|
|
|
|
|
|
|
I-CrissXApplesauce-I Vice Captain
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:33 pm
Bleach Esan's continuous story biggrin
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:48 pm
"Hmm, the stone pillars seem to have a strange glow to them," said Esan. "Almost as if power is surging through them." "Yah, or perhaps they are tainted," said Fubukit. The stones glew with a dark moss green color, the color seem to have a strange odor to it, the smell of death. "It does appear that way, nothing seems to be going near it, it once was filled with life, animals and children would play here, ministers would pray. Now there is nothing, only the strange glow that surronds each pillar," said Esan. He stared at the five pillars, trying to determine what was wrong with it. "Its probably just best to leave them alone, if its tainted, then the gods shall fix it, it is holy ground." Fubukit begins to walk down the trail. "Yes, the gods shall smite anything that taints their land." Esan begins to walk, "say, where is Andrew? He was just with us." " I am over here, the stones are magnificant, the great color shows so much power, I want it, I want the power." Andrew puts his hand on the pillar, all the pillars stopped glowing, Andrew now glew a dark green."The power, its amazing, we could defeat anything with this, we could take down the Dark Lord with this awesome power." " You know how powerful it is, Esan, set up a containing circle, we must take this power and harness it." Esan sets up then circle and Andrew steps in, the green glow gone, the glow flowed into a blue scroll. "There, now we shall take this with us, I'll study it later, it just may contain the power we need." They head back on the road, close to the next city, the city of Technology.
that was my short story XD couldnt think of character names so made it Andrew, Fub, and....ME!!! XD read it and tell me what you think. =P
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:52 pm
. . . . .it's FubukiT. xD and why didnt u just make the character, "Andrew" disappear? xDD Anyways, continue on. It's AWESOME!!
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:56 pm
XD andrew is the brat that usually messes up and causes everyone else to pay for it. XD
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:02 pm
XD im enjoying it. LOL continue on your story. XDD He is a brat. XD and too many XDs!! XD
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:19 pm
They approach the gates of the city of Technology, the gates blinked different colors, with a strange ticking noise. "Hmm, whats with the ticking?" Said FubukiT, "Please input voice activation code, or you shall be terminated." Said the large door, the voice sounded like screeching. The gate began to glow red, redder with every minute. "Quick! Someone say something, who remembers the password the old sage told us?!" Yelled Andrew. He took out his battle staff, ready to blow down the gate. "Andrew, be calm, no need to blow it down." Said Esan, I'm sure FubukiT remembers. FubukiT walked up to the door, saying the password. The door glew a light blue, it creeked and slowly opened. "See?" "Halt! How do you know the password into our great city?!" Yelled a guard, he was equiped with a strange weapon, it had a handle to hold on, it also had a barrel on it. "I'll shoot if you don't answer!" "Wait, we come in peace, we wish an audience with the Queen, Queen Kikyo." The soldier was silent, he stared into the eyes if the adventures. "Wait, you don't happen to be Esan and FubukiT do you? I am sorry for this, the Queen is expecting you. Um, who is the small fellow with you?" " He was a wondering young traveller that we have taken with us on our journey, he's young, but powerful in magic." They walk into the palace, the red carpet glittered, the walls covered in strange tapestry that was new to them. " Ahh, I've been expecting you for some time now, I suppose to came to learn more about the Elemental Gems?" Said Kikyo, a strange rainbow aura surronded her, giving her a god-like appearence. "Yes, we were told by the great sage Crowl, that your were a gifted wizard that had great wisdom on the world." Said FubukiT politely, "we seek the Elemental Gems, they may be our only hope for defeating the Dark Lord." He stared at the arua, sensing how powerful it was. " We have been travelling for days, my feet hurt, I want to sleep." Said Andrew tiredly. "Queen, do you have a room for me to rest in?" " Yes, I have two available rooms, Esan and Andrew, you can get separate rooms, FubukiT, the princess, Becca, requested that you stay with her." Said the Queen, unsure of the travelers, they looked too young to be the great hero that would save the world from the Dark Lord. "Well, I shall have the cooks fetch you something delicious. Meet in the kitchen. Zon, take our honored guests to the kitchen and tell the cooks to make the best they can." Zon was a skinny servent, though dressed in great fabric, fit for a prince. Zon stared at the guests. "Pardon me for asking, but what is so honored about them, Queen?" Andrew stared at Zon, using his magic to left Zon into the air. "We are to be honored and no questions, I want to be treated better then any royalty." "Andrew, enough of this." Esan's eyes flash blue for an instant, and Zon appeared back on the ground. "Now, I want no more rude actions done by you." Zon began to walk and the three adventurers followed. "So Zon, where is Princess Becca's room?" Asked FubukiT, wanting to see Becca again. "It's on our way, she talks highly of you." Said Zon. "Yah, I can't wait to see Becca again" Said FubukiT.
To be continued later XD
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:21 pm
hehe READ MY STORY PEEPS XD
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:30 pm
Bleach Esan hehe READ MY STORY PEEPS XD . . . . . . . BECCA!? XD u shud've made andrew sleep in the washroom of DESPAIR!! XD CONTINUE. I LOVE THIS STORY. GOOOOO!!! XD
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:33 pm
desynji-san Bleach Esan hehe READ MY STORY PEEPS XD . . . . . . . BECCA!? XD u shud've made andrew sleep in the washroom of DESPAIR!! XD CONTINUE. I LOVE THIS STORY. GOOOOO!!! XD hehe dont worry, i got something planned for him XD i'll continue story later, when i think up some more ideas XD
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:35 pm
Bleach Esan desynji-san Bleach Esan hehe READ MY STORY PEEPS XD . . . . . . . BECCA!? XD u shud've made andrew sleep in the washroom of DESPAIR!! XD CONTINUE. I LOVE THIS STORY. GOOOOO!!! XD hehe dont worry, i got something planned for him XD i'll continue story later, when i think up some more ideas XD im a fan now (of ur stories) XD
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:43 pm
They walked down the hall, the group wondered why the palace was so empty, for inside it held an Elemental Gem and the great Queen Kikyo."Why is the palace so empty?" Asked FubukiT, "and how long till we reach Becca's room?" "Soon, and the palace is empty because the Queen is powerful enough to fend off any intruder, and also she has sent all the soldiers to fight again the Dark Lord." Said Zon. "Ahh, here it is FubukiT, this is Becca's room. You can stay here and talk with here, the rest of us will head down to the kitchen." "Hello, FubukiT I've been waiting for your return." Becca stared softly into FubukiT's eyes. She ran and hugged FubukiT. "I've missed you Fubby, I've been waiting for you to come back to the palace, I knew you'd come here to see me." "It has been awhile hasn't it?" Said FubukiT, "I've been counting the minutes, waiting to see you once more." FubukiT and Becca then went into her room, and closed the door. "I think its time we can catch up," said Becca softly. "So how good is the cook's cooking?" Said Andrew, his stomach growing,"I'm hungry, and you don't want to see me hungry... We better be there soon!" "Well Andrew, once you taste the cook's meals, you'll never forget it, it melts in your mouth. And the dessert....You have to try it to believe it." Said Zon, hoping he doesn't anger Andrew again. "Andrew can be patient, so tell me, is there any way we can assist your army on the battle field? We've found this strange green glow on the five sacred pillars and-" Zon stopped immediatly and stared at Esan. "You've found a strange green glow? That glow is magic of the gods, said only to be seen by true warriors!" Said Zon, jealous that he wasn't able to see the glow. "Really? Wow, who would of knew, we stored it in a containing scroll, how powerful is the power of the gods? Is it enough to defeat the Dark Lord?" Said Esan, startled that he and his group were chosen by the gods to use their magical power. "Yes, but only if you know how to use it, the Queen too has seen and tamed the great magic, talk to her about it, once harnessed, you would be able to smite any army!" Said Zon, "It forms into a weapon of unbelievable power, the Queen's is a staff, with the same rainbow arua, she could take on a while nation, though the Dark Lord is still too powerful, maybe if the three of you harnessed it and work with the Queen to destroy the Dark Lord...We might have a chance!" Zon said happily. "Wow, thats great and all, but I'm powerful enough, know where is that kitchen!?" Yelled Andrew, he began walking at a faster pace, hoping to find the kitchen early, when he bumped into something, some hard and ,from its presence, powerful. Andrew looked up to see a Dragon Knight, a dragon that has evolved from its old life of flying, became smaller, yet even more powerful, wearing gold and blue armor. The Dragon Knight stared at Andrew, then kicked him, sending Andrew flying back. Esan put out his hand and Andrew slowed down and stopped."What was that for you stupid reptile!?" Yelled Andrew, the Dragon Knight walked up to Esan. "This brat yours? Your lucky his running didn't damage anything." Said the Dragon Knight. "Sorry about that, he was just hungry and was in a hurry to the kitchen. He is only a child, he didn't know better." The Dragon Knight picked up Esan and stared into his eyes. A quick flash of blue flashed in Esan's eyes and the Dragon Knight's amor became dented and ruined. "What did you do to my armor?!" The Dragon Knight backed away slowly, "you must be Esan! I am sorry for this, I am Drang. Where is FubukiT?" "He's catching up with an old friend," said Esan, "Now if you excuse us, we'll be on our way to the kitchen." Esan and the rest began up their walk. "Here we are, the Great Kitchen of the Queen!" Said Zon, "you may now feast!" Hours passed and Andrew, Esan, and Zon ate plenty of food. "Where's FubukiT? He should be here by now." They then hear a huge explosion from where FubukiT and Becca were. "Quick, FubukiT may need us! They quickly ran towards the room, FubukiT and Becca standing in the middle of the hall. "FubukiT, Becca! Are you ok?" "Yes, sorry Becca thought she saw a Dark Minion, so I used some magic and blasted where she saw it, must of been her imagination." Said FubukiT, "so where's the kitchen?" Zon pointed down the hall, FubukiT put his hand on Becca's shoulder, then teleported to the kitchen. "What!?" Yelled Andrew, "he teleported down there without us?! Why can't I teleport?!" "Because, while you may be skilled in magic, FubukiT still far surpasses you." Zon stared where FubukiT last was. "How can he teleport?! Not even the Queen can teleport that far!" "FubukiT is a talented wizard, trained by the one and only, Sage Zhong." Zon stared," The great Zhong?! I thought he was only a myth! Thats amazing!" Zon calmed down, "Well, lets run back down to the kitchen." "Awwww..." said Andrew as he walked back to the kitchen, "I hate walking..."
Too be continued! XD
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:55 pm
WOW>!!! "catch up"? XDD and im cool!! XD continue!!!
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 5:04 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 5:25 pm
i really like the story...well the little bits i read that said my name anyway... xd
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
I-CrissXApplesauce-I Vice Captain
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 5:52 pm
The group meets in the kitchen and chat. "FubukiT, we found out the glow was the power from the gods and that we can harness it into weapons of pure power." Said Esan, "we must start tomarrow, the sooner the better." "Ok, what kind of weapons do they become?" Asked FubukiT. "Are they swords or something? Or those weird handle things that use some type of powder to attack?" "Umm, FubukiT," said Zon, "those 'weird handle weapons' your talking about are called guns, something created and used only in our great city of technology, no one else was harnessed the power of machines." The Dragon Knight, Drang, walked into the kitchen."Who is this strange dragon-man?" Drang stared at FubukiT, not saying anything out of fear for his life. He was able to mutter a few words, "I am the Dragon Knight, Drang." Fearing that how powerful Esan's magic was to dent his armor, he was afraid of how much damage FubukiT's magic could do. "Ahh, my mistake. So, are you able to harness the power of the gods too? You look powerful." Said FubukiT, fearing that Drang might use his strength to smash him. "Yes, my Soul Weapon that the gods have given me was an axe, this axe's power can slice through anything, I can take down a fortress or two easily." Boasted Drang, feeling superior."Maybe you could fight against me using your Soul Weapon!" "Uhh, we don't have any Soul Weapons yet, we are going to train tomarrow to get them." Said Esan. "Ahh, well don't you worry! The great Drang shall teach you! First thing tomarrow, I advice you get some sleep because tomarrow it going to be rough." "Alright, sounds fun, lets head back to our rooms and get some sleep." Tiredly said FubukiT, "can't wait for this training session of yours." The adventures head for bed and are able to sleep during the night, at 3:30 AM, Drang came through the halls yelling, "Great adventures, it is time for your training! Come now!" "Shut up! You stupid dragon freak! Yelled Andrew from his room, "your so freakin loud!" The group follows Dragon to the training grounds, Drang takes the scroll that stored the magic and opened it pointing towards the three. The green magic shot into the chests of all of them."Now that the power is inside you, you must speak with it and harness it!" "How do we harness this power?" Asked Esan. "Simple, by dying!" The entire group's eyes widened and stared at Drang. " What!? What do you mean 'die'?!" Asked FubukiT. "Simple," Drang took out his Soul Weapon, by calling its name, Tsubaki, and hit the ground, causing stairs to appear. "Go down, travel down the 100s of stairs, once you reach the bottom, it will be damp and foggy. You must stay down there for seven days." "What!?" Yelled the entire group at once. "How will we eat?" Asked Esan. "You don't, you don't to eat down there, now go." The group makes their way down the stairs, several hours later they reach the bottom, they sit on the ground and meditate, hoping for their Soul Weapon to speak to them and give them the power they need. Seven days passed and the group emerged from the hole. Each having a very powerful presence. Drang was sleeping on a rock. "Wake up you stupid oversized lizard!!!" Yelled Andrew. Drang jumped and stared, sensing their power. "Reveal their names then." Said Drang. "Nokita!" Yelled Andrew and two orbs appeared and fastened onto his hand. He punched into the air, the magic in the orbs called the trees in the path of his punch to fall over. "Zantetsu!" Yelled Esan, and a 2-handed sword appeared on his back and a glowing katana apeared in his hands. Esan stabbed the katana into the ground, a large shockwave erupted from the ground causing trees to fly from the ground, leaving a large crater around them. "A name wasn't told to me," said FubukiT. "It must be a Soul Passive Weapon! Use a spell or something!" Yelled Drang. FubukiT stuck out his hand and thought a simple fire spell, his body become covered in fire yet it didn't burn him, he clenched his fist and the fire turned blue and vanished, a few seconds later, the forest was gone, nothing but ashes left, half the palace was turn to ash, none harmed, and the clouds swurved around FubukiT. FubukiT stood there, then uttered one word, "Sweeeeeeeeeeeet."
Too be continued =P
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|