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Lovova

PostPosted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:26 pm


Innocent
By Lovova

Summary: Sadie Hawking is stunned to find out that Colin Baker, the man who murdered and raped her young sister Jennifer, was just declared innocent in the court of law due to lack of physical evidence. Furious and still heavily grieved by the death of her sister, Sadie does something she never thought she could do: after weeks of mad, extensive planning, she kidnaps her sisters murderer, with every intention of making him suffer twice as much as Jennifer did.

With parents too focused on their grief to notice her absence, and having the convenient sole knowledge of an underground bomb shelter long abandoned, things are going well for Sadie; Colin is more or less a manageable captive, she's found a surprising amount of fun in varying methods of torture, and though she's well aware she's gone completely mad, she feels the results of her madness are fully justified under the circumstances.

Yes, everything's fine...until the police knock on the door one day, happy to tell her they caught the real killer....
PostPosted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:31 pm


Authors Note


Hello, fellow character abuse fans, and congratulations! Right now, you are the sole viewers of one of my many plot ideas, 'Innocent'! Please feel free to make any sort of comment or critique directly on this thread, as I'd love to hear it. Hopefully you all will enjoy reading this as much as I do writing it ^_^

Each chapter will be put up as soon as it is completed. Chapter One shall be up within the next couple of days. Enjoy!

Lovova


Charlie_The_Bad

PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:58 pm


I like the story idea so far. I can't really say more until I see Chapter 1, so get it up here when it's done.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:45 am


So, do the police happen closer to the beginning, or the end?

Or is it like "arc 1: Sadie tortures a guy in a bomb shelter. Arc 2: Sadie deals with the police."

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