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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:52 am

♣♣♣♣♣ART PICTURE POST♣♣♣♣♣

Our on little section to post art just because we can. smile
It can be anything from anime, realism, and photography!
And by all means if you draw any of your RP characters feel free to post them!

This section is for any kind of art you want to show off or get critique on!

Additional rules for this thread
♣You must clarify whether you wish for critique or just want to show your newest art
♣If someone does request critique you must comply if you reply to there picture and give advice on 1 thing =]
♣if the artist fails to mention there preferances its fair game you can choose to critique or just comment there picture
♣If you used a referance you must post it or a link to it

Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:53 am

UNSURE?

Unsure or how to critique or get critiqued?
Well I'll make some forms to help you our =]
These are by no means required to use! And if you want you can alter them to help you better =]
They are just a means to help people understand what you want when you post your art.

CRITIQUING
A small guide
Well someone asked for critique and you want to help them out but dont want to hurt there feelings? Or dont know how to properly critique? Well then allow me to assist.

If you still want to be nice but tell them something helpful to improve themselves? Try the sandwich its a commonly used method in many things to help.

ex.
Wow your shading looks great!
The right leg looks a bit thin if you thicken it a bit.
What an expressive character.

Or here's a form you can use

Username of who's art your critiquing?:
Something you like about this piece:
Something that can be done to improve it:
Any example tutorials to help with improving?:

Or here is a helpful Guide

FORM
(post this with your pic if you would like)

Username:
Comments or critique?:
Do you want redlines?:
Anything specific?:

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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:41 am

I guess I'll throw myself out here so that the ice is broken =]

Username:manasstalker
Comments or critique?:Critique please =D
Do you want redlines?:Never!!! i hate redlines no drawing over my picture D=
Anything specific?:I already know her right leg is off XD
i may make her an OC

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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:59 am

Username of who's art your critiquing?: manastalker
Something you like about this piece: the color and charecter disign are wonderfully done. its very creative and not comonly seen.
Something that can be done to improve it: the wrinkles in the shirt on her right arm is slightly odd...
Any example tutorials to help with improving?: cant think of any right off the back

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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 10:27 am

Username of who's art your critiquing?:nomikimiki
Something you like about this piece:very lively characters they aren't just standing there.
Something that can be done to improve it:the bottom right girls right hand looks odd but im not sure why
Any example tutorials to help with improving?:not that i know of sorry XD

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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:41 pm

yeah i didnt do the hand properly i whold have filled out the thing but i was in a hurry to get them posted and they are actuly charecters from the rp of haka-something or nother going on right now!<3,

Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:16 pm

Username of who's art your critiquing?: Manasstalker
Something you like about this piece: I really love the character design. It's very unique and totally kickass =D I love the fierce look on her face and whip = awesome
Something that can be done to improve it: I bullshit my way through anatomy so these might not be completely correct. Anywho...
On her left arm the elbow is too low, it should be level with the bottom of the rib cage (or the part that goes ) ( ). This makes the arm seem disproportioned
Hips. On her right side, the belt is cutting into where her hip should be and also cuts it short. The leg then looks disconnected from the body. On her left side she doesn't have female hips as you've drawn it straight. This would make her left leg come out a little bit more as well
Any example tutorials to help with improving?: I don't know XP

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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:29 pm

double post DX

Username of who's art your critiquing?: nomikimiki
Something you like about this piece: Very interesting and lively. The characters looks really excited. I'm totally loving the hair on the girl with blue hair in the second picture and her hat too smile The first picture makes me giggle
Something that can be done to improve it: The style of the first one makes it hard to critique so I'll move on to the next
For the hands keep in mind that the fingers overlap each other when the hand is looked at at an angle. On her right hand because the fingers are beside each other it looks wierd. Also the fingers tend to curl inwards rather than outwards. On her left hand, her pinky is infront of her ring finger, which doesn't make sense. The ring should block the pinky rather.
On the kitty girl, the lower arm should curve on both sides like ()-ish if you understand what I'm trying to say heh
Any example tutorials to help with improving?: again no idea

Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:49 am

oh i dint notice that about her arm! thanks for pointing that out and yeah i knew that her hand was funny looking and not adding up. but that acctualy helped tons

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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:17 pm

I FIXED MY DEVI-ART <3 finnaly ha ha ha ha so if yall wanna look me up here it be
http://karinbeanpoker.deviantart.com/

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