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Reeves
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 9:09 am


Well, everyone, it's the moment you've all been waiting for...
It is time for our finalists to have their POEM-OFF!
Of course, I've been getting several questions as to how it'll exactly work out. Well, here's my plan.

The way this will work is that one of the finalists will improvise a rhyming poem directed at the other finalist. Then the next finalist will improvise a rhyming poem responding to them. They will do this two more times, so, basically, three times for each finalist.

For example, a segment of a poem-off between me and The Mighty Z-Rex about a year ago:

The Mighty Z-Rex: And now a new battle is risin'
and I know its not suprisin'
thats the gimick this time
Is Rhyme.

Reeves: I don't think you're supposin'
That you'll beat me down at prosin'
I'm the master at this thing
Let it swing

The Mighty Z-Rex: Alright, alright, same rules are before
We're gonna go till you cant see my first post nomore
Should the line limit be set are four?
And will we be free to mention whores?

And what about rhyming scheme?
Either or, in ABAB I'll reign supreme.

And though my couplets can be wack,
my freestyle will smack
you down.

Reeves: Let flow your style, don't try conforming
Feel free to range from rock to "porn"ing
Spin it, blend it, flip it upside down
You see how I changed my rhyming now

Love or ******** the rigid structures
I switch even when I'm not yet done
So keep on beatin' 'til your spleen ruptures
Or your poetic juices just cease to run

So slap it, scream it, kick, fight and battle
I'll beat it, I'll reach it, roar, rage, and rattle
I'll whip and slash like I'm rough raising cattle
So play it like you're playing piano
It's a game, it's a contest, it's a poem slam-o
And I'll run you down 'til you run out of ammo

If it is at all possible, see if you two can be online at the same time for it.

After the poems have been written, the voting panel will vote. Here is the 5-person voting panel, selected by me:

-Meacorme
-Saurciriel
-Ribbish
-Lord Narcissus
-Theodra

Don't worry, we don't have to be all on at the same time! Instead, on a scale of 1-10 (10 being the highest), you will PM me with three different scores for each finalists. I will average these scores and see who got the highest!

And now the fun part for the rest of you...it's time to show your support! Pick the finalist you like the most and cheer them on! Make them slogans or rhymes! Make it like a presidential campaign with poems instead of speeches! It will be a lot of fun and really get our energy out.

But I have said enough. Since Lyzz the Dark Beast's name goes after Kelti's (K-L), she will do the first improvised poem.

LET THE FINAL ROUND OF THE POETRY SLAM BEGIN!

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 11:33 am


...I take that back. Kelti, you go first.

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Kelti

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 3:09 pm


xd

HOLLER!
CALL 'ER!

Lyzz! Lyzz!
Our finalist of whiz!

What will you do
When it comes to you
To rhyme it out
Shall you scream or shout?!
PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 3:22 pm


|__|b***h on Board|__|

No need to rush;
We got the time so why don't you hush?

I ain't got the spark,
I'm mean as a shark
I'm here to win,
Not stab you with a pin.

This sure sucks,
Just don't got the luck.

Kelti, Kelti
You got the flame,
So with snow I'll pelt ye,
Too bad you're way too lame.

To meet the pace,
with this face.

Don't know what else to write,
So it's your turn to fight!

(This sucks. xd )


'All we are is dust in the wind...'

L Y Z Z A C I O U S` DB


Kelti

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 3:43 pm


And fight back I will,
Even if I have to kill!

Lyzzie, Lyzzie,
Your words make one dizzy;
Don't try to cheat,
Because my words go with the beat

Of sound!
Look around!
Get your chocolate Mounds
And attempt to gain 5 pounds!

5 pounds you'll gain
But in the end your words will be pain!
Sleepless nights
Of unbearable fights

You will fall!
Like the GD and ED you'll fail us all!
What will you do next, for I am uncertain
But, alas, you must speak
For I will retreat
Behind the velvet curtain!

( xd )
PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 4:00 pm


|__|b***h on Board|__|

You ain't got the guts
To kill me
I'll kick yo' but
while you scream like a Banshee!

You accusin'
Buzzing like a fly
Me of cheatin'?
Filling lifes mind with lies!

You say you're pimpin'
I think you're wimpin'
OUT.
Without a doubt!

You retreat
Like a scared dog
You think you're sweet
Like a frog in a log.

So I step on back
With a brilliant laugh
I'll be on that plaque
I'll digress on your behalf.


'All we are is dust in the wind...'

L Y Z Z A C I O U S` DB


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 4:29 pm


surprised
This should be fun.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 4:55 pm


WOOOOOO! RHYME IT! YEAH! *dances*

Meacorme
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Kelti

Green Combatant

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 5:08 pm


Scream like a Banshee?
No, siree!
I ain't got the lungs
To scream with a cursed tongue.

You think you're rad
But you're just mad!
That I am pimpin'
And you're the one with the crooked cane limpin'.

OH!

BURNINATION! TEMPTATION!
KELTI RUNS AN INVASION
AS LYZZ IS ON THE VERGE OF MIGRATION
IT'S AN EMULATION! SENSATION!
SWEEPING ACROSS THE NATION!

You think you can rhyme
But not worth a lime!
You're wasting my time
As you burn our eyes
With your rhymes of bogus lies!

So come out of the dark now
And quit grazin' the words like a cow
Show me what you got
And prove you're something I'm not

Everyone wants the truth
And not your lies, because they hurt like a sore tooth!
So come now! Knock me out!
Show me your true talents, you sour-crout!

I know I fail at flames
But your flames are worse
For they are lame
With your spellbinding curse!

COME ON LYZZ!
BE A FINALIST WHIZ!
BLOW US AWAY!
WITH YOUR LAST REPLY FOR THIS DAY!
PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 7:28 pm


UM.
Lyzz...?
...okays.
YOU BOTH GET 10'S.
cause you both actually did a super cool job.
...more tomorrow?

Meacorme
Vice Captain


L Y Z Z A C I O U S` DB

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:52 pm


|__|b***h on board|__|

Hey,
Had a part-ay,
So long,
I'm gone

You may call me a cow,
But you're still a sow.
You ain't got nothin' on me
I'm pure as the sea.

Kelti,
You think you can Part-y?
I think not,
This fiya's gettin' hot!

You're gonna fail
I'm wingin' it now!
You're nothing but a quail!
Italians say 'Ciao'
To you
So my mule goes 'Moo'

And says Sayonara,
I'll see ya tomorra'!
You ain't got the hate
Nor will I get the bait.

KELTI, KELTI!
YOU KNOW YOU'RE SMELL-Y!
I'LL BE THE WINNER
OF THIS DUO OF GD-ERS!

SO GO HIDE IN THE SHADOWS
OF WOE
AND LOSE THAT GLOW
OF THINKIN' YOU'RE GONNA WIN!

(I seriously did have a party. XP)


'All we are is dust in the wind...'
PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 12:01 am


All right, ladies!

You've heard the rounds, what's done is done
You've seen what it's like to have a gun on the run
In a poetry-slam, so let's get things straight:
You two were both rockin', and you were both great.

Now listen up, now here's what's real
We're gonna reveal the real big deal
I'm gonna head up with the voting panel
Where we're gonna judge and we're gonna ramble

'Til the winner is founded and the sinner is pounded
And the hands are cast and the scores are all rounded
So you panelists PM, and right now I'm on my leave
Got any questions, ask your friendly neighbor Reeves

Reeves
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N a r c i s s u s

PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 1:47 am




Holy...

This is a...

Wow...

Okay...

They're all...

Really...

Good...

But, what the heck am I doing on the review board, Reeves!

I didn't sign up for that!

[/irate]

Meh.

^^

I'll play the strict Soviet Russian judge!

"Iss crudd! Vat arh yuu trying du mak ear? Crap?! Dis iss Crap! Duu et ull egain!"

 
PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 7:50 am


Lord Narcissus


Holy...

This is a...

Wow...

Okay...

They're all...

Really...

Good...

But, what the heck am I doing on the review board, Reeves!

I didn't sign up for that!

[/irate]

Meh.

^^

I'll play the strict Soviet Russian judge!

"Iss crudd! Vat arh yuu trying du mak ear? Crap?! Dis iss Crap! Duu et ull egain!"

|__|b***h on board|__|



-slap- D<

You better judge us!
I've been speaking/typing in rhymes ever since I started this poem-off.
It's quite annoying.


'All we are is dust in the wind...'

L Y Z Z A C I O U S` DB

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