated R. The chapters that have some possible R material are tagged M. It's in red text above the chapter.
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:25 am
DEATH- [[De]]
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THE DEVIL- [[Lu]]
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Lil' girl they found at the house who still has no name:
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K:
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:26 am
The Story
Chapter 1: Possible R.
Why is it possibly rated R?
Well it deals with a man who rapes, tortures and then slits the throats of four girls and then Lu beats him within in an inch of his life, multiple times. [[You come in after the rape and torture to find the girls all ready dead.]]
Chapter 2: PG-13
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:28 am
-Where I be-
0 - 1,000 - 2,000 - 3,000 - 4,000
5,000 - 6,000 - 7,000 - 10,000
11,000 - 12,000 - 13,000 - 14,000
15,000 - 16,000 - 17,000 - 18,000
19,000 - 20,000 - 21,000 - 22,000
23,000 - 24,000 - 25,000 - 26,000
27,000 - 28,000 - 29,000 - 30,000
31,000 - 32,000 - 33,000 - 34,000
35,000 - 36,000 - 37,000 - 38,000
39,000 - 40,000 - 41,000 - 42,000
43,000 - 44,000 - 45,000 - 46,000
47,000 - 48,000 - 49,000 - 50,000!
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:29 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:31 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:31 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:33 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:35 am
Feel free to post whatever you have to post. ;D
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 11:43 am
Ooh! I love the idea! biggrin I've always kinda thought of karma as a pain, so to have someone come up with a plot all about it is awesome.
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Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 11:55 pm
Thank you. :3
Hopefully I can do this plot justice, haha. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 6:33 pm
Gah! I so totally need to get in the right state of mind, I just can't concentrate with all the TVs on and the internet here to distract me. And I am sooo behind, but I know with just a few serious hours of writing I could be caught up and then some, haha.
But! THREE people actually LIKE my piece! O lordy that made my day! =DDDDD
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