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The Siren of Asianland

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:22 pm


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This is gonna be a collection of poems, haikus, and maybe a lyric or two if I get creative. I'm just posting some really old stuff but I hope you like it anyways and if you wanna post something go for it or PM me and I'll put it in the right box.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:25 pm


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'God's broken my chains.
And yet these dark wings still sprout.
In silence I weep.'


'This feeling of flame,
Overcome by virtigo
Darkness consumes me.'

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:35 pm


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My Plea
'Fallen angel set me free from the world and it's sympathy. I love my family, friends and foes; I've done all that God's told me so. But on and on the pity comes, with taunting, hort, lonliness, and pain. fallen angel take me home... To those who understand my pain, and those whom also know the game I'm forced to play.'


Use a "Raincoat"
'Todays forecast calls, for light showers and heavy downpours of love.

Take an umbrella before you leave home, cause it's sure to get messy out in the cold.

Hugging and kissing you'll never miss out as long as the hormones they never run out.

I know it sounds silly but take my advice, it'd be best to stay home and just off the lights.

...cuddle up close with someone you love huddle under the covers and make new Bundles-O-Love.'



Hope to a Caged One
'Tied down by earthly pressures, restrained behind a wall. The chains of responsibility rattling and you always anwser their call. But now it's time to find your key hidden in your heart, unlock your chains and door, now spread your wings apart.

"GO!"

A voice in your very being exclaims as you take the plunge from the highest hights. The color of your wings against the summer blue sky a kelidascope delight, and a voice from above, shooing away any of your frights...'
PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:40 pm


Random/Crazy/Anonymous Sayings

"Put that in your ramen bowl and slurp it!" - Random

"Are you suggesting coconuts migrate?" - Monty Python

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 5:48 pm


I like your haikus!

Your other poetry doesn't have much form at all, though, except for "Use a Raincoat."

You have a lot of spelling mistakes, too, such as "nitch," which is supposed to be "niche."

Maybe copy and paste your work into Word so it can point out the mistakes?
Or get Mozilla Firefox because that also has a spellcheck.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:20 pm


Thanks, and yeah I just kinnda typed it all in as I went through. Also I don't put a form to anything aside from my haiku. Perhaps I should put a 'Rambling' section heh.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:14 pm


No problem. :3

Yeah, form is very important in poetry. Form doesn't have to be formal at all, so don't feel that having form is constricting, but without form, poems just read like prose, which is not right at all. xD
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