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 Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:14 pm
Introduction:
Title: Potage De Lune (working title)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Steampunk/Fantasy
POV: 3rd person Omniscient
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:15 pm
Characters:
Alyssa: Main Character. An ex-pirate who has been dragged out of her dull retirement life by her ex-protege. (Age: 47)
Sophie: Alyssa's daughter. (Age: 13)
Eliza: Alyssa's ex-protege. Wants to go and find the Potage De Lune. (Age: 30)
Eric: A very rich con man. Known for collecting treasures and oddities.
Claude: The Governor of Tribula.
Jester: A drunken fool for the city of Tribula.
Nicolette: The eccentric daughter of the Governor of Tribula.
Geoff: An eccentric swordsmith who has a pet quail.
Amelia: An airship pirate who is either a close friend or arch nemesis of Alyssa's depending on which treasure they're going after.
Marc: An excellent swordsman who works as head of the boiler room of Alyssa's ship.
Perdita "the Pyro": A bounty hunter with a prosthetic arm that doubles as a blow torch.
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:16 pm
Synopsis:
Going to be lazy at the moment and just copy paste what I put in the blurb on my NaNo page.
The once famous marauder Alyssa is being dragged out of retirement by her protege for just one last adventure. The "Potage de Lune", or Moon Soup, is a legendary elixir that ensures eternal youth and the two of them set off to find it. And while they're at it Alyssa rekindles feeling she forgot she even had, and perhaps teaches her young protege, Eliza, a few more lessons along the way.
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:17 pm
Progress:
Word Count: 6415
Excuses:
We're moving
I have to take care of my grandmother
I need to look for a job
I'm lazy
I need sleep.
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:18 pm
Playlist:
Sweeney Todd: The Demon Barber of Fleet Street OBC Soundtrack
By Jonathon Coulton:
Re: your Brains
Creepy Doll
Future Soon
Big Bad World One
Skullcrusher Mountain
Code Monkey
Betty and Me
Bon Jovi - "It's My Life"
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:19 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:27 pm
Excerpt:
The last few paragraphs:
Marc wiped some sweat and soot off his face with a rag, which he then stuffed into his pocket. He stood up straight and stretched his arms over his head. He gave the boilers a once over.
“Alright everyone lets head up to the deck. The boilers look like they’ll be fine for now, and Captain E wanted us to guard the ship in case Eric decides to try and claim it again.” He said to the workers. They all set down their tools and gratefully went up into the night air to cool off. Marc suspected that as long as Alyssa and Eric were at dinner then Eric wouldn’t try anything. But if Eliza’s plan ended up being a little too loud then there would be trouble.
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Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:03 pm
alright, I'm done for now.
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:40 am
made the reserved spot a spot to post what I've written last.
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Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:16 am
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