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MissAnnathropy

PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 2:18 pm


You keep your heart locked up in a cage,
tightly secured with silver chains.
wonder if I'll ever own your heart,
wonder if we can re-start.
back to the time when we would just smile,
haven't done that in awhile.




Should I continue this song, should I fix a couple lines or should I just ditch this song?
(Can't figure out how to make the poll properly LOL)
PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:37 pm


I like your rhyming!
I think you should continue the song (at least 3 more stanzas--some more verses and a chorus).

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MissAnnathropy

PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:52 pm


Thanks I will
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