Kasi Karra
The concept and idea of the poem is interesting and intreguing.
I personally would prefer if there was a space between the stanzas, but maybe that's how you want it, so it's fine to leave it like that.
Though the last line just doesn't flow like the rest of it does. That's my only complaint
yeah i acctually kept forgetting to delet the last line anyway, the reason for it was it was kind of like an after word.
also the stanzas i was thinking the same thing but i thought that they might be kind small to split up thats all.
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