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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:45 am


This one is kind of like the one prior (some places are loosely fit) but if you read it for what it could be, it would be b@d@$$. Chapter 2 kind of sux a wee bit, but it holds true to the greater storyline.


This is a story based on fiction and belief.


Thought

Prologue:

It all started with a crash, literally. I was sitting in my friend’s car, patiently observing oncoming traffic. We were scheduled to arrive at a bar called Frenchie’s in about an hour to play the normal drinking game while staring at ladies we would never be good enough to obtain the numbers of. I was already a tad woozy from the shots I took at his house. Oddly, however, he was sober enough to run for Office.
Throughout the trip, I was consumed with thinking about the reality of the world. What was life, what gave us free reign of this desolate planet in the midst of this desolate solar-system? Lost in question to existentialism, basically it was the usual train of thought for a twenty-one year old.
After a few moments locked in thought of the deepest caliber, I questioned the purpose of our having been manifested in the first place. After all, mankind, not having the knowledge to answer said question, created walls around our human existence, walls that were built to segregate us from the rest of the planet. We work for the ability to purchase something someone else created, and name that our soul purpose in life, ignoring everything else in the process. Nothing in the entire world matters as much to us as what we achieve. Whatever god deemed us favorable enough to bequeath upon us this gift of life would naturally want something in return, would he not? What if it wasn’t a gift at all?
In the midst of these spiritual wanderings, I hardly noticed and took into account that my friend, whom on any other day I would trust with my life –if cars were not involved-, was changing lanes without signaling before hand. This was something I had witnessed for a while, and always commented upon in mind if not verbally. Of course, everyone is permitted to one screw up a day, but if that was the case, than this would be the only thing he had ever done wrong.
And yet I didn’t suspect that there was to be a drastic change in the way my world worked until the moment I heard another car’s horn blare and tires screech. By then it was too late.
Surrounded by the sound of grinding metal, crunching glass, and the force of a two ton rhino colliding with a brick wall, I witnessed perfect white, soon to fade to a more perfect black.
At one point I awoke to the sound of sirens in the cold, a policeman hovering over me with a penlight staring me in the eye. I must have spouted some sort of anti-governmental protest, and it must have hit home with a vengeance, because the cop cursed, then turned away and said that I would be just fine. I wondered who he was speaking to, and turned my head to look. That was when I heard something in my neck pop like a cap gun going off. Pain enveloped me and before I was given back to the darkness, I saw her surrounded by a crowd of onlookers. She visually seemed more real than any of them.

Chapter 1: Clear?

“Clear!”

A jolt of pure energy accompanied the spiked force of the voice as I slowly came back from the black with a gasp that should have torn my chest apart. Then returned to the black with equal fervor.
I’ll only say this once, so do your best to understand the feeling of resuscitation from the patient’s end. Once your heart stops for any period of time and is started abruptly, there is a feeling akin to something bursting from your chest. If there were sounds of bones breaking, I would have been convinced that I swallowed an alien. It hurt…that bad. Anyone who goes through a heart murmur or heart attack will know what I am talking about, and would probably be clutching their chest in not-so-fond memory of the occurrence. Sometimes, before the crash, I’d lie awake in bed awaiting the chariot of dreams to carry me to that place, and my heart would seem to sneeze. What I mean is that its beats grow softer, and then with a resounding thud, it sort of re-awakens. That feeling hurts a bit. Imagine that about a hundred fold. There were tears in my eyes as I finally opened them for the first time in a month. That’s right, a month. I learned this from the same doctor that I would have swung at when I was brought back, if I could have. Apparently, I was in a shock induced coma for a month after the wreck. I suffered lacerations; the biggest of which needed five-hundred stitches, located down my chest, caused by part of the door frame, which they had to surgically remove from my breast bone, internal swelling; which would have turned to bleeding had I not been so lucky, eight broken ribs; complements of the door frame, and a broken neck. Accompanying which, of course, was light amnesia, which dissipated in a week.
My friend was killed instantly, no airbag. His face was meshed so completely around the steering wheel that they had to cut part of it off to get him out of the car. To this day, I can’t remember what he looked like. Everything else came back but that. He was my best and closest friend of ten years, and suddenly, because of a stupid turn signal, even my memory of him was wrenched away. Horrible though it may seem; I was extremely thankful to find that, because of the coma, I wasn’t able to attend the funeral.
My neck broke in such a way that I needed physical therapy to relearn how to use the lower half of my body. Needless to say, the events which transpired since my meeting with that woman had pretty much negated the possibility of giving that instance much thought. My family visited me the second day of my stay in the hospital and we wept together. On the third day, I was surprised and shocked to see my father walk through those doors and sit at my bedside. We hadn’t seen each other for about eight months now and hadn’t lived under the same roof for about six years. The sight of each other opened up the wellspring once more and we shed more tears than the rest of my family’s put together. They say that to cry is to begin to heal an open wound. If that is indeed the case, then I must have had a clean bill of health three days in.
My legs felt stupid and detached. At first, I had to use the bars on the side of the bed just to lift my upper half. ‘Pins and needles’ doesn’t even begin to describe the feeling in my stupid legs. They say that an amputee feels a ‘ghost’ appendage where one was cut off. I felt that as well, the only differences being in that I wasn’t an amputee, and my stupid legs were still right there.
A week later, after they were convinced that my trying to rebuild my stamina and reconnect with my legs wouldn’t end up tearing me in half, I began physical therapy. My therapist was a balding man who must have been a gym teacher at one point, because he kept spouting nonsense like “pride might hurt but…” or “if you don’t give one-hundred percent…” Allow me to elucidate upon my rage at this point by saying that no matter what happened to a patient or what his defect is, talking about pride and one-hundred percent is about as useful as trying to teach a rat to say ‘hello’. Granted, he made me so mad that I pushed harder, but get realistic. When a person can’t walk but still has legs that could work, generally that person will be angry enough to keep trying to walk, regardless of the pep talk he receives from his ‘instructor’. Normally, when someone with legs as stupid as mine were at the time, is faced with such a problem, they won’t just give up if the ‘instructor’ isn’t around to push them… At least, I wouldn’t. But in contrast, I’d like to say that my physical therapist was trying to help, and he was trying to earn every penny of his paycheck.
Three days into that, I could stand again, albeit as wobbly as a duck on glass, and with the immense aid of rails. A week in, and I could walk with the walking rails in the therapy room. A month later –it was a big step- I could stumble about without much aid at all.

The next night, the rain pounded upon the window to my room, the only reassurance that there was indeed a world out there. One can only live with needles in the arms, bad food every meal, and a nurse who’s not much more than a live-in maid –one who likes poking people with needles- for so long before tedium sets in.

Chapter 2: A Rude Awakening

The final weeks in the hospital began to seep in and wreak havoc on my mind; I blame it on the IV drip. It started to seem as though I was becoming institutionalized. There were more visits from family and less visits from the nurse during that last stint, thank god. She seemed as though she had just come from shooting a horror scene for a movie in which she was the monster and was still absorbed in the roll.
The hospital was so uniform that I knew by heart what times were what, from the changing of the sheets, to the changing of the shifts.
I also learned the names of most of the staff. One in particular, Tom the janitor, I got along with rather well. He was the kind of person who you wouldn’t want giving important speeches but had such a kind face that he fit his position nicely. To put it bluntly, old Tom was psychotic. Not in the sense that he’d break down and scream at things that weren’t there, but in the sense that his mind would wander –even in mid speech, and just you try to follow that one- from what he should be thinking to the craziest stuff I’ve ever heard before. As a reference, one day we were chatting about his children and this is the sentence he threw from left field: “Oh, Donna’s ok. She just went to this one respectable comp’ny and got a raise- and joined the circus to make cotton candy for the whales.” …See what I mean? And he’s about sixty five, so it’s just that much stranger. Usually he’s quiet though, pretty much content with wherever the hell his mind’ll tend to wander in any given situation. The staff knows about his wanderings, but since he doesn’t cuss, and since when patients hear it and laugh, he laughs with him, they keep him around. Besides, his kids, both out of college, don’t seem to care that he’s all alone with his ramblings, not even giving him a dime to dance on. Needless to say, he needs all the money he can get just to survive in this cruel world.
Then there’s Gregg. I hate Gregg. Wait… not enough feeling there. I HATE Gregg. This man can be found repeatedly harassing and bullying old Tom every day. He’s one of those chumps that think that, just because someone isn’t like everyone else around, and because they may be a little light in the attic, god wouldn’t be doing justice unless he allowed someone like Gregg to make their life a live-in hell. To beat that, good ole Gregg is thirty-five, the wise age of knowing better than that. Well, old Gregg got what he deserved one day. It started like this, and remember, this was the second to last day I would be in that hospital:

Gregg was temporarily given the position of clean-up for when a patient either got well or transferred. At one point he and Tom had the bad luck, or at least Tom did, of running into each other during one of the transfers. Tom had said something to the effect of:
“Well, we gotta be in the same room, but if we stay on separate sides, we’ll hit Chattanooga in no time.”

Now, I understand how someone could take that offensively, I also understand how Tom was over in left field again… I think. But I guess that Gregg took it as honey to a bear and decided to beat Tom until he bled. So, later, Tom comes into my room to clean and I see this nasty looking knot on his forehead. I ask what happened. Tom answers, not a left field word in this sentence. Allow me to mention again, this man is about sixty-five years of age. I don’t know if you know this, but there is an age limit to getting beat to bloody shambles. I don’t know what that age limit is, but I am willing to bet that it’s shy of sixty-five. So I got angry. Now, Gregg is like a dog drowning in ice water, if you come close to him, even if it’s to save him, he’ll bite and bark and scratch and kick. It’s just in his nature. So direct confrontation, especially by me, would be next to useless. But such crime should not go unpunished, so I sat and schemed.
Then it hit me. There was a new patient in the wing that day, she was a burn victim. Horrible burns over three quarters of her body, including her arms, legs, and face. Her whole head was covered in gauze. She unfortunately wasn’t able to retain her ability to speak. She was single, and had no family to speak of. It was time to turn tragedy into vengeance.
Gregg started his shift the next day at around four in the morning, sleepy eyed with cigarette breath yawns. He worked his way from one side to the other; she was in one of the rooms his coworker would hit later that day. Mopping and Vacuuming and cleaning poop pots. Tom was standing around the lobby, in plain view of Gregg. We worked out that good ole Gregg would get one last possible redemption, and only if he didn’t start it with Tom again this morning. Gregg walked casually up to the lobby. Tom was whistling some odd, spacey tune when suddenly Gregg turned on him and balled up his fist and made to punch Tom in the face. Tom cringed, I cringed too in truth, and Gregg lowered his fist and laughed mockingly in Tom’s face. That was enough for me, plan still in play.
I waited about forty minutes and called the hospital staff from my room. They would know who was calling so this was where I had to pray for a miracle. If it was Ramon, Casper, or Stringer, I would be in the clear. If it was Regan, Miller, or the senior resident: Carter, I was screwed. The phone rang twice over a very nervous breath which was my own, and finally someone answered.

“Hey, kid, what’d ya need?”

Yes! It was Casper. He was called so because of his lack of skin pigmentation.

“Hey Casper, I wanna play a prank on Gregg, can you help?”

“Hey man, I dunno about that one! He’s in a pinchy mood today, ‘sides, you know what he’s like.”

“Aw, come on man! I’m only here for two more days,”
And then I added in my best Capone voice,
“He won’t touch me.”

“Ha, alright man. But if the blame falls on me, it falls on you more, capeech?”

“Got it.”

“Cool, wha’da’ya want me’ta say?” Casper asked, seeming to like this game more and more, you could tell because he was converting further into his Brooklyn accent. He was never a fan of Gregg and he had saved Tom more than once from Gregg’s wrath, almost getting broadsided in the process.

“That his house burned down and his wife is here in the hospital. Say that she got burned real bad trying to escape and that she’s in room…” I looked to Tom for the number. He held one hand up with fingers splayed.

“Five.”

“Man, I’m startin’ not to like this.”

“Dude, relax, seriously. I’ll take the fall.”

I could feel him shake his head from here in the room.

“Ok, but you gotta promise that I’m not getting fired over this…”

“Promise, Casper, thanks man.”

“Yeah, you owe me a steak dinner.”

“Will do, will do.”

“And I’m not just talking the cheap stuff neither, you better get me the granddaddy of all steaks, and A1 sauce too.”

I hung up.

Now this is the beautiful part of my scheme, Gregg’s house had no phone, so he couldn’t verify the info. Of course, he could have called the news or the police, but when your house just reputedly burned down and your wife is in the very hospital you’re working in, you tend to go to the room before you verify the information. In this case that’s just what he did. Good ole Gregg went at a dead run to room five when he got the message. The other beauty of my scheme was that she couldn’t talk, so there were no denials when he jumped into her room. She mumbled and moaned and the stupid fool thought that she was sad for the house and situation, when in fact; she was scared half to death of him and his rantings that she knew nothing about. The only miscalculation I made was to think that sooner or later that day, he would have left to see the house, or found out the lie and gotten mad. But he ended up staying over there all night. He finally found the truth of the matter the next day when his wife called, angrier then a bull-terrier, and explained that, no, the house was fine, and no, she was no where near the hospital. Surprisingly enough, however, instead of blowing up on either Tom, Casper, or I, as I figured he would, he went into a sort of depression, and said nothing to anyone for the rest of my stay.
I was probably a cold hearted fool for doing that, but I thought it was justified. Old Tom was sixty-five years of age, old enough to be my grandfather.
I still delivered Casper his steak, as promised.


Chapter 3: Fields of Roses

The last night of my hospital stay, I had a dream about the lady I saw before my neck snapped. She had short, raven black hair, and wore a beautiful, sparkling red dress. We were in a monstrously grand ballroom, dancing around people whose faces were not blurry but not quite distinguishable. She leaned toward me slowly as we revolved around and around in the center of the room. I felt her lips on my neck and my hair bristled. She held me intimately, and oddly enough, there was no shyness or fear on my part. It was as if we'd been lovers for a long time now. Her breath tingled and the warmth gave me goosebumps. She whispered as she kissed my skin.

“There is a line between us.”

I looked down and saw that she was correct. There was a line drawn red directly between us, stretching off into the walls, and perhaps from there, infinity. As we revolved, the line revolved as well, always keeping us separated. I looked about and saw that the other dancers also give a wide berth to the line. The more I looked, the deeper red the line grew.

“Don’t focus on it. Look at me.”

I tried, believe me, I tried. But it was impossible, the line had captured my entire attention, there was nothing else in my universe.
Then the line began to bleed.

The very moment the line began to bleed, an evil and amplified voice shouted from inside my head. It was hate-filled and malicious. The voice I’d suspect a Demon would own.

“This is the line you live by! See how it bleeds for you! Soon you’ll bleed too!”

I looked to the woman, my only salvation. She was in fear, looking about as if she heard the voice as well. I hugged her close to me, but the line started to burn my skin. I would have kept holding, but I feared that it would burn hers as well.

“Don’t leave me!” She screamed, eyes wide.

Awake.

My sheets were filled with sweat. I was cold. The memories of that dream to this day have never left me. Funny how it seems to work that way; can’t remember my best friend who died by my side, but I’ll never forget that dream… or that voice. I pressed the button and the bed propped up to a semi-sitting position. With shaky fingers, I found the remote and turned on the TV.
After about thirty minutes I felt calm enough, and certainly tired enough, to try to sleep again. When I was whisked off to sleep this time, the same dream played itself out again, me having been unable to retain any memory of the first during the second, with only the demon’s words changed.

“How many times have you danced to this tune? How many times more? You will bleed for me!”

My mother came to my bedside later the next day and helped me prepare to leave. I would wear a neck-brace yet for a time until my neck healed enough to eliminate the risk of a second fracture. My steps were unsure but confident as I walked out of the hospital. My bum having had so much free air it now felt trapped and alone, and I thanked god for that. We talked about life and things happening in our duel worlds at the time, she having had so much better gossip than I could have possibly attained. She enjoyed the story of Tom’s vengeance, but under the pretense of motherhood gave me a good slap to ensure that I learned my lesson. At last I was going home. On the way, we stopped by a burger joint, and I’ll tell you that it is the best feeling in the world after such an experience to be able to enjoy a good burger and box of fries. That was when the depth of what happened hit me.

“Hey, mom, can I see his grave before we go home?”

She just nodded and turned at the next light. It turns out that he was just a few blocks away from the burger joint after all. His grave was unmarred and simply devoid of pictures. That wasn’t the only reason I wanted to go there, but it was a big one. We ended up going to a florist and buying some flowers for his grave. I also wrote a poem later and set that up next to the flowers. It was laminated, and I stuck it into the grass under his headstone with golf tees, to the best of my knowledge, its still there. The rest of the day passed uneventfully.
That night, I went to bed and had a new dream, by far the most bizarre yet. In this dream, I was outside in the middle of the night in the middle of a field. The stars were blazing with white, colorful fury. There was a breeze, but no chill. I stood there, paralyzed, unable to move, as suddenly the mist at my feet and dew from the grass gathered into one ephemeral being. It was made of water and was in the shape of a diamond. It was three-dimensional and looked like two cones were placed together at their wide bases. The collected water washed from the top of the diamond to the bottom only to be sucked up through the bottom and go inside of the being again. This process was repeated throughout our discussion, talk about distracting.

“What is your cause?” It asked me in all seriousness. This question gave me pause.

“I don’t understand.”

“Every being was created with a cause, what is yours?”

“I need to find her.” I responded, knowing when I said it that it was right.

“She from our side?”

“Yes.” I didn’t know what that meant at first, but then I understood.

The being came up close and, if it were human, I would have guessed that it was trying to judge the validity of my statement.

“Fine.”

With that the being dissipated and I was honored with the spectacle of watching every drop return to its previous place, be it on a lone blade of grass, or in the mist. Then in the space of about fifteen seconds I sank under the earth and fell into a cavern, the cavern’s ceiling slowly started to sink, and I saw that there was a face in the ceiling. It was the demon.

“What is your cause?” It asked mockingly, “Your cause is your suffering!”

That voice was so evil and so painful to hear that I clasped my hands over my ears and prayed for the ability to endure the pain. Then the ceiling sank faster.
Just as it was crushing me, and I could feel the pain mind you, I awoke again.
These dreams continued to haunt me until about a year later. At this time I had a respectable job as a programmer for a multi-faceted corporation, a house, though no one to fill it yet, and a future. I still visited my best friend’s grave often and kept him up to speed on the happenings of our other friends. I realize that sounds a tad pathetic, but it kept me sane. I had seen much of the woman from my dream now, still wearing that red dress, still holding me so tightly. And through each and almost every dream I had, that red, bleeding line persisted. In fact, the only dream where that line was no where to be seen was the one directly after the dream about the water diamond…thing. This is how it went:

The ballroom was gone, instead, there was a field of roses, not a thorn among them, and she was standing radiantly in the center of the field. I ran to her.
Before I could get all the way there, she raised a hand in my direction, palm out saying “Stop.”
I obeyed.
She stood there for a moment longer, and then one by one all of the roses began to wither and turn black. It was such a sight, seeing each individual petal just give in and die. Moreover, the blackness seemed to start at the center point of the field, right where She stood. Then I noticed that she was withering as well. Black lines started at her legs and feet and traveled upward, every one of them growing larger as they went. Soon her legs were as black as the dying petals surrounding her.
“No!” I screamed, running to her side. I grabbed her and held her tight. She tried to push me away, but I wouldn’t let go. Soon her darkness was transferring to me, causing black lines to appear on my flesh. God, there was so much pain.
As my arms began to wither and die, and as tears welled up in my eyes, I shouted to her: “If you die, we both die. I will never let you die alone!”
She looked at me questioningly, but understood that this would not be negotiable. She still tried, however.

“This is my fate, not yours! You can’t save me!”

“I don’t care, I was unable to save my friend from his mistake; I’ll damn well still try to save you from yours, even if I can’t. Besides, it doesn’t have to end like this!”

She looked at me questioningly, all hope doused but yet not lost from her eyes. Her face was growing lines of black as we sank to the ground, our limbs no longer strong enough to hold us up. The lines reached her eyes and she cried a single tear composed entirely of blood.

“I love you!” I shouted, trying to make her see.

Suddenly, as the last word was finished echoing in my mind, and with more pain then the crash had inflicted, I woke up. Tears streamed down my cheeks and I was weeping still.
For the next few nights, the dreams toned down in magnitude. And again, horribly, I was thankful; I would have had a heart attack by the age of thirty five if this kept up.  
PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:47 am


Chapter 4: Analysis, Assumption,
And a Very Bad Day

I’ve always been fascinated by dreams and try often to better understand the metaphorical references in my own, here’s what I’d come up with at that point:

Let’s begin on the second most ominous part of every dream, the line. I believed that the line signified a huge and horrible difference or incompatibility between the lady in red and me. It having bled on the most emotional points may have conveyed that to try to breach said line would suffer unto us definite, cruel consequences. That the other dancers always avoided this line may have meant that they had a concept of said consequences, that they knew it was a warning.
The Demon may have represented my fear to cross that line by enunciating upon my fear of pain, which it has promised every night now. That the demon only originates in direct synchronization with my tampering with the line gave me this impression. For when the line was gone in the field of roses dream, the demon was gone as well.
I have yet to place the water diamond, except to say that it may be due to my growing need to see her again. Perhaps it is my fear of commitment and rejection in real life. A stretch may be to say that it is the guardian residing within me, wanting no harm to come to those I love… But I didn’t think that was it, to clean, didn’t feel right.
We all know what the girl represents, but to elucidate: She must have been my need for companionship; utterly kind, loyal, sensual, and perfect, every man’s dream wife. But above all else, I thought this was my interpretation of what love could be, because this woman was the promise of not only perfection, but acceptance as well. She accepted me for what and who I was without caring or wondering what skeletons lay in my closet beforehand.
The ballroom portrays not only an intimate setting, but also a very traditional and structured balance of emotion, almost as if at this point everything is smooth, correct, and at peace. I thought that it was a representation of a need for balance and organization, which I needed so badly at that point.
The dancers signified, or so I thought, the haunting idea that everyone else had found that organization, as well as someone to share it with. They were the replication of the very thing I had wanted. Their fear of the line was, perhaps, their fear of losing what they had gained. It made sense.
The withering field of roses. This was a big one. I thought that it had to do with corruption. Strange though, that of all the times that I felt that I would be the one inciting the corruption, she does it instead. I imagined all of the petals withering as all of the possible memories which could have been shared, and, one after the other, being killed from within. That having set foot in the field itself was inciting its very demise. But when the poison reached into her feet and her arms, it seemed as though the memories themselves were killing her and not the other way around. The significance of such a possibility scared the living hell out of me. To think that the one I loved would be the very one to end it all.

Those were my thoughts on the matter, and I must be just in saying that those interpretations were all but correct. Not one of them was what I thought it was.

A few months went by and I decided to try to submit my interpretations and dreams to a site on the web and instead of receiving a dream chart or detailed description of my dreams, I received a phone call. The one I spoke with said that I was experiencing something abnormal. He wanted to know how vivid my dreams were, the lucidity of the things around me. He also wanted to know if everything seemed tangible, if there were any objects in my dream that seemed hazy and incoherent. I said no, everything I had seen was documented in those pages that I had previously sent. Only the dancers' faces were hazy. He said that he would have to contact the professor he worked under and that he would call me back within two days time.
The second time he called me was to try to get me to go to a therapist and undergo hypnosis. The prime objective of such a visit would be to see if I could be put into that same state again. I asked him why that state was so important; he said that the relation between objects, parables, and messages found in my dreams didn’t match up with what anyone else was seeing. I asked if dreams were so literate a science that he could make such a statement accurately. He assured me that something was different between my dreams and others’. He said that they had done studies on thousands of patients and that I was the only one that made no sense. He said that it would be specifically for research and that, if necessary, he would be able to pay me a token allowance for allowing him and his crew to autopsy my dreams. Though he did use those words, he didn’t seem like he was going to do any real damage, so I told him that I would think about that and to await my call tomorrow. My ability to retain knowledge of the real world while in dream was sharpening and I thought I would ask Her what she thought if I saw her again. I did see her that night, but I was universally unprepared for the nature of the encounter:

I was standing in a dark street in a dark city in a dark corner of life. The city was in shambles, concrete walls were decimated, whole buildings were broken and burned, and the place was generally frightening. I stood for about fifteen seconds, taking it all in, when I suddenly heard a piercing scream. I knew who it was…
As fast as possible, I honed on what I thought to be the point of the screams origin, and ran as fast as I could. She screamed again, and I felt as if I was almost in reach of where she was, when, for all that I was worth, she screamed once more, and it seemed that I had gone the directly opposite direction then from where the scream was originating.
I shouted my anger to the gods, and began to backtrack, running even faster this time. Her screams were filled with terror and pain. She wouldn’t last for long. I doubled my speed and just when I arrived at what I thought was the place, a three story tall condo, still on fire too, she let out an ear piercing wail… she was no where near where I was searching. I couldn’t keep up the race, instead of having limitless stamina, as most dreamers do; I was running out at the steady, earthen pace. But suddenly I knew what it was that I was supposed to do.
I stood still as the ruins around me and, after catching my breath, called out to the demon.

“Hey, you son of a b***h! Leave her alone! If you want to play with someone, play with me! You were going to make me suffer and bleed, weren’t you? Don’t cop out now!”

When verbally instigating war with a demon, don’t ever feel as though you are losing the battle. Because the instant you start to call him out, your brain will fart, he’ll make it happen, and all of the usual gestures of disrespect will disappear instantly… Trust me.
Fortunately for me, he still accepted my challenge.

“Oh you’ll still bleed, child. You’ll bleed rivers!” The voice was echoing from everywhere, ahead of me, behind me, inside my own mind.
For an instant I felt clawed fingers tap the top of my head. I wheeled around, but there was nothing to be found. He was still toying with me. So with everything I had, I tried a trick I was convinced would never work. I forced all of my hate and pain and suffering to the center of my soul and pushed.
For a second the voice drew back, than came at me again with all the thunder of Zeus, and I recognized that it was laughing. There was ten times the force of when it first spoke to me in that voice, but it was still laughing.

“Did it fart?”

This hit me harder than anything ever had before, to be treated as a child by a demon who was acting childish infuriated me.

“Let’s see you do better!” I shouted, but before I could even finish, the demon was on me with all force, its voice surrounding the world, my flesh. My soul crept as far away as it could from the intensity of the evil.

“You have not an iota of the immeasurable amounts of madness this will cause you, stupid thing of flesh! You could not begin to comprehend the idiocy of what you have just instigated! You want pain!?! Is that want!?! Here!!! HAVE SOME!!!”

Suddenly my mind exploded from within, wishing to be freed from its shell. My heart was ripped in two whilst still beating inside of my chest, its tattered halves still trying to synchronize their rhythm, now being separated from each other. My lungs sought refuge in my mouth and were henceforth spewed from my lips, inside out, still attached to my throat. My stomach burst, sending jets of hydrochloric acid to begin melting my insides and intestines. My liver swelled to three times its size and I began puking inside my now external lungs. They filled up backwards and the acid ate through, spilling onto the ground in a hiss of rotten steam. My testicles popped, one after the other, like Mexico’s firecrackers on Cinco De Mayo.
Still I fought back, I gathered my pain and anguish and thrust gobs of it into my center and not only pushed, but rammed.
This time, the demon did jump back, and this time, it was out of genuine fear. I hadn’t even used that much of my now all encompassing pain, and it knew it. Without lungs to inhale, or a larynx to say them, I spoke these words, my last words alive:

“Retreat, b***h, 'cause you just gave me all the hate I need to beat you down-“

Suddenly, it was gone and I was whole again. There was still overwhelming pain but it felt as if it would slowly go away, if given the chance.

“Where the ******** is she?” I asked, knowing that the demon was still within ambushing distance.
A light shone, then, on the one building that I had been passing on my mad hatter dashes through the dilapidated town. I didn’t wait for confirmation, I just ran. She was in the top floor, bleeding and scared and reduced to animal nature, nipping and growling and not even aware that I was me. There was gore all over the walls and floor and even blood suspended somehow on the ceiling. All of it was hers.

I wasn’t going to be able to knock her out of her psychosis without doing something, so I hugged her close, oblivious to the blood she drew while biting the muscle in my neck, or the red line burning into us, as I whispered calmingly. She still fidgeted and screamed, pounding her fists against my chest, biting and clawing me, but strangely, when I spoke she subsided somewhat.

“It’s ok now, it’s ok. Shh, shh, shh. Please, please baby, its ok. It’s me.”

But she wouldn’t snap out of it, she couldn’t snap out of it. And by the time the dream came to a close, she still couldn’t see me for who I was. I kissed her as she bit my lower lip off and said goodbye.

After that dream, I decided to go to the psych, but only to be put into a deep rem sleep. And then only for the purpose of trying to save her, I didn't care if they questioned me while I was under, because after that moment, I knew her and the demon and the line were all real.

Chapter 5: Tragedy and Promises


At this point, life had begun to take turns that I would rather it didn't. My mother had been gone to the hospital for coughing fits, she had smoked for years, and found the latter stages of lung cancer, diagnosed with a probable lifespan of one year. Even with that event, I still found myself lighting up a smoke every evening. Each time the lighter's orange flame licked the tip of the cigarette, I would remember her. It was a form of devout torture; I knew that I would walk the same path as mother, but the hold had been taken over my actions already, and was vice like in its impenetrable grip. As she lay on what I would later find to be her death bed, I was enveloped in the most important and dire situation that I would ever face. Due to the strain from that conflict, I was doing what would invariably kill her in months. But I was too involved now to be able to stop my waking actions, too dependent upon my dreaming life to care about my living one. In the later months, I couldn't even enter mother's hospital room. There was too much pain there... and it made me think of the lady in my dreams. Even with the pain, however, I mustered up the courage to be able to see her one last time... Three days before her demise.

"Mom...?" My voice was a whisper. The room was sickly warm and musky. She turned her head to me and I almost screamed in fear. She was so worn, so calloused. In a few months, When the fear abated, it turned to apathy and empathy. I could literally feel what she felt at that moment. Our eyes met, and she knew.

"It's not as bad as it looks, sweetheart." She whispered, the very action, small as it was, took part of her remaining life force to perform. She had a ragged hole in her throat, a testament to the cursed disease that was leeching her soul away, same with the scars from the removed lung. The cancer had spread from her lungs to her throat, now it was headed upward. Her voice was less than a whisper, but some sadistic God made her words clear as a broken bell. Though I had promised myself that I would not cry, tears were now streaming down my face regardless to my need for the contrary.

"Mom!" I rush to her side, not allowing myself to believe what was being portrayed in her every movement, from her choked tears to her almost lifeless hug. She felt frail, broken. She was dying.

"I've written you into my will, I know it's late, but everything will go to you when I die." That was Mom. She was strong as a bull and meaner than a rattle snake when she wanted to be. She saw the denying look in my eyes and turned deadly serious in an instant.

"Hey... Look at me. I will die, I only say this in this manner because you will have an incredible burden when I do... I'm sorry for this, you've already watched someone close to you die. But the house is not paid off. You also need to contact the family and ask them to visit me. Chin up! You are the man now. I love you, and will always watch you close." I was crying, but knew that this was the last time that things of this import would ever be said by her again. To this day, I remember every word.

"Your uncle shall arrange the funeral. You know which song to play, right?" She had requested a particular song for her death, I had memorized it for her.

"Yes, I do." She saw that I truly did and nodded. I wept openly in front of her. Tears didn't matter in this place, however. They were only ghosts of wishful thinking.

I left that place with a hole in my soul, something that would never be refilled. I had lost a friend who's face I would never see again, in memory, or reality, and a mother who's face I would never forget. Her face would haunt my mind forever. That was the first time that I had ever seriously contemplated suicide.

It made me feel sick that I would consider such a deed after leaving the side of the only person that would ever have cared if I lived or died.

That night, I had the emotionally worst dream that I had ever borne witness to.

I was walking down a path and saw two people standing on a bridge above the path before me. Getting closer, I saw that the lady in red was there, and, with much astonishment, standing next to her, I saw my dying mother. They seemed to be conversing happily. It made me feel so complete and heavenly to see them do this. After a few moments, they saw me. They both turned to me and smiled winningly.

"Hello son!" Mom said. She seemed so happy. Seeing her this way after seeing her in the hospital took a great burden off of my chest. The lady in red waved bashfully. It was as if I stumbled from a horrible nightmare into heaven.

"We were just talking about you!" Mom chirped. The lady in red caught my gaze and we had the only moment we would ever obtain in which time was caught in the spider-like strands of a dream catcher. God, how I wish I could describe this with more emphasis. Absolute Perfection, that is the only thing I can say.

Mom whispered something into the lady in red's ear, she giggled happily.

Suddenly, a palpable change came, one which could only be felt. Mom and the lady in red both turned more grim than the grave. With her most serious and loving face, mom turned to me.

"I can see why you fight for her, but listen closely to what I say. This is not a fight you can win. Please step back and let things progress as they will." When these words were spoken from my own mothers lips, my rage began to swell. How could I let it go? I witnessed first hand the demon's twisted grasp on the lady in red. Seen it's painful touch. I knew instantly that I would be unable to do as she asked, though I had no doubts that it was indeed my mother to whom I spoke.

Suddenly, as if in retaliation to that thought, the line appeared again. This time, it held me from both her and my mother. I knew what that meant.

"No! You can't have them! I swear I'll kill you!" But just as I reached a hand to them a gleaming bus sped down the road toward the bridge they stood on.

"Look out!" I screamed, watching the bus inch closer and closer. My scream was to no avail, for the bus bore down upon them as vicious as the heartless being that it was. I closed my eyes and felt a hot, viscous liquid splatter on my face. Morbidly, I wondered who's it was.

Awake.

It was the first time that I had ever chosen to see a psych and be hypnotized. I politely asked them how long the hypnosis would last, and they calmly replied that it would last only about thirty minutes in REM sleep. Now, considering that most of my dreams lasted for about two to eight minutes, this seemed like a decent trade-off. It would be more than enough time to fix this situation, or so I thought.

I made a promise that I would kill the demon for his deeds, and I would not back down. No matter the cost, even my now darkened soul, I would kill it. I intended to keep that promise.

I was welcomed with open arms when I arrived at the clinic. One doctor, Mr. Vanderburgh stopped to tell me about the procedure. He was short, stubby, and balding. The perfect subconscious interpretation of a psyche, right down to the spectacles.

He beckoned me to a couch in the middle of a third-rate office and explained the procedure to me in greater detail.

“Have you ever been hypnotized before?” He asked. I found, over time, that he had an annoying way of pushing his spectacles up to the bridge of his nose when they fell a tad.

“No, this is my first time. I've seen it on TV. They would take watches and swing them back and forth like pendulums. Then they would spout nonsense and count down from five.”
During this exchange, both doctors chuckled. “I'm afraid that our hypnosis will be a tad more scientific than that.” Replied Mr. Vanderburgh.
After we had dispensed with the pleasantries, I was led to a darkened room with a single couch and EEG machine in the corner. There was a doctors chair in the center of the room and nothing else.
“Lie here please. Make yourself comfortable. At this point, your comfort becomes paramount, without that, your experience will be changed for the worse. You were correct about the nonsense, however, and we will be required to speak it. You may find that it is very different when you are sitting on the couch as opposed to watching it on television.”
With that speech out of the way, we began. I will always remember that there was nothing quite like it. To anyone who had never heard of hypnosis or any other altered state of conscious, I would suggest it. With this form of alteration, you really get to understand the idea of inert peace. What was strange was the fact that right before I fell asleep to the soothing sounds of the doctor's voice, I noticed the lady in red behind the doctor who was currently in my face.
She was sadly shaking her head.


Chapter 6: The First Mistake


Upon opening my eyes to the dream, I immediately found that hypnosis was a huge mistake. Instead of a field of roses, broken and burning buildings, or even a grand ballroom, I had been transported to what my mind was already being convinced was hell. There were spires and monoliths not unlike the stalagmites in dark caverns. The tips of these were spouting something that I was totally positive was blood. The ground was laced with web-like cracks from which an unnatural orange light was produced. This orange light was exactly the same color and hue as that which is created during a nuclear blast. Yet, even with the light, it was dark. Shadows seemed more real here, more substantial. There were horrendous cries of pain and hatred from condemned souls of beings outside of my vision. They were so explosive that I was thankful that I could not see them.
At pivotal moments in my life, I had felt that my life was governed by some inexplicable fate, and that there was a wall behind me
(Cog)
that pushed me irrevocably and inescapably toward some malign future. One filled with pain and condemnation. I felt this now, as I slowly made my way through the spiked land of filth and hate.
I looked up and was aghast at what would have been the sky. It was blood. Blood that rippled outward from a central point. I steeled myself, for I knew in my heart of hearts where that point led.
I came seeking war, but I will tell you now that I left seeking a semblance of sanity and recompense.
Inadvertently, I had opened the gates to Hell itself. I could feel it seep in through my pores. It was in the blood in the sky. It was in the ragged cracks in the ground, those which shone with a radioactive hue. It was in in the screams that tore my soul. The screams grew in intensity as I found my way toward the center. Soon they had become part of everything.
When I finally found my way to where it would end, for me or for her, I finally saw the demon.
It was not the same as in stories or ancient graphic depictions of grand battles of angels and demons. It was far worse.
It was massive, with black fur and teeth and claws. There were no distinguishable features with which to classify it as anything but immanent death. It held more ferocity than could ever be explained, so I'll not try. If you were to witness this fury, you would never be the same again. Every part of this thing spells your waning mortality. It is akin to facing off with a grizzly, but for that the grizzly shows no overt emotion.
My mind screamed and my body died. Not physically, but I would never mature farther then that. Just seeing this thing ended my upward growth. Every moment from this began the moments where I would stop living and start dying. My cells would henceforth slow in their reproduction, my life began its premature downward curve. In this telling, I am but thirty-five and look to be fifty. Never hooked on drugs, always ate as healthy as this day and age would allow. Regardless of this, I am now close to my deathbed. Yes, I survived this battle, else this tale would never be told. But, all things considered, I wish I would not have.
With feet which felt as lead, I marched ever onward, to the foot of the being which so haunts my life to this very moment. I stepped to its face, inhaled its noxious fumes, and spoke. Spoke from the core, from that place where few venture more than once. Spoke from the same core that allows a mother in fear for her child kill an assailant. Spoke from the same core that allows a murderer to continue his killing, regardless of knowing his actions and what they refute. I spoke to what even Angels fear to fight.



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 10:30 am


crying such a beautiful story. i've always liked your stories. ^_^
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