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 Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 4:20 pm
Here's one of my favorites.... its short though.. actually heres a couple...
Nothing before this moment had been bad.
THis was a whole new level of bad, and i knew i would die today.
All because or him.
In the dark of night,
the lights around me
look like eyes glaring down upon me.
The only thing that consumed my heart was the ill hatred i had for him.
opinions?
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 3:07 am
I liked it, i'd love to read some more though. Yours are way better than my wimpy attempts :3
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 11:07 am
Lol... that's pretty much all the poems ive wrote... i usually dont write poems... >.< but Thanks!
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:46 am
The darkness blocked and hid his once handsome face,
now so tired and grey.
when the sun returns,
so will his true self.
but he is so sad,
and nothing can cheer up his blue spell
and one day,
his life leaves him,
but the sun shows him once more.
as handsome and cold as ever.
Sorry that sounded like crap. I wrote it for my Katie after one of her son died from a cancer, and he wasn't even old. 
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 10:18 pm
-jaw drop- WOW excellant!!
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