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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:29 pm
this is a story that i am writting plez pm me what you you think of it i dont want any comments between parts of the story. thankyou and enjoy. 4laugh
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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:30 pm
"Welcome to Star light school. I am you Headmistress the Fallen Angel Kristen." She said as her first three new students walked into the school their bags in hand. The foyer was beautiful. The floor made of marbel and the cieling of mirrors. The walls were a simpel gray and there were stairs leading to the second floor on ither side of the back wall. A cristel shandeler hung from the cieling and Kristen stooed in the center of it all.
As for the students, two girls walked up first, hand in hand. Behind them was a boy. Then one of the girls said, "Helow Headmistress. I am Midnight and this is my sister Shadow. It is nice to meet you." The girl had dark black hair and brown eyes. Her sister had light blond hair and blue eyes.
"It is nice to meet the both of you as well. The girls dorms are this way." She pointed to her right. "Or there are cabens in the woods arounnd back. You may shar or have you own rooms it is up to you."
"Thankyou headmistress." both the girls said befor walking away to find their rooms. Midnight went back outside to find a caben and Shadow went up the stairs to find her room.
Next the boy walked up. "Helow Headmistress. My name is Dennis." The boy hed redish hair and green eyes.
"Dennis you look like you do not wish to be here. Why is that?"
"It was here or the foster home so I chose here. Id rather go to school then get picked on."
"Oh come now. You are a handsome young man why would anyone pick on you?"
Dennis put down his bags and took off his jaket. Beautiful black wings opend onhis back. "One im a vampire and two im the only vampire ever to have wings."
Kristen looked up at his wings and then at her own. "Haveing wings is notheing to be ashamed of. I think it means that your life is going to be an advencher." Kristen finished and smiled to herself. "So I think youll be taking a cabin."
"You think right. It was... nice to meet you Kristen... I mean Headmistress." Dennis picked up his bags and walked outside and around to the back of the school.
There was a garden, a lake and then the woods. The cabens set just inside the woods there were three and Midnight was siting on the steeps of the middel one reading a comic book.
Dennis walked past Midnight and to the therd caben walked in and after a minet he walked back out with a pad of drawing papper, a spirel note book, a pencel and an eraser. He sat down under a tree faceing Midnight and began to draw. Back at the school Kristin was greeting a new teacher. "hello Kristin I am Lenzo." "Hello and welcome to the school. If you would plezz folw me I will show you were your class is and where the teachers corders are." Lenzo smiled and folowed her. "In the girls dorms Shadow had just finished unpaking and was walking around in the school.She saw a door that led out back and walked out it.
Shadow found herself in a beautiful garden. There were flowers everywhere. Beyond that was a sparkiling lake. She walked around the lake and looking into the woods she saw her sister. She ran all the way to her.
By this time Dennis had finished his drawing of Midnight and was now halfway done drawing Shadow.
"Hello sister. How do you like your room?" Midnight asked. "Wonderful. How is the cabin?" "Awsome. Oh and I have a nayber." MIdnight said pointing to where Dennis was sitting but he was not there. He was now walking to the girls. "Oh, hello" Midnight said with a smile.
"Hello. I just wanted to give you these." Dennis held out the drawings. "Im Dennis by the way Dennis Valentine."
"Aw they'r so cute!" the girls exclamed.
Back at the school two more boys had arived. They walked around back and to the cabins.
"We have compiny." Dennis said as the boys walked up."
"Hey Cross look that kid has wings." one boy said to the other as he pointed at Dennis.
"Indeed he dose." the other answerd.
"Hello. I am Midnight Slait and this is my sister Shadow Slait." Midnight said with a smile.
"Hello. I am Cross Bito and this is my borther Troy Bito. So do you all live in the cabins?"
"No. I live in the middel one, Dennis lives in the far one and Shadow lives in the school." Midnight replyed. "I see. Well ill be taking the last cabin and Cross was ganna see if he could shar with one of you."
"I would rather not." MIdnight replyed.
"I wouldnt mind it." Dennis said looking at Crosses wings.
At the school kristen was greeting to new girls. One human. One witch. "Hello Headmistress. I am Twyla." said the witch.
I am Mimi." said the human. "the girls dorms are to the right. Plezz make youselfs at home. O and if you would plezz tell the other students that classess will sart tomorrow."
"ok" Mimi said as she walked to the dorms.
"Will do" Twyla said following her.
The next day
All the are in gym class. "ok class we are going to start off with something fun. how about hide and seek?" Mr.Lanzer asked with a smile.
"hide and seek?" Troy asked, " that games for kids."
"I kind of like playing hide as seek its fun..." Sasori comented
"Can i be it?" Blake asked with a smile.
"Alright...Im sorry whats your name miss?" Mr.Lanzer asked.
"Its Blake" "Alright Blake come stand here and the rest of you go hide. Blake count to 100."
Blake bigan to count and eveyone went to hide. Dennis looked outside the window and he saw a girl walking around. He asked the Mr.Lanzer if he could go help her out and then he walked outside.
Dennis walked up to the girl. She was tall, taller then him, thow Dennis was short for his age. The girl had short brown hair and dark brown eyes.
"Uhm hi." Dennis started, "Im Dennis. You must be new here. You look kinda lost."
The girl smiled. "Hello Dennis. I am Stela." she looked at Dennis, her cheeks turning slightly pink as she did so.
"so where are you trying to get to?"
"well i wa just trying to find ou where everyone was."
"Oh i see. Well there are not many students here so all of us go to the same classess. Right noweveryone should be in the gym. An't that right Cross?" Stela looked puzzled as Cross walked over to thm from behind a near by tree. Cross smiled and said,"How'd you know i was there?"
"Lets see, you have loud feet and i could hear your breathing.Oh and lets not forget i can smell you blood." Dennis replied with a smile. This time bid enough to revel his fangs.
Stela gasped and took a step back. From what her parents had told her vampires were not nice and fooled around with their victomes before taking their life.
"Dude thats mest up." Cross said in a jokingly tune.
Dennis looked back at Stela and asked, "Whats wrong?"
"You. Your a-a-a-a vampire." Stela said, her eyes wide with shok and she took another step back.
"Ya, he is." Cross said. "But he's a good vamp. I mean come on the guy drinks animal blood." Dennis roled his eyes at cross.
"Ya i dont kill humans or anything like that."
Stela took another step back, "I-I dont know..."
Dennis looked down at the ground and and as he walked away he whispered to himself, "Well, guess i cant get away from it. No matter where i go." Dennis walked away and just befor he was out of ear shot Stela asked, "Get away from what?" He heard her but did not reply. His past was not something he liked to talk about.
Sitting on the hill Twyla looked down in to the lake. She had long black hair and crimson red eyes. Twyla looked up at the sky and without looking back she said,"i know your there."
A boy walked up a sat down next to her. "How did you know i was there?" he asked.
Twyla looked at the boy and laughed to herself, he reminded her of a boy from hr past. He had short black hair and light green eyes. "One i an hear your thoughts and two, who said you could sit down?" she said this with a nasty tune but he boy also noticed that she did not move away from him.
"Im Rhys" the boy said, "and you are?"
"Twyla"
"So Twyla wha made you want to come here?"
"whats it to you?" she snapped looking back up at the sky. "ok fine dont tell me." Rhys said and just at there. Twyla stood up to walk away but before she could Stela came running out of the woods yelling "Quinn!" She ran up to Twyla and and hugged her.
with a puzzled look Rhys asked,"Quinn? I thought you said your name was Twyla."
To Stela Twyla asked, "what are you doing here?" and to Rhys she said, "i changed my name thinking i could lose my past. but now that dont seem likely.."
"Its been about 100 years scene ive gone to school. i need an update."stela rpliyed.
"ok two hings. One if i ask about your past youll bite my head off right? and two do we call you Quinn or Twyla?" Rhys asked.
"stela you have a point...now get off of me! and Rhys, one yes two Quinn."
"ok then Quinn i will see you tomorrow in class. i am going to go back to my dorm." Rhys bowed his head slitly and then walked away.
Quinn watched Rhys as he walked away. Then stela fliked her in the head and said, "I said im ganna go to bed too its getting late....oh i see you like him dont you? i guess he is a little cute."
A book apered in Quinns hand and she maked Stela in the back of the head with it then walked away as her cheeks terned pink.
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:54 pm
The next day in class Quinn was so deep in thought she didnt notice Rhys when he came in and sat next to her. "Good morning Quinn how did you sleep?" Rhys asked with a smile.
"I dont sleep." Quinn replyed.
"Ok class," The Teacher begain class. "Today we will be going around the class and introdusing your selfs. Plez say you name and your real age. Midnight you can start." The teacher said pointing to her.
"I am Midnight Slate and Im 165 years old."
"I am Shadow Slate and I am 160 years old."
"I am Dennis Valintine an I am 235 years old."
"I am Troy Bito and I am 125 years old."
"I am Cross Bito and I am 125 years old."
"I am Sasori Salvestor and I am 100."
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:37 pm
"I am Blake Sylvester and I’m 83...Wow I feel young."
"I’m Quinn Vandera and I’m 421 years old."
"I’m Rhys Aragon and I am 335 years old."
"I’m Stela Moon and I’m 200 years old."
“Ok class, next we sh-“the bell cut the teacher off and the kids run out of the class room.
Dennis was standing by a tree with his hands in his pockets. Stela walked up to him and sad, “I’m sorry I made you mad yesterday. Come, I would like to make it up to you.” She smiled and held out her hand.
Dennis hesitated at first but took her hand. She ran though the woods and to a small clearing, dragging him behind her the hole way. In the center of the clearing was a small table of food. The two of them went over and sat down next to it. Dennis looked at the food. There was pizza and two bottled waters.
Dennis poked at the pizza with his fork, not realizing it could be eaten with your hands, before taking a bite. It had been over 200 years sense he had last had human food, he had forgotten what it taste like. It made him want to puke, but he held to down as he swallowed with a gulp.
“So what do you think?” Stela asked with an eger look n her eyes.
“Its uhm, it’s very good.” Dennis replied still trying not to puke.
“You don’t like it do you?” Stela asked. This time a small frown on her lips.
“Well, let’s just say my diets a little different then yours. Human food has changed a lot in the past 200 years.” Dennis added as he lay backing the grass.
“I’m sorry.” Stela said looking down at her plate.
“What are you sorry for? It’s not like you knew I didn’t eat human food.” Dennis said with a smile.
“Yeah I guess your right.” Stela replied as she lay down next to him in the grass. “So what made you want to come here?”
Dennis closed his eyes and took a deep breath but did not reply. The both laid there silent. As the minutes pasted Dennis slowly fell asleep. The faces of everyone he ever held dear run through his mind like a slide show. It stopped on the face of a young girl. Long blond hair and dark brown eyes and a beautiful smile. The face brought back some unwanted memories. Dennis tried to push them away but it was too late. Like a movie the memories play in his mind.
He watched as flames shot out off the door and windows of a house. He saw a man, dressed in all black. The man had a crossbow in his right hand, he was looking for someone. Dennis watched as a young boy and girl ran up standing in front of the house. The boy was wide eyed and the girl was screaming for her mother and father.
The boy, Dennis suddenly realized, was him and the girl was his first love. An arrow came out of nowhere perusing the girl in the heart. The man, a vampire hunter, walked up to Dennis from the smoky house. “Can’t be letting you turn her now can we?” he snickered.
At this Dennis woke up from his nightmare shooting straight up. Stela sat up in alarm. When she saw Dennis’ face she backed away in fear. His eyes had turned a crimson color. “A-are you a-alright?” she asked. The fear shaking her voice.
Dennis tilted his head slightly, his eye going back to a golden brown. “I’m so sorry.” He said as he pulled his legs to himself and put his head on his knees crying.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:39 pm
“Please don’t cry.” Stela said hugging him. Dennis looked at her and gently pushed her away. Stela let go of hi and back way a bit. They sat there and no one said a word.
Quinn ate her lunch out on the hill and, as she knew would happen, Rhys brought his out there as well. “So have you come to rune the quite for me?” Quinn asked not looking at him.
“Now I wouldn’t put it that way.” Rhys replied as he sat down. “I can be quite too, when I want to be.” He added with a smile.
Quinn tried to hide her smile but it did not work Rhys saw it, “Well that’s a first.” He said with another smile.
“What’s a first? I don’t know what you’re taking about.”
“Ok, Ok, new topic…lets see, if you will not tell me you story, then at least let me tell you mine.”
“Two things, One, I did not say I would not tell you I said what’s it to you? There is a difference. And two, sure why not.” Quinn said smiling.
“Ok, so let’s see I was born August 15th 1674. Life’s been tuff but I’ve managed. I’ve almost died twice, once in a house fire and the other when I was with a friend who was being chased by I vampire hunter. How I got away from him I can’t remember. I decided to come here because well, I didn’t have anything better to do really. So yeah, that’s my life in a nut shell.”
“Hmmm. Really, 1674? Wow.”
“Yep.” Rhys spotted a notebook on the other side of Quinn and reached around her grabbing it. Flipping through the pages he said with a smile, “What’s this? A Journal?”
Quinn tried to grab the notebook out of his hand but failed. “Let’s see what you put for yester day.” Rhys said flipping to the page.
“Please don’t.” Quinn pleaded trying once more to take the notebook and failing.
There was but a simple line. Rhys read it out loud:
‘Could Love break this darkness I live in? Could he be the one?’
Rhys closed the notebook and handed it to Quinn. “well, didn’t think that’s what I would see…” Quinn made the notebook disappear afraid he would try to take it again.
Rhys just stood there as Quinn walked away into the woods. After a few minutes she heard him following her. She stopped and sat down waiting for him. He walked up o her and she asked, “Why did you follow me?” without looking at him.
“Let’s just say I would be lying If I said I didn’t feel the same.” Rhys replied sitting down next to her. Quinn did not respond and Rhys said nothing.
Back in the filed Dennis and Stela were talking again.
“So you were born in 1774 and I was born in 1809.” Stela said going over what they had just discussed.
“Correct.” Dennis replied.
“So do you mind if I ask what your life has been like?” Stela asked curiosity in her eyes.
“It’s a long story.”
“I don’t mind, you can tell me.”
Dennis hesitated and then said,” Ok, but I must tell you now that my past is very dark.
“Let’s see, I guess we could start with when I was little, going by how I looked I was 7. That’s when my life started going all wrong. I was in the wood with my friend Coralline. Our friendship was not something that could be known. Friendship between my people and hers was just not aloud.
“We had been gone a long time and as I walked her home we saw smoke. We ran as fast as we could and when we got to her house al we could see was flames and smoke. Coralline yelled for her parents and I just stood there like a fool.
“That’s when an arrow shot out of the smoke perusing Coralline in the heart.” Stela could see Dennis wince in pain as he said this. “A man, dressed in all black with a crossbow in his hand, walked toured me.
“That’s the last thing I remember from that. I don’t know how I had gotten away but I did. The next thing I remember is waking up in the woods covered in blood, human’s blood. Next was my mother’s death. I was, b looks 9 and my little sister was 5. Our mother was killed by orcas and my sister watched as they cut her down, I was not home at the time.
“My sister and I were sent to live our mother’s friend. That’s it really. That’s worth knowing anyway. So can I hear yours?” Dennis asked not wanting to hear how sorry she was for him.
“Well there’s not much to tell. I don’t remember anything from before I, in looks, was ten. I traveled for a bit with my brother. Now I’m here. Like I said, not much to tell.” Stela know she shouldn’t have left so much out but she couldn’t help it she didn’t know much about it.
Dennis looked up at the sky, it was getting late. He stood up and held a hand out to her. “Do you want to start heading back?” Stela took his hand and they walked back to the school.
Quinn and Rhys were still sitting out by the tree; Quinn looked up at the sky and said, “It’s getting late. You should get back to the school.”
“Are you going back?” Rhys asked noticing how she had said he should and not for them to.
“No”
“Then I’ll stay too.” Rhys said with a smile. Quinn smiled too and rolled her eyes. Not even five minutes later, after no one talking, Rhys fell asleep, his head resting on Quinn’s shoulder.
“Well that was fast…” Quinn sighed.
An hour later it was dark out and Rhys woke up to Quinn talking. At first he thought she was talking to herself, but then he heard another voice, “Hey Quinn, I think your little friend is wake.”
Rhys sat up and looked at the girl; she had long black hair and dark green eyes. “Who are you?” he asked still looking at her.
“I’m Tess. I’m a friend of Quinn’s. Nice to meet you Rhys.” Tess replied talking so fast her sentences ran into each other.
“You talk way to fast, what you do eat a bowl full of sugar? And how do you know my name?”
“Quinn can’t stop talking about you. And, shut up!”
“You shut up!” Quinn exclaimed, her cheeks getting pink.
Tess laughed and Rhys didn’t know what to say so he tried to change the subject, “So, will you be going to our school?”
“Well, du.” Tess replied. “Would I be here if I wasn’t?” She laughs.
They talked for sometime before Quinn finally insisted that Tess and Rhys go inside and rest before Rhys fell asleep on her again. Tess yawned and went back to the school without the other two. Rhys asked, “Are you coming back too? “as he stood up.
“I have to.” Quinn replied as she too stood up.
“Why is that?” Rhys asked taking Quinn’s hand.
“It’s the only way to get you to go back.” She replied, blushing when he took her hand.
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 7:27 pm
Rhys smiled and they walked back to their rooms. Rhys walked Quinn back to her room and kissed her forehead before walking to his own room. As for Dennis and Stela, who had walked back to the school hours ago, were just now heading back to their rooms, Stela to her dorm and Dennis to his cabin. The next day, Ms. Amelia was the class for the day. “This is awesome. One class for the day is like the best thing that could happen here.” Cross said to Shadow as they walked into the room and took their seats. Again Quinn sat in the back corner seat by the window, and of curse Rhys and Tess followed her. The teacher began to speak and Quinn passed a note to Rhys. They passed it back and forth al through class. By the end of class this is what they had: So what do you think of Tess? She’s…..annoying. Lol. She is my second most annoying friend. Who’s the first? I thought that would be easy to guess. It’s Stela. Lol. Yeah… What? Nothing, just thinking. About what? Nothing unparticular. Is that so? Yep. =] So, What do you want to talk about now? I don’t know… What? Just thinking. What about? You. Me? Yes. What about me? Just as Rhys was about to write the bell rang and class was over. “Saved by the bell.” He mumbled to himself as he picked up his books and walked outside with Quinn.
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Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:28 am
Once outside Quinn glanced over at the woods as a wolf’s tail disappeared among the trees. She mumbled under her berth “Oh s**t…” and ran to the woods dragging Tess and Rhys, who took hold of Dennis’s arm, all behind her. Stela walked behind them not bothering to keep up.
They al stopped in a small clearing in the woods and once Dennis got his breath back he asked, “Why was I dragged along?”
Rhys replied, “Because, I hate being the only guy. Its so creepy.”
“Whatever.” Dennis said rolling his eyes. Then to Quinn he asked, “What are we doing out here?”
Quinn did not answer him, she just continued saying, “Where is he? I know he’s here. Where did he go?”
Just as Dennis was going to ask who, a wolf demon came walking up to them from the woods. Rhys tapped Quinn’s shoulder and asked, “Who’s that?”
“That would be who I am looking for.” Quinn sighed. “Isn’t that right?” She asked the wolf who seemed to have nodded yes in reply. After which a flash of light green light showed a young boy where the wolf once stood. He had jet black hair and green eyes.
Stela, who had just waked up to them, said,” Awww! He’s so cute! What’s his name?”
The boy smiled and said, “Hello. I am a friend of Quinn’s. My name is Ragnagord.”
Hanging on Dennis’ arm Stela whispered to him, “How old do you think he is?”
Dennis shrugged and, “I don’t know. Nine?”
“Wrong.” Ragnagord said with a smile, “I look ten. But for real I’m about ten times older then that.”
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