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 Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:05 am
Hey all!
So, I was unsure if I was going to be posting this as I went along... but due to unforseen difficulties with my characters and plot, I'm going to find a nice distraction out of providing you with the chapters as they are finished. =]Synopsis [Subject to Change] Rae was always a happy person. Generally, she was pretty normal. Hated school, loved her friends, and could never put down a good book. But one day, that all goes away. She's kidnapped by her creators, and discovers her horrifying truth: she's a robot. Now fighting to prove she's more than a machine, and fighting to preserve her memories, Rae must sacrifice more than she ever knew she had...Progress Please feel free to comment/criticise =] (You can comment here, or on the blog where its posted. I don't care XD ) Rated PG-13 for violence
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:59 am
Okay, I have no clue where to comment, so I am commenting here, because I have to comment on this.
Quite frankly, this story is amazing, in my opinion. The smoothness of the transitions, and just the general idea is awesome. I was a little iffy on the description, to tell you the truth, but after reading it, I am just eager for you to update it. I have been reading it instead of writing my own stuff, and just… gahh. I love it.
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:27 pm
mrgreen That makes me so uberly happy its undescribable. =]
And to tell the truth, I've been reading yours instead of writing mine, so we're even there. I've hit a little snag a few paragraphs into Chap 3, but I should get past that and have the chapter done by this time tomorrow =]
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:27 pm
Yay! An update! >w< You definitely shouldn't worry about the word count. Well, if you're set on making it, maybe, but other wise, this story is awesome enough that you shouldn't have to worry!
Ian is awesome. Fo srs. That was totally awesome, and to be honest I wasn't expecting her to get out so quick. That was brilliant.
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:35 pm
lol... I didn't want her to get out so quick... but really, the escape and all that is a rather minor part of the story, and I've been itching to get to the main storyline. Besides, such an instiutionalised place is boring to write about.
Chapter 4 now up!!!!
Unfortunately, in the archives is shows up before Chapter 3... so anyone reading after 4 is up, skip the white text to get to 3 [in black] then go back and read the white.
Chapter 4 - Just over 2k. Almost have 10k =D
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:38 pm
Ha. Never mind on the archives issue bit... I have each of those links going right to the post, not the archives xD
Ta-Da! Little technical magic ;D
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