new poem i need looked at

[Poison-Ivy99]

hey i was thinking about this poem i wrote and for some reason something just not working for me so i thought maybe someone can help me...it could just be me though i am very critical of my work heart

Why there

Sitting alone, no one near
You come up, why do you care
Living in this life now, why bother
There is almost never anyone there
"Go away" I say "Go away"
But "no" you say -why there-

You take me back. For once we were a pair
Sitting now we start to stare,
Away from each others glare.
"What now " I whisper "What now"-why there-

Do you remember the way we flew up and up into the air.
But when we fell, we started to tear.
Now I don't see how that was fair
Standing up I silently scream
"Good bye, Good bye"-why there-

Leaving forever I stand by a mirror
Try as you may from my nightmare
Sitting alone once more, my mind elsewhere
Trying to stop the despair, of looking at me and finding you.
"Stop please stop" I wish "Stop please stop"-why there-