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My heart is broken, my heart is burned,
But from the ashes, I shall learn.

My heart is still in ashes, but soon you shall see
I will rise again, even more valiently

Like a Pheonix, once flying so high
Comes crashing down in flames and ashes, in just a blink of an eye.

She will come back to the high skies
Flying even more beutifully

Higher and Higher she will fly
When she comes back down
In a heap of flames

Only to return to the skies
Will this be the last time she is down?
Or will this be the time she finds salvation in stars?
Nevermore to go crashing down again?
Only Time will tell.

In the end she will
But unlike a book, you can not skip to the end.
You can never see the end,
and will never know you are there till it comes