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Mirrored Feelings

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G O L ii A T H

PostPosted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 5:50 pm


This one is not as good as "A Dulling Pencil," but I thought I'd post it anyway.



My feelings for you
Mirror those you
Have for me.
You may think
That means I
Love you back,
But you do not
Know how wrong
You are.

My feelings for you
Mirror those you
Have for me.
Everything in a mirror
Is backwards.
You see babe,
I do not like you.
I despise you.

You do not even
Know why, do you?
Well, let me tell you.
You ripped my heart
In two already.
Now you claim to love
Me once more.
But no.
I will not let you tear
My heart into fours.
You ruined everything.
My reasoning.
My love.
My life.


-G O L ii A T H
PostPosted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 7:12 pm


blaugh I like I like
I know it's the way the poem's written that the ideas go to multiple lines (which I don't enjoy a ton), but I really like it smile

Kasi Karra
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