There was a young boy who was pretty much living his ideal perfect life, he was a very good kid too, he lived a wealthy life with a very nice family and a younger brother who seemed to love catching rats that he found in his backyard or near his neighbors yard. One night the boys brother had left to go catch some more rats to add to his collection in his room, he was near an open sewer and he went inside to see if he can find any, the little boy seen 4 rats eating a corpse of cayote and the boy was about to throw up but figured that hes going to catch those rats no matter what. The little boys older brother had noticed that his little brother wasn't home and decided to go in his room that not even his parents ever been into besides the 1st day when they were moving his stuff in, the boy opens the door without hesitating and notices his little brothers huge collection of rats. There was many different types of species of rats and different sizes of them, he also noticed that the rats that were caged together weren't really being fed and that the rats have been eating each other out of hunger. The boy gasped and ran out of his little brothers room and shut the door closed, ten minutes later his younger brother finally came back home with what appeared to be a box with a cloth covering it, the older brother asked his younger brother "Why are you hiding those rats when everyone knows that you have a large collection in your room," and the younger brother replied "These are by far probably my most fierce and coolest rats i ever found and I'm going to keep them!" the older brother looks at him kinda scared. The younger brother doesn't notice his scared expression and walks off into his room. The next day his little brother comes out of the room still happy and fixes himself a bowl of cereal, then the older brother walks in and says to his younger bro "hey uhmm... why exactly do you collect the evil little creatures?" and the little brother replies "well... i don't see why you care what i do but i suppose i can answer your question, you see brother... i collect those 'evil little creatures' because i think they are really cool and i love them" the older brother looks at him oddly and says " but how can you breath in your room? It stinks so badly in there and... its just soo gross and disgusting!" the younger brother ignores him and finishes eating his cereal then runs back into his room. The older brother gets kinda pissed off and sighs. Later that night there is an earthquake and the whole house is surprisingly quiet and the older brother knocks on his little brothers door and no one replies. The older brother slowly opens his little brothers door and as he looks into his brothers room his eyes widen, realizes that his little brother is being eaten by all the rats he collected in his room then the boy screams and everything goes blank. The boy wakes up and realizes that he had a nightmare and he walks into the kitchen to pour him a glass of milk to try and calm himself down, his heart pounding very hard and his throat kind of closed in making it hard for him to swallow the milk, he walks back up the stairs into his room and stops at his door, he turns around and walks towards his little brothers door. Hesitating for a moment he slowly knocks on the door and his brother yells at the door "who's knocking on my door and what do you want?" the brother replies "uhmm, sorry... i was just checking up on you to make sure your alright, goodnight!" the boy waits to hear his younger brother say goodnight and hears nothing after waiting for 5 minutes. The boy walks into his little brothers room and screams at what he see's, about 30 or more rats were feasting on his little brothers flesh, rats tearing away the flesh. Most of the rats covered in blood running all around him making little squeek sounds. The boy runs out of his room and is outside, he runs to his neighbors house and a man opens his door and says "Oh hey, its you... what are you doing here so late... you look sick, are you alright?" the boy barely able to look at him opens his mouth and no words come out, the boy was shaking terribly and pulled on his neighbors arm to go to his house and the man willingly follows the boy into his house and into his room. The guy looks into the room and quickly closes the door and pulls out his cell phone then calls the police and takes the boy to his house to wait there, the guy goes back to the house to wait in front of it for the police to come. Ten minutes later a few cop cars came and began talking to the guy, then they ran into the house. The cops walk out of the house holding pieces of cloth on their mouths disgusted and sad at what they saw when they went in. The man took some of the officers to his house to see the boy and the boy follows the officers to a cop car and drove off to the police station, the police asked the boy questions but the boy wouldn't say a single thing and ever since that day, the boy never talked and never went out at night or never wanted to see another rat.
~Written by Pyth A.k.a. Tori G.
I wrote this story back in 2006, it has a few errors i realized. I have to start making stories again hehe well leave comments and let me know what you think! wink
~Written by Pyth A.k.a. Tori G.
I wrote this story back in 2006, it has a few errors i realized. I have to start making stories again hehe well leave comments and let me know what you think! wink
