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| So which is your favourite poem? |
| "The Doom of General Discussion" by Kelti |
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41% |
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| "Untitled" by Lyzz the Dark Beast |
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23% |
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| "Ways of Rhythm" by Reeves |
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| Total Votes : 17 |
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 Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 8:51 pm
Well, as three people are tied for finalist spots instead of two, I figured we'd have people vote again for their favourite poem. Here are the three poems raring for finalist spots!
The Poems
The Doom of General Discussion
by Kelti
The GD was once a home to many of us;
To us Gaians, we laughed and cussed.
Until one day, the trolls invaded;
Spammed our forum, had a parade.
The mods did little, for they were never on;
But some joined the flamers, and in moments their modship was gone.
The regs tried helping out, but unsuccessful they were;
To try and get their GD back, but did they? No, sir!
Within months the spam got so bad;
The regs couldn't take it anymore; they were more than mad.
So fleeing they did! To never return;
But watch the GD, like Gambino's Mansion, helplessly burn.
Eventually, when the ashes died down;
Some regs came back, with their lips in a frown
To see their GD, no longer glorious with glee;
Because the trolls, spammers, n00bs, made them see
That it wasn't just the trolls that made GD worse
But the regs themselves, made the GD cursed.
Now they found, after the war they fought
The GD is now nothing but naught.
Never again, will the GD be gold
But a shameful place, only entered by the belligerent bold.
The GD is done, gone, never the same
Which is why, my friends, we never again speak its name.
Untitled
by Lyzz the Dark Beast
It's as if the thought of sleep
Has pulled me in so deep.
So now I close my eyes so tight,
Wishing, wishing, every night.
If you see me, if you don't,
Long to see you, wish I won't.
Sleepy eyes so drear and gray,
Tries to push the pain away.
Sleeping silent, sleeping sound,
On the door no-one will pound.
Late is early, night is day,
You can't wish the sun away.
Wish I may, wish I might.
I will lock this pain up tight.
If I see you, if I don't,
Help your day, wishing won't.
If you're here, If you're there,
Wishing won't help anywhere.
Lively eyes so bright and blue,
Not to wish they have no clue.
So go to sleep,
Don't count your sheep.
Lay here now it's that shameful gray,
Don't you wish this pain away.
Ways of Rhythm
by Reeves
I found a boy the other day, sitting on the docks
He had his journal at his side, kept with fourteen locks
Eyes set on the ocean
His body gave no motion
But he sang a melody with rhythm on the rocks
I tried to learn the awkward notes, but nothing could compare
His voice was monstrous in his youth but fragile in his care
Caught in lines that glistened
For the one who listened
He was finding conscience and the rhythm in the air
And the rhythm moved on
To somebody else's song
I walked home in the bitter sun and sat down at my desk
I wrote a song of mischief and I sang it at my best
And the air was silent
No wind growing violent
The boy had woke the rhythm, and I had put it to rest
Later it would move on
To somebody else's song
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 4:25 pm
|__|b***h on board|__|What if the two people in first place aren't tied, but one's higher than the other? Is the other the winner, or is there still gonna be the improv thingy?
Thanks. ^^
PS.
Vote4Lyzz 'All we are is dust in the wind...'
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 4:52 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:58 pm
The two with the two highest number of votes will be finalists.
VOTE FOR REEVES!
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:53 pm
|__|b***h on Board|__|1ce agen lyzz wil lose. xd xp
srry 4 chtspeak n bad grammar
i hurt three of my fingers
2 on my rite hand n 1 n my left
the nails got ripped out bcos of my stupid coat zipper so it hurts like hell 2 typ correctly. sweatdrop crying 'All we are is dust in the wind...'
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:00 pm
A tie?
Again?
My God!
Stop tieing!
It's not natural!
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:03 pm
|__|b***h on Board|__|wtf
xD
ths iz crazy
yno wut
i wont b able 2 typ corectly 4 a whil, so i susceed (trying to type w/ only pointer fingrs nd thums not easy sweatdrop besides i forget how to spell the wrd)
in othr words, i drop out of the contest
congrats u guys 'All we are is dust in the wind...'
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:08 pm
Lyzz the Dark Beast |__|b***h on Board|__|wtf
xD
ths iz crazy
yno wut
i wont b able 2 typ corectly 4 a whil, so i susceed (trying to type w/ only pointer fingrs nd thums not easy sweatdrop besides i forget how to spell the wrd)
in othr words, i drop out of the contest
congrats u guys 'All we are is dust in the wind...'
Noooooooo!
No, Lyzz, NOOOOO!!
Why God?
Take me instead!
I loved your poem....
;__;
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:10 pm
Lord Narcissus Lyzz the Dark Beast |__|b***h on Board|__|wtf
xD
ths iz crazy
yno wut
i wont b able 2 typ corectly 4 a whil, so i susceed (trying to type w/ only pointer fingrs nd thums not easy sweatdrop besides i forget how to spell the wrd)
in othr words, i drop out of the contest
congrats u guys 'All we are is dust in the wind...' Noooooooo!
No, Lyzz, NOOOOO!!
Why God?
Take me instead!
I loved your poem....
;__;
fine thn
ill wait until tomorrow and if were still tid ill hav to drop out
bcos as is ill probly hav a friend irl typ it up and pm it to reeves bcos im in so much pain evn typing as few lettrs as i can
'All we are is dust in the wind...'
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:17 pm
Lyzz the Dark Beast |__|b***h on Board|__|
fine thn
ill wait until tomorrow and if were still tid ill hav to drop out
bcos as is ill probly hav a friend irl typ it up and pm it to reeves bcos im in so much pain evn typing as few lettrs as i can
'All we are is dust in the wind...'
That's the spirit!
^^
And I hope your fingers feel better soon.
I don't want to make you type more than you have to.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:18 pm
Dude, let's hope that we don't tie again.
That'd be not cool.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:39 pm
Reeves Dude, let's hope that we don't tie again. That'd be not cool.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 8:21 pm
Siani Reeves Dude, let's hope that we don't tie again. That'd be not cool.
id kick u
bcos my only my right leg hurts n not my left leg ;D
'All we are is dust in the wind...'
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 10:06 pm
Whaaa I can't decide who's to vote for. I love all 3 of them gonk
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