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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:04 pm
All around Otogakure are tall metallic gates which defend the city better than most other villages. These gates are amongst one of the tallest structures in the whole village. At the gate, an ANBU waits for anyone who might want to come in or invade and he decides who looks innocent enough and who looks like a dead man.
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:36 pm
Toska arrived at the village gates of the Sound Village. There was nothing particularly hostile about this fellow, he had just come here to check things out a bit. On the other hand the ANBU of the sound seemed a bit jittery. Like most ANBU they probably didn't take kindly to strangers and in return they treated visitors with hostility before anything else. "No worry guys, we're just out here on tour that's all." And indeed that is what he did. Rumor said that the new Otokage here was a little timid but someone who could probably worked best with the other villages. Then again this was something he had heard and he hadn't met the new Otokage just yet. What he did do for the time that he was here was walk around checking out the environment of the village. It wasn't exactly as the description most people described it as when they first founded the village but it did hold a few historical things of interest here. The snake monument was one of them. Probably a tribute to the founding Otokage of the village.
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:03 pm
Atraeyu appeared using the bodyflicker when he arrived at the gates. As he could tell the ANBU seemed unaffected by their presence, Toska had more than likely reassured them that they were here for only small investigation. There was no need to really go deeper into the village. "Well it seems it's as expected." He said nodding at a few things he had noticed in the environment. The environment was munch different than what he had seen during the reign of the first Otokage here, meaning that either the new one had leaned towards different beliefs or had decided to make the Sound Village turn over a new leaf. "Well it seems like there won't be munch to take back as I can see so far Toska." He said looking around.
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:06 pm
It seemed that the others had arrived before him just as expectant. He had remembered this place. His thoughts were similar to the others on many levels. This place had changed greatly over the years. At one time sound shinobi were always on the move for whatever reasons unknown. But now activity here seemed like it slowed down quite a bit. It was more than likely because of the new kage that had gotten the job recently. The guy was probably a slack off compared to the rest of the Otokage before him was what it looked like. "Man this place gives me the blues. I haven't been here for five minutes now and I'm ready to leave already. It's just the dull feeling around here." He scratched his head with a confused frown. "Anyways I'm not seeing munch so it's about time we go ahead and close things up. Besides you guys have been here a little longer than me now."
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:11 pm
"Hard work pays off in the end, but I would like to know- what kind of work pays off now?" The Otokage came out of the Village gates with an Anbu close behind. At the site of three men at the gates, Danzo got the attention of the gate guard and hit him, apparently yelling at him for not closing the gates to the possible trespassers and killing them. Danzo made a set of handsigns and the earth would begin to humidify, eventually becoming sticky and swampy. He walked over his own trap, since he was an expert when it came to Doton and reaching the men presumably trapped in the quicksand-like jutsu began conversing with them. "Doton: Yomi Numa. It's an A-ranked jutsu, capable of trapping even the strongest of Anbu. Before I kill you where you stand, state your business." He signaled his two Anbu, the gate guard and the one following the Otokage to come closer in case the enemy was hostile. If the visitors where strong which Danzo hoped they were, it would be 3 against 3. The three men vs a Kage and two Anbus. Although if they appeared to be weak then Danzo would fight the three shinobi by himself. Danzo smiled. He loved challenges.The Hard-headed Overconfident Solid Wall Earth-Styled Otokage
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:40 pm
Atraeyu flipped backwards and landed on one of the trees behind him. Though the sand hadn't reached his original position just yet, it still gave him enough time to say what was needed. "So you're the Otokage. Far from what I expected compared to your predecessors. We're only here to investigate a few things. Normally we'd kill you along with your ANBU for your approach but since I'm in a good mood today so I'll let you off the hook this time." He said giving the Otokage his first warning. War with the Flame was the last thing the Otokage wanted, he had barely established himself over the ninja in the Sound. "Biting off more than you can chew could be a little hazardous to your you and your village. Now as I was saying, we're here for a little investigation and scouting. A few things happened in this area a few years ago and so we're looking into the area for anything that might lead us to what we're looking for is all." Atraeyu's expression remained the same just as when he had entered the area the first time. He didn't care whether the Otokage believed him or didn't. As long as he told him what he needed to hear was fine. How the man responded was mainly up to him.
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 2:15 pm
 Toska jumped and landed on a branch not far from Atraeyu. This Otokage had surprised him a bit. But still he was far from what the stories had told him about the first Otokage. Still he wanted to see what this Otokage was capable of but at the same time they had orders to follow, and creating hostility wasn't part of them. But if the Otokage still wanted to tango he would be happy to rake through a couple of ANBU before saving the Otokage for desert. "Wow, is that how you treat visitors?" He scratched the side of his head and grinned at the kage. "You know Atraeyu if this were up to me I'd say get rid of the Otokage and ANBU. He said bringing his hand upon the katana that sat behind his back. He would wait until the kage would answer Atraeyu's question first.
"Just one thing. I'm actually curious about what actually gave this guy the idea that he could kill us. He has a better chance at making a decent name for himself in his own village than doing something trying to accomplish something so foolish. I tell you, these kages get more cockier and cockier these days."
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 2:35 pm
Toshi had leaped on one of the branches on the side of Toska by the time the Otokage activated his jutsu. He did nothing for the most part except for stand reach his hand into his backpouch. In between his fingers on each hand lied a set of senbon that were ready for use in case the Otokage wanted to get real. "Nope it seems he doesn't Toska." He answered Toska's question to the Kage. "Seems to me like they rather except death than anything else. Well their kage at least. The earlier ANBU seemed a bit smarter than their own kage." He smiled. "Ordering ANBU to kill on sight could cause problems between villages, especially for those ninja bringing in messages from other villages. Ah well, their funeral." He said bringing the handful of senbon at each side of his leg as he eyed the Otokage and the ANBU.
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 2:08 pm
Xzaro | Datenshi 堕天使 | Kage 影 "There are still shadows in the brightest of lights."“You have to have the darkness for the dawn to come. I have long since closed my eyes. My only goal is in that darkness. A dark figure; dashing through the trees in the distance, quickly reaching a stop once it arrived near the Gates. Xzaro stood on one of the trees in the area, having the muddy ground, the Otokage, and the other shinobis in clear sight. He already knew that the Otokage was probably picking a fight because of boredom... how annoyingly predictable of him. Xzaro however, made no attempt to do anything about the Otokage's opponents and proceeded with what he was going to say. "Danzo. I have returned from the mission and the Hokage has agreed to whatever it is you proposed. He asks however, for a meeting in the Valley of the End." At the sound of his voice, all who were there would be surprised. Xzaro was as silent as the wind, and when he talked he rumbled like the thunder. Even when he stopped high above the others, they probably would not have seen or heard him as he quietly stepped foot on the branches. He focused his attention at the Kage, for he had no reason to fight with whatever low leveled shinobi these were. Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.”
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:41 pm
Toska had clearly seen and heard the useless Sound shinobi that had appeared. It was a bad reflection on the sound village. Stealth was one of the most important things that came along with a shinobi, and this shinobi couldn't even accomplish it. The amusing part was that this shinobi moved as if he actually believed what he used was called stealth. Nudging his the side of his temple, Toska frowned for a second. For a minute he thought it was just him. Instead gazed out into the distance taking a quick glance out into the open of the village. Everything he could see was within view from his position. The village was small. They Sound had just about everything except for what was important. "No wonder it's like this." He smiled. "I can see these shinobi are in need of going back to the academy to learn the basics, but then again I can see why. There is no academy for students." He spoke in reference to the poor stealth skills of the ninja who had just arrived. "Pity, I'd feel bad for killing a group of nobodies such as yourselves. Besides I see no value in killing shinobi who never attended a the academy Atraeyu. We only came here to see one thing, and we already got it." He released his hand from his katana seeing how this village had failed to meet his expectations.
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 4:29 pm
"Hard work pays off in the end, but I would like to know- what kind of work pays off now?" (You know that is considered godmod right? He is a Council member, meaning his rank should be around S rank and your character is Jounin meaning he should be about B rank. The fact that you could detect all his movements means you must have a chakra sensing ability of Kage rank or higher if you could detect him when he specifically wrote he was hidden. It would be acceptable if you said you heard something or you thought you saw something but saying his stealth was no match for your senses is insulting and godmod. And to answer your question about having an academy, Oto doesn't need one cause all it's shinobi are genin or higher meaning they already know the basics, I have yet to find a single "academy student" ranked profile.)
Danzo made another set of handsigns and began to solidify the earth that was once humid. He was planning on cracking the earth whole, or even crushing the enemy with the large slabs of rock he was planning to use. His timing however, was off. Xzaro suddenly appeared out of seemingly nowhere and informed Danzo of the information. He reached his senses and cancelled all forms of attack. "Investigate all you want, my Anbu will keep a close eye on you Flame ninja while I'm gone." With that, Danzo started towards the Valley of the End, expecting Xzaro to accompany him or guard him in case this was an ambush.ExitThe Hard-headed Overconfident Solid Wall Earth-Styled Otokage
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 7:29 pm
Toshi was holding back laughter as Toska openly exposed the ninja that had just arrived a minute ago. It was sad but true. A ninja's stealth was one of the most vital areas of a ninja's skill. It was one of the true factors that defined a ninja no matter what rank they were. To add to it, these shinobi didn't even have an academy. "What a shame. These guys don't even have an academy for the most basic of skills. Maybe the jounin and kage are elected from a random bunch of genin and their village structure just forms along from there." Toshi snickered. A village with no academy explained a lot of things at the moment, including why one of their own would reveal themselves to the open so foolishly. As the Otokage went on his way Toshi shake his head with laughter. "I guess the Otokage knows how to choose his fights. Just a moment ago he 'claimed' he would kill them regardless but instead he turned out just as the rest of his village had made him out to be. " He grinned. "Well Atraeyu, Toska's right. I think we've come to find what we've been looking for." ((Nope. There are no letter ranks in the manga, anime, nor this guild except missing-nin. So that little part is canceled. Second even the dumbest of shinobi can hear someone call out to their Otokage especially from where he is standing. Last let's be adults here and not cry about trivial things. If you have a problem p.m me let's not start up excess ooc in these threads.))
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 3:22 pm
(No, I can delete these posts afterwards and so I choose to post it where everyone can see. If YOU have a problem then PM ME about it.
It's true that he shouted, revealing his identity, but the fact you detected him when he specifically wrote that he was hidden BEFORE he shouted meant his sneak skills are either lower than B rank or your chakra seeking abilities are Kage ranked, and because S ranks are already skilled in basic things such as sneaking then it's obvious that you godmodded when you wrote you could detect him.
Second, there ARE ranks in the anime and manga. If that were not true then that would mean that a genin would be capable of killing kages, or a jounin such as yourself could detect a Kage ranked character without like I said, having an extraordinary high ranked chakra seeking ability.
Third, you shouldn't even be able to tell if we have an academy or not since you aren't even in the village yet. The gates like stated in the first post, are the tallest things in the village and so the trees shouldn't even be able to give you a good sight of the village's entrance or the village as a whole even. Which by the way, academies have never been located near the gate in the anime, manga, or in this village if I had posted one so that is metaplaying.
So to sum it all up, you are godmodding, metaplaying, controlling another character's actions and this all shows your roleplaying needs work. If you want I can even post this in the roleplaying forums on gaia and expert RPers can tell you themselves. Xzaro and I will act as if these offences never happend and you simply stayed quiet as we quickly left if that is what Xzaro will do. Anymore OOC after this point will be deleted by me.)
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 4:03 pm
Xzaro | Datenshi 堕天使 | Kage 影 "There are still shadows in the brightest of lights."“You have to have the darkness for the dawn to come. I have long since closed my eyes. My only goal is in that darkness. Xzaro quickly appeared behind the Otokage, not because he cared but because the Otokage would owe Xzaro money for the mission he took. Besides, Xzaro had to be there when the Otokage discussed with the Hokage in case anything was decided without the council's aproval. He left in the same manner he entered, quickly and silently. Although the lower leveled shinobi could see him, they would fail to hear Xzaro unless they had superhuman hearing. He left, pitying and ignoring what the shinobi said. If they were leaving in such a hurry that meant they were afraid, and according to the words they spoke insulting the village it was obvious they were either jealous or they were overconfident in the same way Danzo was.
At least the Otokage could back up his words though.Exit to the Valley of the End. Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.”
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