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 Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:52 am
hey guys my story's about Inuyasha but i put a little twist in it.
its about kagomes life if she were a half deamon and how she found out her true identaty..... do u guys think thats good.... or no?
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 5:47 pm
kagome-chan loves pandas hey guys my story's about Inuyasha but i put a little twist in it.
its about kagomes life if she were a half deamon and how she found out her true identaty..... do u guys think thats good.... or no? i say heck yes! lol can i be in it? jkjk
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kitty of the dark Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:55 pm
I think it sounds just fine smile i am a fan of Inuyasha, so i would like to see your 'twist' to it wink
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 6:01 am
Are you going to post the story here?
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 3:08 pm
I would hope that she would post in the subform "Story Post" smile
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 10:54 am
i haven't finished it yet but i will post what i have soon k srry im taking so long i've been rlly buzy
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:04 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:49 pm
ok guys hear it is....its not finished though and im kinda new at this stuff but hope u like what i have. oh and plz give suggestions on changing it or help make it better
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:15 pm
i could feel the darkness taking over me, the numbness in my arms grew with enormous strength. as if that thing in my dream was gripping me so tightly. the thing that pulled me into the depths of the well, as my brothers yelling voice grew faint.
the numbness in my arms and the unending darkness; was this just a horrible dream too, waiting for me to wake up in my warm bed?
my eyes flew open as i was gasping for air. "so it was a dream after all" i thought. but something was wrong, i looked around and realized i wasn't in my bed at all. i was in the deep dark of the well in my family's shrine. there was an arm laying beside me, a human arm or something else. "i have to get out of hear" i said to myself. so i started to panic it wasn't a dream that thing is real!!!
i climbed up the vines on the side of the well, only to find i wasn't at home anymore. i was in a world like my own but different. it was as if all the shrine vanished and was replaced with trees and grass. it was like i was in the past were there were no buildings, just dirt, trees, and grass.
i was walking through the forest to find some human existence, when i finally found a boy about my age, maybe a little older. but i wasn't quite sure he was human, he looked like a normal boy but he had dog ears instead of human ears. as curious as i was, i walked up to him and touched his ears, "yup they're definitely real" i thought. though that fascinated me, the thing that surprised me the most was the fact that he looked like he was sleeping. then villagers, that must have been from a near by village, tied me up!! "they probably think I'm really weird" i thought. come on they were just staring at me, what else would you think? but then this weird old lady came and was looking at me with strange eyes. she stared and mumbled to herself and kept saying the same thing. "shes definitely there yup, my sister".
they let me go but i had to stay the night, even though i wanted to go home. all of a sudden there was screaming and the sound of things breaking. OH NO!! it was that horrible thing again and it was after me! i had to protect this kind village, so i ran towards a forest with light illuminating from it. supposedly it was called the forest of Inuyasha. i'm guessing it's the name of the boy i saw earlier.
when i got to the forest, Inuyasha was awake and kept calling me Kikyo. when i was distracted that monster came and grabbed me in its mouth. its sharp teeth dug into me and a shiny ball came out of the wound in my side. i tried to pick it up but the monster pined me to the tree Inuyasha was sealed on by an arrow. the grip was so tight it was like being crushed by a bolder. the centipede thing swallowed the ball or the Shekon Jewel and it started to transform. Inuyasha wanted me to pull out the arrow but the old lady, Kiady, said not to. i didn't know what to do, hear i was getting crushed and i had to choose what to do. i seriously didn't want to die so i chose to pull out the arrow and when i did it vanished into thin air. Inuyasha was free and he battled the thing and killed it in one blow.
and that's how i met Inuyasha the half dog demon. over the years we had to fight demons; and made friend. together we all tried to gather the shards of the Shekon Jewel because i accidentally shattered it.
now Inuyasha and I are older and married with three children. between that time and now we all learned about my past. we found out i had two sisters and that i actually lived in this era. my mother was a human and my dad was a dog demon making me a half demon. my oldest sister Zilla was a full demon and my other sister Kikyo was a human. what happened was that when i was seven years old my mother died and my father was already gone not knowing i was to be born. Zilla thought i was to young to defend myself at that time, so she erased everyone's memories of me and sent me into the present time, to Tokyo.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 2:46 pm
Your skill is amazing, if i do say so myself.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 7:09 pm
oh snap that was awesome!
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:34 pm
oh rlly u think its good !!!!??? !!! thx >.< that makes me so happy :p any suggestions 2 make it better?
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 7:24 pm
kagome-chan loves pandas oh rlly u think its good !!!!??? !!! thx >.< that makes me so happy :p any suggestions 2 make it better?
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 8:57 am
The older won kagome-chan loves pandas oh rlly u think its good !!!!??? !!! thx >.< that makes me so happy :p any suggestions 2 make it better?
lol im srry about that i wont write in green any more :p
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 8:16 pm
kagome-chan loves pandas The older won kagome-chan loves pandas oh rlly u think its good !!!!??? !!! thx >.< that makes me so happy :p any suggestions 2 make it better? lol im srry about that i wont write in green any more :p
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