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 Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 10:34 pm
I just recently started to enjoy poetry. For the longest time i knew that i could write it, but i did not have the inspiration or the want to write it. Now that i do i would like to see what you guys think of it.
Sheding light for a soul
Will it forever wander
When will it again be whole
Trust is neaded to regain
The parts of my soul lost through pain
True friendship will rekindle
Bring back whats lost
So that it may grow
Ill pay the cost
So that it will not dwindle
Lift this sorrow from my head
And heed the ponderous word thus said
Is there any healing for the soul
Without insight
Without the might
To pay the toll
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 8:55 pm
Tylithar I just recently started to enjoy poetry. For the longest time i knew that i could write it, but i did not have the inspiration or the want to write it. Now that i do i would like to see what you guys think of it. Sheding light for a soul Will it forever wander When will it again be whole Trust is neaded to regain The parts of my soul lost through pain True friendship will rekindle Bring back whats lost So that it may grow Ill pay the cost So that it will not dwindle Lift this sorrow from my head And head the ponderous word thus said Is there any healing for the soul Without insight Without the might To pay the toll wow very emotive dude but there is a forum for poetry
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:59 am
it makes me wonder what'll bring on a new day ''^ ^a it's sad but it has a bit of resolution in it, makes a reader wondering if they themselves will ever truly be ready to face another hit like the one described impliciedly. sweatdrop or i'm just overthinking that *laughs*
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 2:44 pm
To stephen i know there is a forum for poetry but i thought it would be nice to share with the guild and have a place to share their poetry with friends.
Kotori you are not over thinking it. The "hit" described would be a hard one for anyone to take a first time. However i believe that our hardships only make us grow. And they alow us to more clearly see our folly before it is made.
Hope becomes a beacon
To light
The dim of night
The quest of change
A constant
We learn to rearange
Our follys turned to strength
The past will be behind us
The future who knows the length
FInding what we seek in
Ourselves to show others might
We allways seek the light
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2005 9:09 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 9:25 am
Climbing hard and fast
Living for things lost in the past
No falling thru this task
How long will my stamina last
Forging my way up this unbreakable wall
No one to help me no one to ask
I wiil not let myself fall
My tears streak my cheeks
With hope for the future
The top of this wall is what i seak
So i can climb back down the other side
But how high does it go
I climb alone no guide
To find the one that hides
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Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 4:44 pm
Man you guys are no fun. Someone but me should write a poem in here every now and then. Even if they are crap most of mine are too.
My mind screams home
Its what i wanted
To have a place
Thats by me haunted
Eh short sweet and to the point lol
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 5:18 pm
Will the wind blow us away
Or will we find a way to stay
Will the stars call with their voices
And alter our greif and our choices
Will the moon with somber shadow
Pull us to its light
Or will we be lost in the cosmos
Flying like a kite
I can no longer walk away from pain
Even running is to slow
How long can i stay sane
Will the ocean breez
Say sail away on me
Or will the mountains greatness
Bring us to our knees
Will the plains with their rolling grass
Take us in thier warm blanket
Or will they let us pass
Will the wintery tundra
Freez us to our bone
Or will we find solid ground where we can stand alone
Will the endless desert show us
What it is we lost
Or will their massive heat
Demand us pay the cost
We must stand tall
Not sit in our useless seat
When the wind says you must go to battle
Will we head its call
Or let it our bones in the chill wind rattle
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 1:51 am
Some of my poems are in my journal if you want to read them. The newest ones would be Blood and Tears...of the heart. I might post one of my other recent ones here. We'll see.
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 3:26 pm
YOu should post them here i feel so alone in this i wish more people wold post their verse.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 11:31 pm
I decided to go ahead and post them here.
Blood
Beatings, rapings, murders,
Sinners, winners, cutters,
Users, abusers, killers,
Liquified life essence,
Flowing freely, openly or not
Hot, cold, sticky,
Clumps of gunk and oh so icky
Everywhere, spilled by everyone
Beautiful red fluid
Holds the door
To heaven and hell
A binding spell
Spilling, gushing, everywhere
Despair, darkness, screams
Souls bleeding, eyes bleeding,
Teeth and tongue as well
Coppery taste
Addictive, sickening
Arms, legs, eyes
Back, neck, thighs
Whips, chains, knives,
Pain and then finally,
An endless river of
Blood
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 11:40 pm
This one's longer.
Tears..of the Heart
Silent cries
Urgent pleas
Begging for mercy
On this soul you tease
Pain or pleasure
Hate or love
Singing happily
Dieing sadly
Chest pains
Faster beat
Getting dizzy
Head feels weak
Silent but deadly
You know not when
The heart cries out
For past sins
Yours or others
Makes no difference
The pain will be your
Permanent penance
Turn away
A soul dies
Stand and stare
Another cries
Turn and embrace
The heart weeps
For the innocence
It cannot keep
Empty eyes
Show no soul
Only a shell
And a soul in hell
Tears of the heart
We know not what it is
Sighing lieing
Endless fighting
More unheard tears
Silent pleas
Begging for all eternity
Fingers moving
Grasping nothing
Chest clenching
Eyelids fluttering
Tears of the heart
Flow from the eyes
Lets loose all emotions
Trapped inside
Anger, love
Happy, sad
Everything comes out
Through the tears
Of the Heart
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 3:20 pm
Beautiful poems i like the seconed one better it is so vivid so real i felt like i could fet the pain seeping from it into me wow!
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 5:33 pm
Yeah..somehow..it just gives off the pain I was feeling. I'm obsessed with Blood though..I don't know why...It's short but all througout it I'm describing different things that causes blood to spill everywhere then describing what it is..If I hadn't've had the title would you have known what the poem was about before you reached the end?
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Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 1:57 am
Tylether your poems are full of a auroma that I cant quite place my finger on, it brings about a sense of smell almost when I think about what your writing about. Its really strange but Im still trying to figure out what the hell that smell is...
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